Awww bless Molly being so teary at seeing her grandson go off to college :D
"Oh, magic was definitely involved somehow," I agree. "Given how... enchanting it was to meet you. You had to have done something to make me want to stick with you for as long as I have. Not many people can do that."
I just squeed because you used the word enchanting in that sentence haha.
Louis's goodbye was sad and the almost proposal was so sweet.
I hope they stay together forever.
I'm so sad that this story has ended, I've loved it so much and you came up with such a fantastically brilliant idea, you wrote it beautifully and you filled it all with such emotion and incredible backstories. I can't wait to read the sequel. Report Review
Aww it's the three of them together, and they are definately Lucy's boys.
They're so cute, they'll be best friends forever I can tell :D
Ah so that's how Ciaran recognised the name!
Go away Ellis! Stay away from Louis! Don't even think about saying stuff like that to Ciaran.
I'm glad Ciaran punched him!
Oh does Victoire not like Teddy's other Metamorph friend? Jealousy perhaps?
I'm loving all of the little back stories coming out in this chapter, like with George and Logan.
And of course Louis and Ciaran at the end.
I can't believe there's only one chapter left! :-( Sad times! Report Review
Oh Ciaran, him and Louis are so amazing together! :D
I wonder what the deal is between Louis and Logan?
Ahhh Hugo and Skander are there! They're so cute! and so little!
So Hugo is turning his friends into theives? Oh Hugo! And he has a weakness for accents! It's so Hugo! :D
Ciaran and Hugo together are funny :D Taking Kyles book and making up lies hehe.
Aww Logan calls Louis pup, hehe. I love all of his names for everyone, they're very ... inventive :D
I love all of the presents that Ciaran got in this chapter, and it's great that he can see them :D
A Prequel? Have I read that one yet? Have you put it up? Report Review
It's good that he'll still be able to do the tests like he normally would have.
There's a VIP room in Hogwarts? Awesome!!
I really love how all of Louis's family love Ciaran, although how could you hate him? He's awesome!
oh poor Ciaran getting cornered by Rose, I am loving it so much that he can see things, although not technically, but can still see.
Ciaran is the best at giving out advice, which is good because he hates people. :D
I love that Kyle is teaching Ciaran, he's a good friend. And I loved the sentence that he got him to write out.
Yay!!! Luka and Kyle are back in love! I hope that Lukas mum comes around though.
Ahh I'm so close to thend end :-( Report Review
Awww he woke up Louis to see the sunrise, they're so cute! I love those glasses so much.
Louis is going to art school? Oh Dom! I know you were only looking out for your brother and had his best interests at heart. He should definately take it though, if love is meant to be then it's meant to be. Although it totally better be them together forever or I'll cry again. :D
Yay! Ciaran finally said that he loved Louis! :D
You should write the story about Adrien Geroux! Although any idea you ever have I want you to write because I love your writing so much! :D
I did have a merry Christmas thank you :p
Hehe I love how happy this story is making me :D Although I'm sad that it'll be over soon :-( Report Review
I'm getting as impatient as Ciaran about this suprise!
Ciaran gets to go Hogsmeade, get his suprise and not have to do revision with Abby, it's a win win situation right there :p
What's in Hogsmeade though? Wait apparation? Where are they going? Oooo it's so exciting!
Haha Louis is George's second favourite nephew :D I think Hugo might be in my top favourites too.
What's George made? I'm so excited!!
Omg omg omg!! he can see stuff! Omg I cried, I cried in happiness for him!
That is so much better then a cane, George is a genius! I love him! and Louis for coming up with the idea!
I can't wait for him to see what Lucy and Jack look like :D
That is seriously amazing!
Oh wow, I didn't even think about him not being able to read or write, why didn't I think of that?
I seriously loved this chapter, I think it's my favourite chapter out of the whole story. I don't think words can describe how happy I am right now! Report Review
Ahh it's the chapter! hehehe :D
This has been a good date for them both in the room of requirement :D I'm so glad that they're happy together, and so in love and had that wonderful date. I really liked how Louis told Ciaran to feel not see. Louis is so awesome for him. The best boyfriend he could ever have.
I wonder what the suprise is? Although that cane would be so cool!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D I'm so happy for them! Report Review
What? What's going on between Louis and Ciaran? What did he say? Haha I'm so impatient.
Ah it's got to be about Louis's ex.
Oh so that was the question? :D I suppose nearly a year was too long for Louis haha.
Aww poor Louis, doing all of that to distract himself. Dom and Vic are definately the best siblings :D Louis has a good family.
I'm glad that Ciaran made Louis talk about it, now they can get passed it and be all loved up :D
Yay! I can't wait for Louis to make it up to Ciaran on Friday!
Ooo the room of requirement :D I love that room!
I always want to hug Louis! :D And I hope that you had a good birthday. I do hate Ellis, so much! Report Review
Oh Ciaran please open up to someone :-(
Please don't break them up, don't tell Louis it's over :-(
I don't want him being so unhappy, :-( I want to make everything better for him and make his sadness go away.
Aww poor Ciaran and Luka both being so broken together but not saying anything to each other. There's so much sadness in this chapter *cries*
Why? Why did Louis have to say that and make me even sadder, I hope happiness happens real soon, because this is so sad :-(
And Jack isn't talking to him, it's just getting worse and worse :-(
I hate you Daniel Scott! You need to leave Ciaran alone! If I was in the story I would protect you from him Ciaran. Yes you get him Ciaran!
Oh no Louis is there and I don't want them to argue,
YAY! They kissed I'm so happy! I'm glad that Louis talked some sense into him!
I'm so glad that they didn't break up and I really hope that Kyle gets back with Luka, they need to be happy too Report Review
Oh Louis, being the voice of reason. It's good that they're waiting so they're both ready. Go Louis being sensible!
Aww he's playing the piano, and his playing so Louis can hear him. They're so cute!! All of these feelings of cuteness and love, just makes me so happy I could burst from all of the happiness I feel right now!
And his singing!! I'm actually dancing in happiness! This is so cute!!! I can't stop smiling.
What? Ciaran let himself lose the game? He must really like Louis if he done that.
:O OH my! Louis's grandma caught him! That's hilarious! Although what she's said isn't, how dare she say that about Ciaran's condition holding Louis back :-( Go Louis for sticking up for Ciaran and their relationship.
And he loves him! oh my god he loves him! :D
And Ciaran counted how many seconds it took for Louis to come back into the room, aww he's so cute. I want to hug him, I want to hug both of them.
Oh Ciaran don't be quiet, don't shut him out :-(
NO! NO you can't end the chapter right there! Don't break my heart like that :-( Report Review
I really love that Ciaran loves to sleep in late, it's like me :D
I wish that there was a way to get his sight back too :-( Maybe one day there can be a magical cure?
I'm glad that his Grandma trusts them, I think his mother is just worried as she has been for all of his life.
I hope it all goes well meeting Louis's grandma and telling her about their relationship, I hope she can see past the rivalry.
I love that the name game is still going on, I wonder who will cave first? Not counting sleep talking of course.
I love these lines
"Strangely enough, my track record when it comes to dating is not that good."
"It is strange, considering you do so well in almost everything else," I smirk.
Awww I really hope that Louis makes the Eiffel Tower romantic for Ciaran, I want him to have the romance :D
I really love how Louis is making Ciaran imagine things in his mind, and that he won't let Ciaran be down about it all.
AH They kissed!!! SO happy right now!! AHHH!
Best chapter ever! Definately worth the wait my lovely! :D I'm so happy right now! Report Review
Ciaran's parents are definately the best parents in the world, especially his dad hehe.
I love his gift to Hugo and how Ciaran's mum thinks that Hugo is a sweet, little boy. It's all part of that poster child image :D
Poor Ciaran bumping into the door, I hope the bruise isn't too bad, but I bet that Louis will be more then happy to kiss it better :p
Seriously, Ciaran's parents are so funny and amazing! They are definately awesome!
And his cousin is definately awesome, he's the best cousin in the world bumping them to first class, and having his friend pick them up :D
Uhoh everyone is there, that's definately going to interrupt Louis and Ciaran's plans now.
Haha I'm glad that Ciaran got revenge on Jay and shoved him into the pool :D Brilliant bit of pretend slipping there.
Haha they had a bet? brilliant! He didn't have to worry about it then :D Good that they've accepted it :D
Oh Ciaran, planning his life with Sean Craft haha, poor Louis :p
At least they got some money :D
Brilliant chapter, I'm so happy that Louis met Ciarans family :D
I'm so excited by the next chapter now!! Report Review
I don't know why I thought that was Louis who wrapped his arms around Ciaran when Louis was already there, but it's great that he knew it was Hugo.
Aww little Hugo having a problem, of course it has to be a guy, I don't think I can ever imagine him being with a girl now becase of your stories :p
No! I don't want Kyle and Luka to split up :-(
Yay! Louis and Ciaran are going to France! :D
I love the fact that both Ciarans and Louis's nans have a rivalry, I hope the Louis/Ciaran relationship can put a stop to it :D
I love all of the drama so you should keep it all coming! Report Review
That's a good game to make Jack uncomfortable, although I want him to kiss Ciaran as badly as Ciaran wants it to happen! :D
"You know you're really comfortable grey jacket that you love so much because it's nice and soft and keeps you warm?" he asks.
"Yeah," I nod slowly.
"Well, I couldn't find it, so I'm wearing your other one, which is exactly the same only in blue."
I just really chuckled at those lines :D Oh Louis.
I really like how they're punishing each other, it's really fun :D
Kyle and Luka are still fighting? I hope it gets sorted out soon :-(
Ciaran should totally write a book! I think he'll be really famous one day :D
Yes Ciaran you are right, I don't like Louis for not kissing you :D He is hurting us by not kissing you.
Oh Louis and Ciaran, just when I think I can't love them anymore they get all cute again and all this extra love for them piles on top of the love I already have until it's just one big cloud of love. (That's a very weird way to describe something but forgive me :D I'm full of love) Report Review
Awww Jack and Lucy are being cute and fallen asleep together :D
Jack walking into the bathroom and not caring that Ciaran was in the shower was funny, especially when he was just continuing to talk.
I love how Jack and Louis like to annoy each other, it's great.
So Louis wants to open up to Ciaran? I'm glad, I really want to know what he has to tell him.
Oh my he's carrying him! I love Louis! He's definately good for Ciaran :D
I really like how Ciaran is getting paranoid about what other people think and say, it's good to see that he's affected by that when he tells other people to not care what people think.
These small kisses are so cute, I can't wait for the proper kiss, but I want to know what Louis's plan is for all of that.
Yay! Louis showed him his art! And him telling Ciaran to imagine them was the cutest thing ever. I love them so much! Report Review
Ahh they're going on their date! :D It's going to be so cute and I'm going to explode with love and happiness for how cute they're going to be! :D
I am liking the sound of Ciaran in his outift, especially the waistcoat and cufflinks, gotta love a guy who can dress smart.
Louis and Ciaran are already being cute with him telling Ciaran about the miracle that is Ciaran.
Ahh he's related to the restaurant owner, that's so great! :D I'm glad, because that means he can get in :D
Ahhh I love Ciaran's reason for not wearing the Armani suit, I think Louis would have definately loved it.
Oh no, it's so sad about how Ciaran lost his sight through Meningitis. My niece had that when she was about two, thankfully she recovered fully, but we had to teach her how to walk and talk again. It was terrifying so I can imagine what his parents went through.
I'm glad that Jay helped Ciaran speak again.
Yay! They're officially boyfriend and boyfriend! :D
Off to read the next chapter :D Report Review
I clicked on this story because I thought it looked really interesting and unique. I have never read about a blind person at Hogwarts before. I think that it's interesting that Ciaran has a guide around Hogwarts. At first I thought, no, he wouldn't have one because blind people are super independent and may not want to rely on anyone, but then when I really thought about it i guess Hogwarts is really scary wit all the changing stair cases and stuff, so it would make sense that he has a guide.
Overall I think that this was a really interesting story and really has great potential, and it's great that it's already finished because it makes me want to read on! :)
-Scott Report Review
Ciaran is so cute being worried :D
Yay! He asked him out! They're so cute! I know I mention it a lot but they really are, and they make me so happy.
I really want Jack and Lucy to get back together, I don't want them to be unhappy.
But I'm so glad that Ciaran has talked some sense into Jack and he's going to tell Lucy how he feels and take no for an answer!
I must admit that my favourite part was Jack and Ciaran talking about the Armani outfit and Ciarans hotness.
I really love Jack and Ciaran's friendship they're so funny together :D Report Review
I like the dream at the beginning, although I did think for a moment that Ciaran had regained his eyesight and I got really excited for him! Until I realised that it was a dream :D
I loved the descriptions of them sleeping on the sofa, they're so made for each other.
Louis said Ciaran's name in his sleep! I'm literally bursting with so much cuteness and love for them right now.
Yes!! Jack and Lucy hooked up! I'm so happy!
But, no. Why is Jack upset? How can you have Lucy and Jack not speaking?
No! Don't make me angry at Louis for upsetting Ciaran with that other guy! He best only be trying to make him jealous.
Wait he is, phew, Louis is being especially sneaky right about now! :D
Another wonderfully written chapter! I can't wait to read more, which should hopefully be in a few hours :D I can't wait! Report Review
I see what you mean about Hugo being different to other Hugos that are out there. Stealing?! I must say that I already love him! :D
I love that Ciaran and Harry are the only ones able to catch Hugo pick pocketing.
Hugo is both Ciaran and mines new favourite person, he is so cool!
So Jacks family is famous? He is so cute when he is embarassed :D
Louis and Ciaran dancing is so cute! I love how cute everything is in this story and how it makes me feel so fluffy and warm inside and full of love! I could just hug them both so much :D
Gah!! how could you do that to me? They almost kissed! Gah!! I'm going to have to cry now. :-(
You're a brilliant evil mastermind :D Off to read the next chapter! :D Report Review
I am so glad that Louis didn't get into too much trouble :D
Speaking of Louis he is very sneaky managing to get Ciarans home number and phoning him up, he was very cute!
I love that Ciaran's dad was eavesdropping though, total parent thing to do right there. His parents are so awesome!
As are all of his presents for christmas! Louis is so awesome for writing the tag in Braille! Best person ever right there!
I love this chapter! I love your story and writing and I can't believe I haven't read this chapter until now! I need to read the sequel so badly but I need to know what happens here first.
Anyways brilliant as always! :D Report Review
FOURTH WALL FOURTH WALL FOURTH WALL.
oh my god, NO THE READERS DO NOT LIKE YOU, LOUIS, BECAUSE YOU WILL NOT KISS CIARAN. Well, this reader doesn't, anyway.
Anyway, this was a beautifully fillery chapter with lots of fluff and cuteness and n'aww they are so cute! You've made a couple of spelling errors and used one word instead of another (and I only noticed because whoa, a mistake in Sam's work? Surely not!
The idea that Ciaran will write a book about himself though... wow. I think it should be called something like... Enchanted :P
Brilliant chapter, as always! Love it to pieces, Sammy!Author's Response: No, the readers don't like Louis. He's too mean, not kissing him. The horror! :P
Haha. Maybe it will be. ;)
Thank you so much for leaving a review, Jenny!
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Aw Sammy! it's a little fillery, but you know I love all of Ciaran and Lucy and Jack and Louis :) I hope Jack and Lucy are getting better together, don't make them break up! Jack's picnic sounds awesome (well done Key), and hopefully theywon't fall out and hopefully it'll be in the missing moments, yes yes? :D
I also want to know more about Ellis, but, like Ciaran, I'll suppose I'll have to wait! Louis 'showing' Ciaran his paintings was super cute as well, oh asdfghjkl feeels, you are meean, Sam!
Love Enchanted, as always! (and I didn't notice any Americanisms :P)Author's Response: Haha. Yes, the picnic will be in the missing moments collection. Like I could ever miss out a moment between Lucy and Jack. :D
Thank you for reviewing, Jenny!
Sam. :) Report Review
OH MY GOD THEY'RE GOING OUT I LOVE YOU SAM I LOVE YOU
That was quite possibly the cutest chapter in the history of fluff. It was adorable. I loved the bit in the restaurant- not just the cuteness- the extra bits about Ciaran's family, it's wonderful! I love all the extra cute stuff, and I loved that Jay named his restaurant after his daughter. D'aw.
and I'm hoping Lucy and Jack are all betterer now as well!
AND CIARAN AND LOUIS OMG!
But hearing Ciaran's story was sad, like, heart wrenching, I can't imagine a three year old having to try to deal with that, it's awful :( You're cruel, you are.
Other than that, well, it was brilliant, like always. The only quibble I have is that you spelt honour the American way, and you are BRITISH.
Love it! Report Review
SAM THEY HAVE TO STAY TOGETHER AND GET MARRIED. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I DON'T THINK I COULD HANDLE IT IF LOUIS AND CIARAN BROKE UP. I was so sad that this story was going to end but then I saw that there's going to be a sequel and it made it a little better. I just LOVE this story! Your characters are fabulous, and so rich and complex, and I really learned a lot from reading them! I can't wait for Don't Let Me Go! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: I WANT THEM TO AS WELL, BUT THINGS HAPPEN. I GUESS WE'LL HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE. ;(
I'm not sure I could handle it either...
Thank you so much for loving Louis and Ciaran and this story. I've loved every single one of your reviews, Cassie!
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