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Review #1, by Toni Sustained

25th May 2016:
I am really enjoying your story. Cannot wait for the next instalment! Really well written.

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Review #2, by HPlover Sustained

24th April 2016:
Aww Frank and Alice! This was an amazing chapter as always, but I'm so sad knowing none of these characters get a happy ending in the end

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Review #3, by klb1234 Fulfilled

29th December 2015:
Devine characterisation. I am loving this story, keep it up.

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Review #4, by hedwig Fulfilled

12th November 2015:
This is probably my favorite Lilly/James story. It's so adorable!

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Review #5, by HPlover Distracted

21st June 2015:
I just found this story and absolutely love it! I hope you update soon :)

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Review #6, by AlexFan Distracted

15th May 2015:
It has been such a long time since you last updated this story and I was so excited to read the new chapter! I haven't read a lot of James/Lily in a while so the fluff had me grinning from ear to ear.

I loved how happy James' mum was to see Lily and how embarrassed James was. James' mum is such a warm person and honestly I wouldn't have expected anything less of her when she greeted Lily. And I liked how Lily took everything in stride, she's meeting all of these relatives all at once and she manages to handle it so well (the hilarious part is how everyone has heard of Lily before she and James even started dating).

I was so close to squealing every time James mentioned how he wanted to marry Lily and have her permanently join the Potter family and I just, the hardcore shipper in me comes out during times like this.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #7, by twitchy_pigeons Distracted

9th March 2015:
Nineteen years?!?!? Have we suddenly skipped ahead two years? And still no proposal?! confused.

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Review #8, by twitchy_pigeons Shipwrecked

9th March 2015:
I adore the end of this chapter.

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Review #9, by twitchy_pigeons Fastened

9th March 2015:
"Do you think this is destiny telling us we're meant to be deer?"

I did not see the last half of that sentence coming. Laughing and laughing and laughing my petunia off right now lol.

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Review #10, by twitchy_pigeons Frozen

9th March 2015:
As promised, I'm here reading 'Stuck,' listening to Debussy (because you kept mentioning it and I got curious) at eleven at night because you have me stuck (heh, get it? stuck? yeah...) on your story. I'm glad they got it sorted so quickly - I absolutely despise when authors prolong things like that out of pure character stubbornness. Brava! 10/10

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Review #11, by Keanna Distracted

1st March 2015:
Gah please keep posting I read all 10 chapters today
and I need more :3

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Review #12, by Anon Distracted

20th February 2015:
This is simply fabulous, and makes me fall for James!! :)

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Review #13, by equuleus Unshakable

19th November 2014:
No. No. No. I just started reading this story and I NEED more. Please?

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Review #14, by Jaya Unshakable

29th October 2014:

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Review #15, by guest Unshakable

4th February 2014:
I really, really, really love this story! I hope you update soon!

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Review #16, by AlexFan Unshakable

30th December 2013:
Hello there, I'm here for the 12 Days of Reviewing!

I love how James is so worried about Lily and his friends. He should be right to worry as well because it isn't safe out there and who knows what could happen. I especially loved how he wouldn't abandon Remus in his time of need even though he's scared out of his mind. It's such a James thing to do.

That talk that James had with Lily after that Charm lesson though put such a smile on my face because Lily was so uncomfortable and insecure. I love how James assured her that he liked Lily for who she was and that he didn't want her to rush into anything that she wasn't comfortable with.

I like how you addressed the teenage hormones as it is overlooked in fanfiction. Plus, it's good to see something where James is really really considerate of Lily. I always love seeing that side of James.

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Review #17, by Hope's Mom Unshakable

7th December 2013:
As sad as this chapter was at the beginning the end was so sweet. I really like your James!

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Review #18, by guest Shipwrecked

29th November 2013:
I can't believe how great of a writer you are! Keep it up and update soon!!

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Review #19, by Hope's Mom Shipwrecked

27th September 2013:
James, Lily, Remus and Sirius are having to face a grim future much sooner than they want. James is maturing and will be ready. He and Lily are very sweet together. Thank you for the new chapter.

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Review #20, by AlexFan Shipwrecked

22nd September 2013:
This is mostly just going to be me fangirling all over the place because AHH! James is thinking about proposing to Lily and I can't handle this!

I need to know when he's going to propose! I'm looking forward to the part where he decides to suck it up and ask Lily to marry him (is that part going to be soon or is it still a long way off?)

I don't know how you manage to make a situation horrible and then turn it into fluff. I honestly don't but you made it work so I bow down to you for that ability.

The ending though, I felt like being the awkward third wheel in that room and just giving James and Lily and giant hug because those two are so gosh darn cute that my shipper heart can't handle it.

So anyway, I'm so happy that you got a new chapter of this story up because I really love it and I was missing it a whole lot!

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Review #21, by Kristina1990 Halted

8th January 2013:
*lol* Lily and James are really cute together. She has the pants on in this relationship ^^. And who cares about a divination assignment anyway?

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Review #22, by adasdakjdas Halted

7th January 2013:
i really enjoy reading your story. Lovely chapter hope you update soon :)

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Review #23, by patronus_charm Fastened

7th January 2013:
Hey I'm back again!

You said that you were more comfortable writing as a female and I know how you feel as writing as a male can be tricky. However I think you've captured James's thoughts brilliantly and I enjoy the insight into his mind, as we always know what Lily's thinking so it's nice to the role reversal. He's really funny as well especially the part when he says it's destiny that they're meant to deers.

I like how you've shown how much Lily has changed the arrogant bully James into someone's who gets nervous and is now hardworking. I think that's what some people miss so it's great that you added it in.

As it was the date chapter I can understand why the other Marauders didn't have much coverage however try and include them in the future as they're often the best parts in the stories.

The Corner - I certainly didn't predict that, I think it was a nice inclusion especially the 10 facts as it was a really sweet detail.

I think you have loads of description which is great as you can really imagine the scene unfolding before your own eyes. I think you've hit the right amount of fluff for a date scene and made it believable. I think the main reason why it's so believable is the fact that Lily's not pathetic but strong so she's more likeable as a result.

Feel free to re-request any time as this story is a really enjoyable read :)

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Review #24, by patronus_charm Immobile

7th January 2013:
Hey it's me again! I'm so glad you found my review insightful and I'm happy to help again:D

Though I thought Lily was weak in the previous chapters I'm glad she's got her personality back her as she was rather funny. Her little competition between her and James was also adorable to read. Well any Jilly interaction is!

You worried that the couple may be cliched but I think you've put Lily into quite a dominant role by her advances on James and you don't see that in many chapters. Also the fact her and Sirius aren't the best of friends at the moment makes it different to most. Just keep on being original really so it makes a more interesting read to the reader.

I would try and not read many other Jilly stories because if I read a story similar to mine I tend to copy some plot ideas from that, that way you avoid being cliched.

I think the fluff was toned down in this chapter despite them being together. I mean it's funny seeing James being love sick over her but after a while it gets boring so you made a good choice in turning it down:)

James and Sirius's bromance is so sweet and any interaction between them is always great! One tiny thing is that I would possibly like to see more of Remus and even Peter, as they are interesting characters :)

Overall I think it's going great and as I have time I'll do the next one to!

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Review #25, by patronus_charm Frozen

5th January 2013:
Hi it's patronus_charm with your review!

You asked if there was too much fluff but I love fluff and there can never be too much so I'm probably not the best person to ask!

Even though I haven't read the first in the series I still managed to get the storyline which is really good for other people who may just want to start reading with this one first!

I found you could really connect with James and he was really believable. The way he carved their initals into the tree was adorable and then you find out that they aren't together any more! You can really sympathise with his problem the girl of his dreams or protecting one of his best friends. Luckily he has good friends who don't mind sharing their secret!

The other characters are really good as well especially Sirius his reaction to 'we need to talk'! It was a little cliche with whole are they or aren't they going to get back together. However I feel cliche shouldn't be underrated as some of the best stories I've read are full of cliches.

A couple of pointers now, a noticed a few spelling errors so just rereading it should get rid of those :) You don't want to make Lily too weak as she is a stong character she was in the Order of the Phoenix after all! So remember though it is a fluff story don't forget to give her some strong traits. However I'm reading her in post-break up mode so she may have them already as I haven't read the other book I don't know.

Overall I really enjoyed reading it especially as it was in diary form which was unusual. Feel free to re-request again!

Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hi there :) First off, thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate you taking the time.

I'm glad to hear you like fluff and it sounds like you don't feeling I was over-fluffing things- which is excellent!

I'm glad that you feel that way about the storyline and that it can be picked up even without reading the 1st story.

I'm incredibly happy to hear you believe James- like I wrote in my request, that is one of my biggest areas of insecurity in this story just because I feel WAY more comfortable writing from a girl's perspective...for obvious reasons!

haha I'm so happy you likes Sirius. I understand the cliché you're spotting there and that can definitely be addressed. thanks for the heads up! and also thanks for the similar notice of the spelling errors! I knew there were bound to be one or two...or seventeen in there!

Thanks again so much for doing this! I'm coming back for another review most definitely- your advice is very insightful.

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