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Review #1, by CypressQueen Devastation In All Forms

15th May 2012:
Hi,

It's me again. I really enjoyed this chapter and I laughed so hard when I read about Snape and McGonagall.

I can't wait until the next chapter is written.
CypressQueen

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Review #2, by CypressQueen The Beginning Of A Serious Problem

29th April 2012:
Hi WildCat,
I really enjoyed this story and I was laughing the entire way throughout it. I loved how Hermione fell in love with Harry and kept calling him "Her Harry-Warry". It was just so out of character for him.

I found it a bit hard to read as there wasn't any spaces between the lines. Also, I found a couple of spelling mistakes. One of these is - "it a rest” Ron [moan] “you’ve been at Harry all day.” Instead of moan it should be moaned.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
CypressQueen

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