I could feel my heart pounding.
It was sad.
I'm crying. Report Review
This is by far the most beautiful piece of fan fiction i have come across was choking down my tears half way through the story... kudos to you..and Congratulations on The Dobby!! Report Review
I can hardly see the screen through my
tears. Excellent wielding of emotion, I
love Ginny realizing that she can still be
there for her granddaughter. One small
annoyance- find a better word than
luscious because the connotation is not
what you're going for. Report Review
Oh my gosh! I cried. Best HP fanfiction ever! Report Review
Awful.Just Awful. This is by far the worst story I have read . I am sorry to be the one to tell you but hang up your quill and do us all a favor and NEVER write again. Report Review
Just started reading fanfic last week and this is by far the best so far. Love the brevity and emotion. Hope you write more. Report Review
Beautifully written, it made me cry. of course you dont need me to tell you this when you won a dobby!! amazing, i would love it if you made more like this. Report Review
That was incredible. There are tears running down my face. The people around me in the library are staring. Report Review
It was beautifully written, but so sad! I started crying about halfway through; how did you think of all this? I'm glad you won the award, because if you put so much energy into writing something so beautifully sad, maybe you can do the same thing with something happy. I believe in you! Use your powers for good! Report Review
Amazing, I almost cried. Report Review
that was amazing, i can see why you got the dobby - it was really touching Report Review
This is such a good story! There are literally tears
streaming down my face right now. It definitely
deserves the Dobby :) Report Review
Just amazing! It was so heartfelt and painful! Brilliantly written. Dobby Award well deserved :) Report Review
Amazing Story, very well written, only one thing that bugged me was the use of the word "mom". But that's just because I am British ;)
Awesome! Report Review
This is the best fanfic I have ever read! Truly amazing! The way you captured every moment and detail! You had me on the edge of my chair as well as in a fit of tears! Report Review
I never thought Ginny would get so mature, well, I knew she would really, but I just couldn't imagine it, not like that anyway... I don't know what it's like, but I know it must hurt, you depicted everything, all the emotions just so well, did you lose someone to cancer? (if you find that to personal, never mind, it just seems that you know exactly how it must feel) Report Review
I'll be honest, I didn't feel much emotion until near the end. Then, I almost cried. The ending feels like you should write a sequel, perhaps? Report Review
I'm stunned. Fantastic job :) Report Review
WOW! That was heart wrenching! You should think about a career in writing. :) Report Review
I think I'm going to cry. This was beautiful, this was well-written, this was such a well-thought out fanfiction. The emotion is so well-captured and the idea so unique, yet so mundane. Report Review
That was amazing! Made me cry! It was emotional and touching without being overly soppy and over the top. Well written and executed, thank you! Report Review
Having dealt with a loved one battling cancer, this story really got to me. It was sad, almost hard to read at times. It was painful to see Ginny losing her daughter in such a way. I liked how she had a special connection with Lily, and the way she described her growing up and becoming a woman and a mother was well-written adn heartfelt. It made the rest of the piece even sadder. I think you've managed to capture the emotion well.
The ending was very good, too. I could totally feel Ginny's strength and determination, that even though her daughter died, which is horrible, she realizes not all is lost and that her grandchild needs her as never before. Nicely conveyed.
Other than that, there were a few commas missing, but nothing major. Thanks for linking me to this. It was heartbreaking, but I'm glad I read it.
xoxo Liz Report Review
It is not easy to make me cry. I broke both my arms and didn't cry, but this filled my eyes with tears. This deals with the hardest part of life. Letting someone go. Stories like that are hard to write well, because most of the time the surviving characters overreact, or you don't get attached to the character who dies. In this story, the surviving characters react appropriately (almost too realistically), and you're immensely attached to the character who dies. This was a very good one-shot, and a very good way of describing what happens when something perfect goes bad, and you lose the thing you love most in the world because of it. Report Review
P.T.P for HC :)
This was a really touching story, at first I couldn't tell who's point of view it was from, I actually thought it was Harry's for a while, but I think I liked it even more when I found out it was Ginny's. She has always sort of been the sore spot in HP for me, she never really had that emotional level when JK wrote her, not enough for how she really was feeling in my opinion anyway. But you gave her that emotion and feeling and I was really glad. It was nice to see just how much love and kindness could come from her.
It's a rather sad story I must admit, the pain they must have gone through with Lily would have been terrible. But you depicted the whole thing really well. It's original, usually in stories it's all "Wizards can't get cancer" but you made it super believable, and not by using the usual methods either, by using magic. Which in my opinion showed that even a simple, seemingly harmless spell could ruin everything and change someone forever.
I really loved it, it was well written and made me actually picture myself there next to Ginny. Great Job.
~ Steph Report Review
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