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Review #1, by naflower05 It's hard to make sense

11th March 2013:
good chapter! I'm glad that they are talking and friends. What was that flash of green at the end? and what's gonna happen when Sirius and James come back? I guess I'll have to wait and see. Updater again soon please! =]

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Review #2, by CassiePotter It's hard to make sense

3rd March 2013:
I thought this was a really sweet chapter, and can't wait for the next one! I have a feeling Gisela isn't going to be ready for the Slytherins, who haven't gotten revenge yet! I'm a little nervous for her! 10/10
Cassie :)

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Review #3, by aquabluez17 It's hard to make sense

2nd March 2013:
aww haha the kiss :P

I really did like the way you handled it though Im a bit confused about Sirius now. Does he like Gisela?

Cuz if he did and Remus knew then I really dont think he would have kissed her...

Oh well i'll just wait to see what happens! great update =)

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Review #4, by CassiePotter Nothing is pure anymore

3rd February 2013:
This was a great chapter and I loved meeting Gisela's mother! I also liked how close they were, even if things were tense at first. You can tell how much they really love each other. I'm worried about Gisela's father though... He seems scary. And the scene with Lily and Gisela at the end was really sweet. I hope they can be friends! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I wanted Gisela to be close with her mother to kind of counteract the relationship she has with her father. While he was awful to his children, his wife was their to soothe them, which worked for them growing up, it's kind of a good cop, bad cop situation. Ah, he is scary, i don't like him that much at all!
I'm glad you liked it, i wasn't sure whether to keep Gisela being horrible etc but i figured that after spending time together every day in their dorm, Gisela would have softened slightly towards the red head, even if she hadn't wanted too and i think that scene shows it perfectly.

Thank you again for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #5, by naflower05  Can't help myself but count the flaws

2nd February 2013:
good chapters!! and some stuff between her and bas and her and remus! Awesome! Update again soon please!! =]

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, well I figured she didn't have enough problems and dilemmas in her life so I added those two into the equation! A new chapter should be up in the next week or so!

Thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #6, by naflower05 Sweet dreams and flying machines in pieces on the ground.

16th January 2013:
Oooh!! Great chapters!! I love all the drama that's going down! And I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that her mom is here. Update again soon, you can't just leave it there!! =]

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it still! Well, the next chapter is already written so it should be up in a few days, depending on the queue.

Thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #7, by CassiePotter Sweet dreams and flying machines in pieces on the ground.

15th January 2013:
Oh my gosh. This chapter was brilliant! I loved the scene with Evan! He's such an awesome, dark character, but he has insercurities of his own that make him human. I don't want to feel bad for him but I do! And I can't wait to meet Gisela's mother! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Well, i have a secret place in my heart for Evan so i try and portray in a way that people know he is evil but still have a soft spot for him at the same time...i'm glad it seems to be working! The next chapter is already written so it should be up in a matter of days, depending on the queue!

Thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #8, by hph:) Sweet dreams and flying machines in pieces on the ground.

15th January 2013:
awww gisela!! poor thing! talk about a cliffhanger though, I wanna know what happens sooo bad! love the new banner too!:) really great chapter- you'd better not kelp me waiting for too long or I may go insane with anticipation! keep it up!xxx

Author's Response: I know, i'm not making life easy for her, that's for sure. Awww thank you. i'm glad you like it, i feel like the story needed a change. Haha, i won't, the next chapter is already written and i'm waiting for something else to be validated before i put it up in the queue.

Thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #9, by WildCat Past and present they don’t matter now

13th January 2013:
Hey,

I really like your story! It's really interesting! I actually have a story going about Regulus, it's called Dangerous Existence! I had a question about Sirius and Regulus! Since Sirius is older then Regulus and this is his last year, what year is Regulus in? Because Giselle said it was her last year, so does that mean Regulus is younger than her?

Anyway, update soon!

WildCat

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Oooh, i enjoy Regulus stories so i might check it out! Well, i have kind of guessed and put him as a year younger, so he is in sixth year in my story but i don't actually know for definite how much younger than Sirius he is but yes, Regulus is younger than Gisela.

Thank you for reviewing!


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Review #10, by CassiePotter Smeared black ink, your face is ashen and I'm barely listening.

9th January 2013:
I WANT TO KNOW WHO SHE RAN INTO! That was such an amazing ending! And I love all the baddies in this story! They're written perfectly! I also really love Remus's character :) he's really sweet. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: [INSERT EVIL LAUGH!] You will find out next chapter, it's waiting to be validated as we speak! Thank you so much, i couldn't resist the cliff hanger, there had to be at least one in this story!

That's so sweet, it feels amazing to be told great things so thank you again, i really appreciate it!

And i love Remus, i can't help but write him as the sweet, quiet one, he's just too cute!

Thank you for like the fifth time!

Vicki :)


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Review #11, by MidnightBlue_x Smeared black ink, your face is ashen and I'm barely listening.

6th January 2013:
I love this story so much. It's one of my absolute favourite Sirius/OC's at the moment (probably of like, ever, too). I really like the character of Gisela, she seems so real to me. Can't wait to see more!

x Ely

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot! I feel like doing a little dance now, ha! I'm glad she seems real, that was my one intention in this story so i'm happy she's turned out that way!

Again, thank you so much and keep reading!

Vicki :)


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Review #12, by hph:) Smeared black ink, your face is ashen and I'm barely listening.

5th January 2013:
yay update!!!:) really enjoyed this chapter as per usual!!! I can't believe you left it like that!no. anyway keep it up and I will be Reading avidly, from perhaps your only harry potter AND birdy fan x

Author's Response: I'm getting better at updating now ha! I'm glad you enjoyed it and haha, well i had to finish it quickly so it wasn't planned as cliffhanger originally but i think it works! Thank you and i will! Yes, i think you may be the only fan of both, which means you definitely hold the top spot of favourite reviewer :)

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Review #13, by chloe Smeared black ink, your face is ashen and I'm barely listening.

5th January 2013:
This is really good!! You should write some more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And i most definitely plan too! :) Thank you for reading!

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Review #14, by hph:) And if your homesick, give me your hand and i'll hold it.

1st January 2013:
hey:) loving your story so far- it's on my favourites bar on my computer:) this is such an interesting concept and I really enjoyed it! funny story right-- so I was thinking, hmm just a game, hmm, cool name but I definatly recognize it from somewhere, then I remembered, it was from one of my favourites songs! so then I thought, hmmm it was on a hunger games thing do would they know it?? there might be another song of the same name, or just a coincidence... then I read the chapter names again and I was like oh, hehee!! anyway, really loving the story and I really can't wait to see gisela meet her twin again, keep it up!!:)

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much and really? Oh my, i can't stop smiling at that so thank you! No, you are completely right. It's probably my favourite song on the soundtrack plus I love Birdy anyway (my name on here is a lyric from Just A Game lol) so it just made sense to use it. And the rest of the chapter titles are from songs she's covered on her album! I didn't think anyone would figure it out!

I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for reviewing. The next chapter is waiting on validation so keep checking back!

Vicki :)


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Review #15, by naflower05 Please teach me gently how to breathe.

17th December 2012:
Great chapters! I wonder what the 'incident' was. I loved seeing Lola in this chapter, I can't wait for more of their interactions. Update again soon! =]

Author's Response: Thank you! The incident was meant to be nothing except a way to get Dumbledore to leave but i am now thinking i might use it as something. I had originally imagined it to have something to do Fluffy but i might use it now, you never know! Well, i thought i had to mention her sometime soon because she is so cute! I will, the next couple of chapters are ready and waiting for the queue to open on the 29th.

Thank you for reviewing and reading!


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Review #16, by CassiePotter Please teach me gently how to breathe.

15th December 2012:
I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved her dream, it was really well-written and I couldn't tell it was a dream until she woke up! I totally thought that she was in trouble and that everyone had surrounded her in the hospital! Evan and Lucius give me chills, and of course Voldemort does, too! I love how you write the darker characters, and can't wait to see how they play into future chapters! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you, it means a lot to hear that! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Evan and Lucius give me chills too but that's why i love writing for them! And Voldemort too, of course, i ind of enjoy writing for him now! Thank you again and the next chapter will be up after the 29th!



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Review #17, by CassiePotter I'm feeling sorrow but there's nothing I can do.

15th December 2012:
This chapter was fabulous! I love Gisela, and Lola is so cute! I'm happy that Gisela got back to Hogwarts, and am nervous to see what happens when the others see her again! Now I'm going to read the next chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! (and i'm so glad you're still reading it, seeing as it's been months so thank you for sticking with it!)

Lola is absolutely adorable, i love writing her. she is the little sister everyone wants! And Gisela will meet the others soon so keep reading!

Vicki :)


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Review #18, by red vines Please teach me gently how to breathe.

15th December 2012:
Love it!! Keep procrastinating your school work!! :p I can't wait to see how griffindor will react to their new housemate! And what happened on the third floor (hopefully the snakes didn't get Lola!!) Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And i have been doing believe me, the next chapters are ready for when the queue is back open!

The next chapter should reveal all (i can't actually remember seeing as i have been writing none stop at the moment!) And don't worry, Lola is fine. The third floor incident had nothing to do with any of them, it was more a reference to Fluffy, since i figured Fluffy might have been there since The Marauders were at Hogwarts and a way for Dumbledore to leave the Hospital Wing.

I will, as soon as the 29th arrives, expect many, many chapters! Thank you so much for reviewing!


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Review #19, by naflower05 See these people they lie and I dont know who to believe anymore

11th December 2012:
yay, finally!! =] this was so good! I hope we get to see more about how she was hurt! and I wonder what's gonna happen with her and bas now. update again soon please! =] ~

Author's Response: Haha, sorry to keep you waiting, the next few should be up without much of a break in between.

But thank you, i'm glad you liked it! Well the next chapter goes into a little bit but there will hopefully be a chapter where she will have a heart to heart with someone and then she'll discuss it more!

And as for her and Bas, it's going to be complicated from here on out.

But i will, hopefully! thank you so much for reading!


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Review #20, by CassiePotter I still want to drown whenever you leave.

22nd July 2012:
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING? This one was so amazing, I need to know what happens next! Please tell me it's coming soon! Please please please! I love Gisela's character kore and more with each chapter, and I'm starting to get a little nervous about Bas and Evan... 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: I am so sorry for not responding, i haven't been on in such a long time!

Forgive me? For i have good new...THE NEXT CHAPTER IS WAITING VALIDATION!

I know i have kept you waiting and i for that, i a truly sorry and i hope you still read the new chapter, if you still want to read my story, that is.

And you have a right to be worried, at least about Evan, he's about to get nastier then ever and it's all aimed at Gisela.

Vicki :)


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Review #21, by blackangelwings I still want to drown whenever you leave.

14th June 2012:
OOH. MAJOR PANIC.


Remus! I like how you added him in, you know? And how he gave his opinion, 'cause it wasn't abrupt and he didn't just appear, so that was good.

I'm glad she doesn't believe her brother! That was good. But she still doesn't believe Sirius! Argh. Silly chap.

Oh! I loved the last line, and I can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response:
Haha, :)

Well, i didn't want to leave him out because i love remus and he will be important to Gisela in the future once she escapes! and thanks, i couldn't just randomly add him because i hadn't talked about him much so i thought that was the best way to bring him into the story but i promise you, Remus will be featured more.

Well with that explanation he gave her, i don't blame her! and i think she secretly does, she just doesn't want to admit it to herself because she's scared.

ah, thank you! and it will be up soon so keep checking back! and thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)


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Review #22, by naflower05 I still want to drown whenever you leave.

12th June 2012:
Awesome chapter! I love the stuff between her and Bas!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen between them once she splits with the Slytherins. Update again soon, I wanna see her escape!!! =]

Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! I'm gad, i love them too! The next chapter will be up soon so keep checking back!

vicki :)


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Review #23, by naflower05 I'm staring at the asphalt wondering, what's buried underneath.

8th June 2012:
Good chapter!! Oh snap!! I can't believe her brother didn't do anything the first time Lucius cursed her! Update again soon PLEASE! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! =] ~

Author's Response:
Thank you! I know! He's a coward. The next chapter is up for a validation so keep checking back :)



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Review #24, by miluv I'm staring at the asphalt wondering, what's buried underneath.

28th May 2012:
I like longness:) btw ur amazingnggg

Author's Response:
Thank you :)


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Review #25, by CassiePotter I'm staring at the asphalt wondering, what's buried underneath.

28th May 2012:
That was crazy! I can't believe that Lucius would do that! And she didn't even scream... Oh my god. Gisela is fabulous. I love her character, and how she still wants to do the right thing, and not become a Death Eater, even if she is going against all of her family, friends, and house. Can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response:
Well, Lucius is a terrible guy, to put it nicely! and I'm glad you like her, she is definitely a tough one ha! Next chapter is awaiting validation so check back soon! and thank you!

Vicki :)


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