PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY!Author's Response: Aw, thank you. This story is on hold for a bit while I get back into the swing of things, but hopefully a chapter will be up soon-ish. Report Review
Ahh this is so good! I love Louis's characterisation- it's unique and compelling reading xDAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
this is a great story i really love where it is going and am really curious to what louis is hiding! i hope more action occurs in further chapter though!Author's Response: Thank you. :) And there will action later on. ... Lots of action. Report Review
I wonder what happened between Louis and his parents, I mean to kick him out of the house... But I love how the plot is progressing! How he found connections so quickly sort of reminds of Sherlock except Louis seems to be much kinder XD I glad you can't stop writing this story because this means *drumroll* more updates :P But really I'm curious to see why this criminal is using muggle weapons, and of course I would love to know who he/she is :PAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) Chapter three is about half written by now, so it'll probably be up in a few days. Report Review
love. please continue, i can't wait for the next update!Author's Response: Thank you so much. :D Report Review
Yay! Thank you for sending me the link! Great introductory chapter though I wish we could've learn more about his relationship with his parents but that'll probably come up later on. I love this Louis and I can't wait to see what happens later on. It's odd how I can sort of relate to him in the fact that I can't stand crowded rooms. Plus can I say you have a great summary, it pulls you in. Ps will fave.Author's Response: Thank you. :) Louis's relationship with his parents comes in more in... chapter three I think. Thanks. Seriously this plot has me going. It's wormed it's way into my head. :) Report Review
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