HUNGER GAMES FAN !!! Me too! I love it AND safe and
sound . I mean the cutestguy in our class gave me the
thing . I honestly snog it every day ;)
Btw U R N aweSOME writer:) Report Review
Really loved this chapter! Sometimes its a little confusing though.
Please update soon, i tend to sometimes forget the plot because of the wait between chaps.Author's Response: thank you! i'm not sure what's confusing, maybe mention it in your next review? i will try to upload as soon as i can! maybe this week sometime. Report Review
Welcome back, chapter wasn't bad, things have to happen right, or it wouldn't be interesting. I liked it :)Author's Response: thank you! haha i know, it just struck me how the flaws just seemed to build up with each character! Report Review
PLEASE MAKE THE 11TH CHAPTER I CAN'T WAIT !!!Author's Response: it's in the queue right now, should be up within a few days ahah :) Report Review
Oooh, me likey how this is going, but could you please tell me which year Ari is in? its a bit confusing :PAuthor's Response: Ari is in sixth year, same as Lena, Rose, Al, Scorpius :) thanks for the review! Report Review
this is amazing im SO excited for the next chapter ! please hurry :3 its so well written .Author's Response: thank you for the amazing review! next chapter is up in the queue! :) Report Review
She has to go to that wedding. I can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: haha i myself am looking forward to the wedding chapter, it will be pretty eventful :) thanks for being such a faithful reviewer! Report Review
I really ship Al/Lena still.Oh well, I really like this story and hope you update soon! :)Author's Response: aww i'm sorry that maybe it won't you happy but i hope you still continue to read this story! Report Review
Awwh, i adore this book so much. I love all the characters..:D Hopefully there'll be even more lena/james next chapter; please update the next chapter as soon as you can!(: xAuthor's Response: thank you so much! sorry been on bit of a break and i couldn't update but will start to now again! Report Review
this is so good but PLEASE get james and lena together soon, plus scorpius and rose!!! and update quickly please :) thanks!! xAuthor's Response: thank you for the review! ahah hopefully everything will play out, but all in good time ;) Report Review
So happy Ari and Al are back together. I do hope he didn't bet that they would or Ari may slap him for sure! Good chapter, see you the nextAuthor's Response: hahahah that would be pretty funny and sad at the same time! thank you for the review :) Report Review
Oh. My. Goodness. Al/Ari woo! Sure, the story is about Lena, but these two take the cake :) I think I've said it before, but a story with these two would be so great!
The Honeydukes part was cute with all the dates, though! I would focus on developing Lena's character and plot twists concerning her/Liam/James
-nednedned :)Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the chapter! yes i think you have mentioned it but i think i might want to get this to about 12-13 chapters before i decided to anything else related. i hope in the next few chapters more of lena will come to light. thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Please don't split up Al and Ari! I have mixed feelings about James and Lena. Emily is perfectly nice and has done nothing wrong. If James isn't into her, then it's not fair to her for him to stay with her. I think Lena needs to give Liam a fair shot. He seems like a good guy and he's single. James is not.Author's Response: haha i'm glad you like al and ari! soo do i, lena will give liam a shot and she knows it's more the right thing to do, so we'll see. thanks for the review! Report Review
You already have my vote :)
Awesome chapter. I was thinking to myself. Guys usually don't want a girl until their taken. Lets see what happens next.
see you next chapter!Author's Response: thank you! next chapter will probably be posted within next 2/3 weeks or so? :) Report Review
Nice chapter! I say Al/Ari though! They have a cute banter and already have good chemistry, which is less than Al/Lena. I like James and Lena so far, and when James was acting sort of mean during Quidditch practice was a good scene. If you keep building up Emily, James, and Lena, this story really has potential to be amazing!
Awesome chapter :)Author's Response: wow, possibly one of the best reviews i've had! thank you soo much and i'm amazed that you think it has that potential :) hope it lives up to that expectations! Report Review
Good luck on exams :) The chapter was cute and yeah, James could use a swat upside the head himself, maybe. Ari getting upset? It wasn't much of a kiss, and it was a dare. As it is said, If your not willing to play with the big boys, stay home. Great chapter, I enjoyed the read :)Author's Response: thank you! i love to hear some sort of criticism so your review was great :) hahaah i like you quote, it makes a lot of sense now ;) Report Review
Aiden! I never would have thought him. He's older and too close to the older boys. They would kill him. Rose is giving Scorpius a chance as a human being. I liked that. Lena making a friend with Liem, okay, that was a good call. Great chapter, see you next one :)Author's Response: technically he's only around two years older than her, it's not soo bad plus lily is a quite a bold, confident person. hahahah yes i agree when (or if?) they found out, they would kill him. yes i lovee scorose! see you at the next one too ;) Report Review
Fine, fine, my guess for who ( or is it 'whom'? ) Lily was kissing was so totally off, Meh.
Yeah, you go, Ari! teach that prat Al who exactly he's messing with, and stick up for bad transfigurers everywhere!
Also, tell me: were Rosie and Scorpy snogging that day in the Astronomy tower? And is it called Rospius, Scorose or just plain ScorpiusxRose?
UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: thank you! yes i did want the whole lily thing to be a huge surprise, haha i'm glad you like Ari, and how she stands up to Al, though i love him too. i call them scorose and no they weren't snogging :) Report Review
My bad!! I'm like 2 chappies ahead on ffnet D:
I do love the story though!
xxAuthor's Response: hahah yes it's posted there as well :) though mainly it was intended for this site! thank you fro reviewing! Report Review
Im sure I've read this story before? Have you posted it somewhere else?
xxAuthor's Response: its on fanfiction :) Report Review
I like this story! :) James reaction to Liam seems pretty interesting so early... I wonder what's gonna happen between Lena and Emily? Albus and Ari moments are really hilarious and cute as well. You should make a spinoff on their story on their point of view on stuff between them!Author's Response: hahaha nothing might happen quite yet between Lena and Emily, they still are of course cousins so it might take a while.
and you practically read my mind! i was planning on having a spinoff, maybe a couple of chapters on the Al/Ari story but i'll see :) Report Review
Ha! I bet the git Lily was kissing is that Liam dude who was chatting up Lena! But why did Lena think of James? or a Secret? or a best friend? or 'kill'?
And even if it WAS the Liam guy... why should Lena care?
Anyways... I really hope Al and Ari make up with each other! They're SUCH a cute couple!
UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: hahaha your review made me laugh :') i think you might be slightly surprised who Lily was kissing, but that will be revealed in the next chapter (which is in validation right now!) Lena wasn't thinking of all those things, Lily was trying to explain herself but Lena was so busy thinking, she only heard a few of the words Lily was saying like kill, etc.
i am SO glad to hear you like ari/al, i like them too! quite a few people seem like to like lena and al so i will do what i can :) thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Good chapter, after hearing some of the facts, give Al to Lena, he already killed the Ari relationship last year. I dont think she's ready to trust Al with her heart at the moment. I can't place who Lily was seen with, must be a shocker though.
see you next chapter!Author's Response: another person who wants al/lena! well i certainly did not expect this kind of response. aanyways, you'll see more about ari/al later and hopefully it will make sense. lena is though going to have her own boy troubles soo i may think about it ;) hahah i hope that whoever Lily is seen with, will surprise you! next chapter is in validation! thanks for reviewing Report Review
I don't want Arianna and Al...I WANT LENA AND AL! They would be so cute together!! Even if you don't want Lena being with him, just make them like friends with benefits with Al falling in love with her or something that they're kind of together then!!! It's seems pretty impossible though considering Ari and Al totally have something together D:
Anyway great chapter XD I can't wait to see who Lily was kissing, I bet it will cause a few arguments ;} Update again quickly!! :D
~BlameItOnTheNarglesAuthor's Response: uh oh i was afraid this might happen. i'm not against lena and al, and i get why you would think they are really cute but i'm more with the idea that he's a really good friend? but you never know ;) i just don't want you to rule out ari...she's become one of my favourite characters to write and will have a bigger role as the story goes on.
next chapter is in validation, the arguments ofcourse might or might not come immediately, we will see :) thanks for reviewing! -VB Report Review
It was a fun read. James trying to figure out who she likes without asking outright.That was interesting.
Al and Arianna having a history. I don't think that is quite history yet.
Make over time sounded like a blast. Seems they drudge all day, then glam up and become different people when the sun goes down lol
A good chapter, congrats on the word count!Author's Response: thank you. i'm not quite sure what you mean by the Al/Arianna thing. i guess that's how it's come across in the past few chapters.
thanks for the review again! next chapter will be up in a few days. Report Review
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