Blue- Henry= Al
Thus Blue is more like Al than Henry and they should get together.
Any way, 10/10.Author's Response: Love the math haha
Keep reading and you'll find out if it was accurate Report Review
Yay you updated Blue! Henry and Blue are really cute and Al is acting like an idiot. I mean what's up with him and Clarrice?! Arg
Anyway, OMG Rose is back! Yay!
I hope you can update another chapter of Blue and Blind! When are you going away?
-riddikulus11Author's Response: Yes I did! I'm glad you liked it! More Henry and Blue to come :) Clarrice is annoying and she seems stereotypical bimbo model.
Welcome back Rose! Yay!
I will have Blind updated with a short summer chapter, but at this time, I don't think Blue will update before I leave. I leave next week, but I'm visiting a friend over the weekend, so I won't be able to write at all :( Report Review
wait, now im shipping henrue (how cute is that ship name?!) so update fast!! love you:)Author's Response: Yay! Ship name! I love it! Report Review
Ok I love this story! But I am mad at Al and Blue when will they get it together and find out they like each other?Author's Response: Patience darling! Keep reading and everything shall be revealed Report Review
Please don't stop writing. For some reason, I don't like Henry because in my mind, he stole Blue from Al. And I like Al, however idiotic he may be.Author's Response: Don't hate on Henry for that reason! He's such a lovely guy! Report Review
I really love the idea of Tony only wanting Rose for fame...or whatever
P.S. Oh my god! Sorry but in the review for the chapter Henry, I said that you said you would update by the third. I realised that I made a mistake! That wasn't from this story! It was from another that I'm reading right now and I got it mixed up! I'm so sorry! I feel so bad now... :(
Your stories are wonderful btw! I love them a lot! And update as fast as you can please:)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping the "fame" reason is good and not super cliche. I apologize if it is. . . it is not intended to be that way.
P.S. I haven't looked at the other review yet, but you're forgiven ;) Report Review
OK. SO I OFFICIALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
The whole 'drunk girl who loses her memory" is a very original idea and I think its really good!
I'm sorry that I didn't review your other chapters, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop!
It was just so good! BRILIAM STUFF!
The name Blue is unusual but awesome! The chapters that you've written so far are really good. I especially liked BroomBall. Did you actually play Strip Broomball like Blue and the rest?
I love your writing, and your stories are so wonderful! They are so unique (both Blind and Blue). The whole deal that she had with Al was really nice:) But NO! Al had to go and fricken date Clarrice!
"Scrap" is a hilarious name/nickname. Him and Rose just remind me of the stereotypical Weasley lol. And Gilderoy was just amazeballs. His ego hasn't gone down at all has it? But hey, that's how we love him isn't it? hehehe ;)
Albus is such an arse! I really don't understand why he would go out with Clarrice. Siriusly(unless ofc that he's trying to make Blue jealous). When they break up (which they will), he's going to have such a hard time getting rid of her!
I really like Al's friend's. Like Julia and all. Julia's from Oz, so am I! Anyway, I pretty much love everything about your story! Its so good!
Keep up the wonderfulness of the chapters and enjoy writing!
P.S. When do you think you can update the next chapter by ? (for both Blind and Blue). Can't wait till then! I'm probably gonna be checking everyday, even though you said Blind was prob gonna be updated by 3rd or 4th :( Yes, this is my life.Author's Response: So many things to respond to! Thank you so much this means a lot to me. It makes any day better with a long review like this.
Ok Broomball. I did play broomball, just not to the extent they did aka strip. That was an addition by one of my friends who decided that they game wasn't "adult" enough, if you get my drift.
I totally forgot I put Gilderoy in this story haha! I loved writing him just because I love pretending to be super self-centered ;)
He's a boy. He's stupid. Someone needs to hit him in the face with a quaffle. Or bludger. Mwhaha bludger.
Thank you so much for reviewing :) and thank you for eating voldy's nose Report Review
I love it!
PLEASE UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
This is a very mean cliffy.Author's Response: I know, I know. It seems I have hit a little bit of a writer's block, but I'll try to figure it out today Report Review
It is so obvious that Al is jealous of Henry!! Hmm... now I just wonder if his little stunt will work on Blue :PAuthor's Response: Dun dun dun who knows. . . .
Mwhahahahaha. Report Review
Finally the whole Tony mystery is revealed!! No wonder the guys don't like him. What a jerk!! >.< How come the guys never told the girls their reason for not liking him though?? Was it to spare Rose's feelings??
Great chapter btw. I'm glad Blue's ok with the guys now. Oh and I think Beth and Fred are adorable!! Also thanks for all the mentions for the chapter images. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! :) If you ever need more let me know.Author's Response: Yes! Mystery solved! Bad Tony, no me gusta :( Yea they didn't tell basically because she has this view of Tony that would be shattered. It's better to have a good break and no reason to hate them than have a break and finding out that they were using you.
Thanks so much :) I love your chapter images so much by the way. They are perfect! I might be needing one soon-ish. . . Report Review
Oh my. Albus really got mad. I hope you update soon.
I just love Blue. I don't even know why. She's just awsome. I have a girl-crush on her. Not an actual one.
HeheheAuthor's Response: You can have a crush on her. I won't tell anyone! PROMISE! hehehee Report Review
Wow, your story is good i like it a lot :) keep updating.
Looks like jealous Al did something stupid :oAuthor's Response: Thanks so much :) Report Review
WHAT THE FUCK AL? UGH YOU ARE SUCH A SODDING PRAT, HONESTLY WHAT IN THE NAME OF MERLINS BAGGY Y-FRONTS IS WRONG WITH YOU?? CLARRICE? C L A R R I C E?? WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU PLAYING AT? AND CRASHING BLUE'S DATE? MAYBE IF YOU GOT OVER YOURSELF AND ASKED HER OUT FIRST THIS WOULDN'T BE HAPPENING BUT NO YOU JUST HAD TO BE A COMPLETE ARSE!!!
ugh sorry, I had to get that over and done with :D great writing deary, hope you update soon! xxAuthor's Response: I laughed the entire time I read that not gonna lie. HE'S BEING STUPID I KNOW UGH. AND CLARRICE. LIKE WHAT THE HECK AL?? SHE'S CRAZY.
I'm working on the next chapter now :) thanks for reviewing Report Review
Great story and fantastic chapter. One of the best, I'd say. There's so much in it -I love Beth, and her with Fred. I like the girls, and fierce Blue. Good to know about Tony, too. And I'm having my fingers crossed for Rose and Scorpius.Author's Response: Thank you. That means so much to me to hear you say that! Report Review
Great story and fantastic chapter. One of the best, I'd say. There's so much in it -I love Beth, and her with Fred. I like the girls, and fierce Blue. Good to know about Tony, too. And I'm having my fingers crossed for Rose and Scorpius.Author's Response: I don't know if you accidentally posted this twice, but thanks again! haha :) Report Review
So Blue was a bad girl then?? Interesting :P
I actually would like it if she was. Maybe losing her memory gives her a chance to redeem herself and start over like Al said. Oh and was he jealous when he saw her with that guy?? I bet he was!! ;P
And now there's a mysterious fiancÚ added to the mix so I can't wait to see what happened with that!!
I've told you before (at least I think I did) but your writing just keeps on improving. It makes me happy that I read your stories from the start and got to see you writing and story telling skills improving. You should be very proud of yourself :DAuthor's Response: So in my last response to your review I said next chapter...which would be this chapter. BUT DON'T LISTEN TO ME I MEAN THE CHAPTER AFTER THIS ONE. I am such an awkward human being I shouldn't be able to talk...
All answers in due time dear reader. The mystery that is Blue is slow going, I know and I'm sorry about that. But whatever happened to her really screwed her up.
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you say that. I know that my writing is still a little rough, but readers like you make it all worth it :) Report Review
I am so so sorry it took me this long to review!! I've been slacking on my hpff reading due to real life getting in the way. I've been super busy with school. Don't you hate it when that happens!! -___-
Anyway, I loved this chapter!! I want Blue and Al to just get together already!! And what is the boys' problem with Tony?? I'm like dying to know why exactly they hate him so much. I get why scorpious doesn't like him but why the rest too?? And did Scorp and Rose really break up?? That is just no bueno!! :(Author's Response: Real life is no fun :( Welcome back darling!
Thank you so much! I do too, but they are being difficult. *sigh* characters... You'll find out a little more in the next chapter although probably not as much as you would like. Whoops haha I also have to admit that I have finished the next chapter, but I still have some editing and finishing touches that need to be added before I post it :) Report Review
I love this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Blue bleu blue bleu blue bleu
French and English
I love this story
Please keep updating chaptersAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll try to get the next chapter up soon! Report Review
That was a good chapter :) Update soon? Thanks :DAuthor's Response: Thanks :) I'll try Report Review
I luuurrvvv this story... amnesia intrigues me? I would say more, but then I'd be at risk of sounding majorly insensitive :P
Plott twist is admirable, because I didn't expect it, but it still made me sad.
Scorose cannot be over! I hope we get a Rose POV in the near future, or maybe a Scorpius.
Also, is she a secret agent? Or and auror? Someone evil, I hope... That can be the next plot twist, she finds out that her job is to kill people!
I keep repeating letters. It's probably very annoying to read :D
ByeeeAuthor's Response: I will say unfortunately you probably won't be getting any Rose POV but maybe a girl cry session.
But yes. ScoRose is over. I am sad too.
By she are you referring to Blue? You'll just have to wait and see. She can cook, speak French, and see thestrals. Who is Blue??
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i like long chapters though!!! and this one was particulary awesome!!! YAYYY!! haha upadte soon!!Author's Response: I like long chapters too! SOUL SISTERS! Wait you could be a guy. . . . .SOUL SIBLINGS. Anyways thank you :) you made my day
And I will try! I just started the new chapter! Report Review
I like Tony!!! Is he a possible love interest for Blue?? I imagine the guys won't be too happy when they find out he's the one building her furniture. And this Divana Titan (cool name btw. how'd you come up with it??) sounds sketchy. I have a bad feeling about her. I'm guessing Blue knew her, maybe they were even friends but not very good ones since nobody's been looking for her. Well at least not that Blue knows of. I'm dying to know what her life before her amnesia was like... so much mystery is killing me :P
Oh and thanks for the mentions in the beginning of your chapters!! They make me blush ^.^Author's Response: Thank you! I rather like him also! You'll just have to wit and see darling. Anything can happen. Yea I'm very excited to write that scene, it shall prove interesting.
Divana Titan. Yes. . . . .how did I come up with that name? Um I actually have no idea. There was a thought process that went into it, but I'm not really sure.
Yes the story is coming along, and more things come to light, but not everything. Just enough to keep you guessing :)
No problem mentioning you! Your fine work deserves to be praised! I love having you make chapter images for me too :) It makes me feel special. Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE SOON OMG! :D I LOVE THISAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll try :) Report Review
This is so amazing. I've been laughing so much that my cheek muscle actually have started to hurt. I really love the idea for the story and all the characters. It's just so different to most other stories I read as its set post-Hogwarts. I can't wait for the next chapter: SO EXCITED! xx GryffindorDreamerAuthor's Response: Did you really like it that much?? Yay! I'm really glad you're liking the story so much. Makes me beyond happy thank you! Report Review
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