I came back to this story after a while and I forgot how much you NEED to update. This is one of my favorite stories and I have to find out what happens next

Please please please update soon :)

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OMG HE KNOWS!!! It's like the moment I've been waiting for FOREVER! I really hope they find her! I hope James finds her! POOR JAMES! And I love Fred! He is just awesome! But I still want to punch Scorpius in the face! It wouldn't kill the boy to show some emotion! But I still love him, even with his lack of emotion. Update soon! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next!

Sincerely,
Claire

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Hey, wow that was a really good beginning. I know exactly how Lena feels and it's bad. Shame, well I'm definitely continuing reading so well done for the first chapter, twas really good!
~Char x

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Oh such a cliffhanger. I read this when it first came out but came back because you haven't updated yet! I can not wait to hear more, I adore this story. Have fun writing!

Author's Response: I know, I know! keep promising to update, but life is just getting in the way, ALL the time. I promise though, (really promise) I will update this story BEFORE the end of October! Thank you so much for coming back to the story, I'm very appreciative of it, and I will wrap this story up, and continue on with the next in this series!

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ah can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so hooked

Author's Response: The next chapter should be in the queue this week!(: I'm so happy you like it!

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Amazing chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter should be in the queue this week!(: I'm so happy you like it!

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Update soon, please!!! Ilove this story, and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: I'll be updating soon, I promise, love! I'm happy you're enjoying this new instalment!!

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WOAH. I mean, that was unexpected. I thought it was going to be a girl, you know? But then reading it I guessed it was Fred. And like, I'm kind of glad it was him, you know? Because like, yeah. It would be a bit odd if like, Albus or Lily started hanging about her, wouldn't it?

Anyways, I liked this chapter. It was really well written and yeah, I liked how you didn't say what person's point of view, you know? 'Cause you still managed to make sure it wasn't completely unobvious who it was, yeah?

Also, you're starting to force one of the Wotter's into growing up and to notice that everything isn't all hunky-dory and whatnot. I like that.

I'm kind of hoping Fred accidentally let's it slip about all of the cuts and everything, you know? 'Cause I don't think Lena would be able to tell him because of how selfless she is. But that would probably make James angrier because Free knew before him, even if Lena didn't tell Fred. Yeah.

UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: It was a difficult choice, but somwhere in the back of my mind I always knew Fred would know first, ya know? And I'm not ready for Rose. Not just yet. I don't think ANYONE will ever be ready for her...it had to be someone who is always about, but close to James, Freddy is perfect in my mind. And I really like him. He's my favourite character thus far.


I'm glad you liked that, I wanted it to be a surprise. I almost left out his name altogether, but I didn't want to go down the path.

It's time to grow up. For them at least. They've lived shielded and under the cover of their parents all their lives. It's time.

All in due time, lovely. You do have a knack for guessing what path everything goes on though!(:

I have Microsoft Word open as we speak, I promise! Thank you as always!

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OH. MY. GOD. DOES GINNY KNOW NOW?! EEP.


this was such a well written chapter! this is by far my favourite so far. i loved the dream, and how vivian- that is her name, right? i totally blanked for a second- knows. this worries me. what if she tells james? or rose? and she gets all hurt that nobody told her and they like, fall out. that'd be too much.

still. the giant one across her back and the one on her head? i wonder where the come from? was that her dad or something? eep.

you got your cliffhanger! but you should update mega quickly, ok?! i can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: You know I can't tell you! I will say that someone who reviewed as it correct though! (I think, I might have to go back an look though.)

I'm really glad people like this chapter! I was very hesitant to post this one.

Vivian, yes that's her name. I can't tell anything that you don't already know, that its not heading in a good direction.

Oh that, I can tell you about that. Or at least confirm your suspicions. Yes, it was from her father, and yes, I will tell that story. (in little detail, I'll more hint at it)

Hahha, I did, didn't I? I promise I'll update as soon as I can! Thank you, as always!!

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A cliff hanger!?!?! NO! I really, really, REALLY WANT YOU TO UPDATE! And I really, really REALLY want the person who walked in to be James. UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: Hahah, I know know! I haven't done one, ever, really. I sort of like them!

I promise I will update as soon as I can! Thank you for reading and reviewing darling!



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That was a really good chapter. With the dream, the short paragraphs in between. Lena's point of view is really very well done. I wonder who walked in on her? Rose? For some reason I thought of Lily; I'm not sure why. I'm glad though, that someone found out and gave her a hug, instead of firing away questions.
Exciting!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've been a bit leery of this chapter for a bit now. I wasn't sure if I liked or disliked, I'm still not entirely sure.

I can't tell you!! I wish I could! But, she needed that hug. Almost like with Neville, she didn't need to be asked anything ,she just needs someone there.

Thank you for the review!(:

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love it so much! haha I get so ridiculously happy whenever there is a new chapter :)

Author's Response: Hahha, thank you so much! Expect a new one soon!(:

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Okay, first of all: This is such a brilliant story. The details and characterization are something that this website commonly lacks. So congrats on being one of the few authors I can stand to read, and not get annoyed by lack of grammar/spelling.

Secondly, I just wanted to say that your portrayal of Lena is very excellent. Most authors, when dealing with a character who self-harms by cutting, only brush the surface with all the emotions that a cutter really experiences. You really have the knowledge of these emotions down that you can write about them in such an effective way. It's just something I wanted to praise you on.

Also, just as a suggestion to put at the beginning of each chapter whose POV it will be because sometimes it was unknown until about halfway through when another character said their name or out of a process of elimination.

In the majority of the Lena chapters, you have a few paragraphs that are very abstract, talking about hope, lies, etc. These paragraphs really add to the artistry of this story, so I hope you continue to write them.

Overall, I really enjoy this story thus far and I hope you keep up the good work! This is definitely one that I will keep an eye out for updates (even though I usually can't stand James(II)/OC stories!)! Congrats on the fantastic job so far!

Author's Response: First off, I must say thank you! I'm very grateful you chose to look at my story out of all the ones out there, and you enjoyed it!

Again, thank you. I assume that I have such an in-depth look into Lena's mind, because my own has been there before. It's still difficult to find the words at times, but I'm happy I've been succeeding thus far.

Right! I've just started doing that again, sorry for the confusion!(:

I will keep doing those, rightly so. I think they add a bit to the story, and it ties back into exactly how Lena feels.

One last time, I will thank you!! I hope to hear more from you!

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Aw, bless you. *winks horrifically.*


I really like this bit: Change is gentle in a cruel forceful sort of way. Taking all of what you've ever known and replacing it with half hearted replicas of what it once was. It was just such a great way to describe it, and it really shows Lena's opinion on change, without dragging on about it.

Poor Lena. I'm kind of dreading where the whole thing with whatsherface is going. Is James going to find out? Is Scorpius or Rose going to find out? Or will it be someone completely surprising; like Fred. And is James going to notice she's acting differently soon? He's still so childish in that sense, you know?

And Scorpius! I'm not liking him at the moment. He's being completely horrid, and I don't like it one bit. I mean, the bit when he was all 'NO!'? That showed he still cares, despite his odd way of showing it lately, but at the same time it shows that Lena's home life must be rather bad. In saying that, shall we meet any of her family at some point? Because I think that would be awfully good. Wink wink. Nudge nudge.

Rose; ah, she needs to demand to know what's wrong! I mean, I know that probably won't be very good for their friendship, but she kind of needs to grow up as well, and accept that everything isn't all rainbows and butterflies.

Really looking forward to the next chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahha, I'm winking back, equally horrific. I do believe my eye is twitching.

Why thank you, I do enjoy that line myself. (I hate when I sound like that, I feel so horrid)

I think you might have something there, but I really don't want to go into detail with it, not yet. I will assure you it's all going to happen soon.

Scorp. I hate that twat at the moment, but since I understand why, I can't truly hate him. I'm not sure about her family just yet, I'm a bit apprehensive, they're really loathsome..

Rosie Posie...she needs to grow up too, alongside James. Actually I feel like all of the "war hero's children" need to grow up, they've lived sheltered lives, but just because Ol' Voldie is gone doesn't mean that there isn't darkness out there, that others aren't suffering! They don't see anything because they don't look. Maybe it's time to open someone's eyes.

I'm not a trusted author so I only have a few more days to update! I hope to leave you guys on a bit of a cliffhanger! (:

As always, thank you!! (:

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Hi-This is a really great story! You need to update soon, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you like it, and chose to review! It means a lot to me!!! I promise I'll update soon!

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He's going to find out soon, isn't he?! I don't think I can cope with that, he's been acting like a bit of a noob. But still, I do want him to find out, you know? 'Cause I want to see/read his reaction as much as I don't...

Hmm. This was a really good chapter! I'm looking forward to see how the bit with James getting glasses goes.. UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahha, he's getting really annoying for me actually...it doesn't lesson how much I love him, but he's too oblivious for his own good. Everyone is really. They're too wrapped up in themselves to get anywhere! I've already written out how must of the confrentation will go. :/ I'm not sure how I'll handled it I know how he will...like I said before, I think it'll force him into the role of adulthood he's been trying to avoid for a while now.

His glasses, well yeah this was a bit of a filler chapter, and complete rubbish in my opinion, but I thought it would be cute.


I'm typing and updating right now! I hope to have a cliffhanger for the week the queue is closed. (I'm an evil mastermind, I knew I was in slytherin for a reason!)

As always, thank you!(:

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:/ this chapter...this story is really touching me today

Author's Response: I'm sorry darling!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

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Aweee. They're all so bloody adorable!

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Woww. All i can say really!

Author's Response: well all I can say to that is:

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Awe, don't worry James, I love jam too. (and I loath eggs)

Author's Response: I'm the opposite actually, I hate jam. Icky and sticky!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

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Great chapter! Really enjoying this story! (sorry I'm reviewing all over the place, but I keep going back in forth and rereading!)

Author's Response: I'm just happy you're reading and reviewing! It means a lot!

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this is slowly becoming one of my favorites! I wish it were better known!

Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe you can tell your friends then?

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

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update soon! please!!

Author's Response: Already updated!(:

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Poor Lena. :/ She made me sad again.

Author's Response: I'm sorry dollface!

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"She tasted like sunshine"?! ohmymerlin! Youre amazing! that was so adorable i could bearely stand it!

Author's Response: Hahah, sorry lovely.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!(:

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