{reviewid: 2785441, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
6th May 2013:
It was nice hearing from Ron's perspective. Sorry I haven't written a review in ages..Moving... Anyways, this is a really good story so far :) I'd like to hear from either Harry or Voldemort's point of view. Keep up the fantastic work and I'll be happy with what you write :)
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Thanks for Reviewing Sciptie, you know I love them. Anyways, I'm sorry I took so long to post, and I'll make it up to you by incorporating both Harry and Voldermort POV into my next chapter.
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{reviewid: 2780627, reviewer: 'Tag'}
7th April 2013:
i Love connon in D and am so glad it was in her wedding! great way to bring voldemort back into the plot btw.
Author's Response: Thanks for dropping the review. I also really love the song, its great isn't it, traditional. And well... He had to be brought back in somehow didn't he?
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{reviewid: 2780398, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
6th April 2013:
This chapter was short yet very good:) please update soon.
Author's Response: I know it was so short... I hate myself but I'm just not having the inspiration to make chapters longer. I'll try harder next time, and I'll start writing again soon, might be hard between school and work. Thanks for your review.
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{reviewid: 2770528, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
13th February 2013:
Awh!!! And oh my goodness about Voldemort...He is ever so twisted... Fantastic job!
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Thanks, Scriptie. As always, I look forward to and appreciate your reviews.
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{reviewid: 2766840, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
28th January 2013:
aw well at least they made up!! i felt sad when i read the line ' a single tear rolling down his cheek ' all could think was DONT CRY DRACO!! EVERYTHING WILL BE OK IN THE END!! anyway thank you for updating and please update soon:)
Author's Response: I will as soon as I can. School comes first though, I can only write between homework assignments. I'm Glad you liked it. It was kind of a bittersweet chapter, and I plan on making the next one a little more happier. Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 2759309, reviewer: 'griffindorechicky101'}
18th December 2012:
IT WAS SO GOOD! i Cant believe he got into the dorm that is crazy.. o my word. update soon!
Author's Response: I will update right after the Holidays. Thanks for teh review, I'm glad that you like it.
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{reviewid: 2759061, reviewer: 'cassi'}
16th December 2012:
Its a story. But you spelled Zabini wrong and you grammar is off.
Author's Response: I will fix all the small things when I go back and edit after concluding the story. I am well aware of small grammatical, and spelling mistakes, but thank you for pointing them out.
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{reviewid: 2758782, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
15th December 2012:
I really liked this chapter but it was alittle short, i surpose you put it in to lead upto somethind but anyway please update soon cant wait to see what you've planned next.
Author's Response: I will work on writing over the Holidays and update when the queue re-opens. I know the chapter was short, and the truth is, I just couldn't think what else to write. I'm not losing inspiration for the story, it just seemed I couldn't find the right words to make it seem interesting still and not be repetitive, so I kept it short and sweet. Thanks for your review.
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{reviewid: 2758024, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
11th December 2012:
What a creepy encounter...Voldemort has sick plans, like absolutely gross. Bleh. Hope Draco starts to feel atleast a bit better. I was highly anticipating this chapter and am extremely pleased with how it turned out :) Fantastic work like always
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Thanks Scriptie, I appreciate hearing that, It makes me smile as always when you leave me a review. Yes Voldermort has seriously sick plans.. ech, and as for Draco, well we will see what the next chapter brings.
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{reviewid: 2757437, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
9th December 2012:
Ah i dont know if i should be scarde or creeped out... i really dont want hermione to have voldys hier i hope harry kills him before it can happen. Overall an amazing chapter please update soon.
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2756069, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
3rd December 2012:
What did they see? Sorry for not writing any reviews lately. Voldemort and his wedding crashing...such anger I have for him... This is such an addicting story I can't wait to see what happens next! Please say it isn't old Voldy in their room.
-Scriptie
Author's Response: oh you will just have to wait and see. I am glad you enjoy this although addicting is not what I was expecting to hear it pleases me greatly to know my story is captivating. I'm already working on the next chapter, actually think I have already finished said chapter... I'll post it very soon. Thanks as always for leaving a review.
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{reviewid: 2753916, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
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22nd November 2012:
Aw a sweet yet slightly sad chapter, i really hope draco and serena are going to be safe. Cant wait to find out what happens next please update soon.
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can, I'm glad you like the story and really appreciate the review.
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{reviewid: 2751648, reviewer: 'kindling'}
9th November 2012:
Huh okay a bit of spelling errors child, and that does cause some confusion. It really is sad the big day was ruined don't you think. Oh well. Life can't always be perfect I propose.
Author's Response: I have been made aware of my grammar and spelling mistakes and when I have the time will go back and edit the chapter, as to it being ruined, the day wasn't ruined for them at all, just... sidetracked. But I guess its up to the reader to decide... anyways, the story will continue on and I appreciate the feedback.
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{reviewid: 2750071, reviewer: 'slytherinbadgirl'}
3rd November 2012:
OMR this is exciting and they're so cute together! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing I'm glad you liked it. I'll update soon
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{reviewid: 2750067, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
3rd November 2012:
WHAT VOLDY WAS THE GATE CRASHER! Never would of thought of that i cant wait to find out what happens in the next chapter so please please PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: I will, promise. Yeah I thought Id put an interesting twist on it
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{reviewid: 2749475, reviewer: 'griffindorechicky101'}
31st October 2012:
very cute i loved it! update soon!
Author's Response: I already have, next chapter is in the queue check back in a couple days. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2749294, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
30th October 2012:
Aw such a lovely chapter. There FINALLY MARRIED! Your book has been absolutly amazing so far i cant wait to find out what happens next, so please update soon.
Author's Response: I will update by thanksgiving I promise... so soon enough. Thanks for your lovely review, and I am so glad that you enjoy it.
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{reviewid: 2748458, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
26th October 2012:
Oh my gosh! Poor Serena. Please write more soon! I'm terribly sorry for not writing as much reviews lately. I haven't been near a computer for months. I love how well this story is progressing! Keep up the fantastic work :)
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Thank you scriptie, trust me i know how RL can keep us busy for awhile so you are all good. I appreciate this review and I promise to update soon. As in before Christmas.
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{reviewid: 2746792, reviewer: 'griffindorechicky101'}
17th October 2012:
that was deff a plot twist and supper awsome. I cant wait to read a bout the wedding! update soon! very soon! please?
Author's Response: I will update soon, i promise, the next chapter is in the process of being written in between, homework, schoolwork and work, work, and other reality things. I'll have it up soon.
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{reviewid: 2745902, reviewer: 'go%20luna%21%21'}
13th October 2012:
she dosent sound like hermione at all you make her sound kind of stupid. but thank you for taking your time writing this story.
Author's Response: Just to let you know, My character has changed and is now Serena not Hermione. Your review is offensive because you are attacking my character without constructing it with ways I could improve the character and the flaws so The review actual is helpful to an author. Please do not review my story if you are going to attack something in it without really explaining where, or how you think I could fix it, because to me at least, it is ver offensive.
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{reviewid: 2745416, reviewer: 'ceci'}
10th October 2012:
Great very great
I totally loved it
Author's Response: I am so glad that you have enjoyed the story, thank you so much for all of your reviews.
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{reviewid: 2745413, reviewer: 'ceci'}
10th October 2012:
Oomg
I cant believe ron is really hating her
Author's Response: Yeah, Ron... he just doesnt get it, I may have him redeem his soul later though
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{reviewid: 2745408, reviewer: 'ceci'}
10th October 2012:
Woww
Finally some action lol
Author's Response: *smirks evily* Yeah, we did get somewhere in this chapter didn't we?
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{reviewid: 2745406, reviewer: 'ceci'}
10th October 2012:
Hm it was alright
but its good
the only thing is that its short
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I struggle keeping some chapters long, i;ll try and make it longer in editing.
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{reviewid: 2745401, reviewer: 'ceci'}
10th October 2012:
Oomg i love it! I want to read more but i have school
So i will read later! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing
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