I almost died cause I thought that was the end but thank god I read the A/N. I'v liked the story so far and can't wait for more. I really like the chapter image too cause its so sweet. Can't wait for the second part :D
Update ASAP :)
-riddikulus 11 Report Review
Oh my! I about cried for James and Taylor! I can't wait to see what else you come up with Report Review
This story is so cute! I love how Al and Taylor developed, please tell me they'll see each other again! Report Review
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS! SO. FREAKING. LONG.
gosh, these two are perfect. this is one of my absolute favorite FFs. I think that the plot twist is interesting but it makes me sad that brad and taylor are getting separated from the rest! ah. maybe this is setting up some sort of epistlatory (i cant spell. or is this even a word?) sequel? i like those.
can't wait for more (THERE BETTER BE MORE OR I WILL FREAK OUT!)
JillyAuthor's Response: So glad that you like the story so much! So glad that you are good with the plot twist, but don't be too concerned about them being separated! There will be more!! Thanks for reviewing!! :) Report Review
O wow! Nice job again!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! Glad you liked it! Report Review
Oh my! I am so happy that you continued with this story! You always do so well.
LLGAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you didn't give up on the story!! Report Review
I really enjoyed this, and my heart honestly dropped a little at the end, but there is one thing I want to mention: I feel like that Ashley girl's last name has changed like three times over the course of this story. It's not a big deal, but it was temporarily confusing.
Otherwise, great job! Can't wait to keep reading!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, to be honest, I'm terrible at names, even if I make them! I'll be sure to go back and fix that when I get time! So happy you like it! Report Review
You never tell a girl you like her, it makes you look like an idiot... hehehe AVPM
Anyways, I am totally hooked! I really like this story, and I want to keep reading but it's really late and I should go to bed. Or I could ignore the voice of reason and hit the "submit review and continue reading next chapter" button.
Yeah, I think I'll do that :)Author's Response: Makes me so excited that you like it so much! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I just read everything. It's great please keep writing :)Author's Response: I will try my best to keep going! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Heyy, Great chapter. I really liked it. Yeah good update and im hoping that the next chapter will be out soon.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Will try and update soon! Report Review
Wow! Another great chapter and I love the fast update! I cant believe you are up to rule nine on me! Could we get an extended addition?!?Author's Response: Haha, well, I may be extending the entire story, so there will be more than twelve chapters! :) thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I'm curious what Lious is going to do... Probably not give them detention.
I would really like to read about those Slytherins on Love potion. that is going to be a genius chapter!
update a new chapter real soon, please!!
xAuthor's Response: Haha, we'll have to see! I'll be sure to write about the Slytherins! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh my! I cant wait to read more of this! You have lots of tallent!
LLGAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks for another great review! Report Review
Poor Taylor. Please make her happy again in de near future!
I would love te read the rest of the story. You're a good writer in my opinion!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, thanks for the complement! I have lots of plans for the story, and Taylor's happiness is very important to me! Report Review
hey, i really like it that this story is connected to James and Alex' story :)
I hope Albus will have any luck with Taylor!~Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like how they're connected! haha, I'm sure he'll get lucky at some point! Report Review
Well. That was a good chapter... but Al is a moron in my oppinion. Will he ever sucessfully charm this lovely little witch??
LLGAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, we'll have to see about Al, maybe he can catch a break. But I promise you that he is redeemable! Report Review
I am loving this story so far! Besides all the character relationships, the chapter titles and acronyms for everything are really great as well. It took your mention of James and Alex in a previous chapter to make me realize that I'd also read another story of yours--"Trouble with Life"--and really liked it, so maybe I just enjoy your writing in general :)Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!! Thanks for being such a loyal reader! Report Review
That chapter was just bangin' :D I'm really enjoying the story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter. A few chapters ago, I was feeling sorry for Al, but now I feel sorry for Taylor and I just hope they end up together in the end!!! I seriously thought at the end there everything would fall into place with them but no, it never works out that way does it.
Sophie :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for such a bangin' review, I'll try and update soon! Remember: the story's not over yet! Report Review
Hey, I just read all six chapters in one go! Gotta say I'm liking it so far, keep it up :)
Also Starkid references = win
Miss Weasley xAuthor's Response: Hey thanks for a great review!!! Love that you love it! Report Review
Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter! I sort of squealled a bit... *blushes* I'm glad to hear that at least one other person likes pickles as much as I do! Keep it up! James has some pretty good advice going on... Who's the "Someone else"?. Well enough of my rambling.. Hope to see more soon!
LLGAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! Love the awesome review! Will try and update soon!! Report Review
Ah.you finally posted their kiss.
And thed are is going to be a fun one to read about.
But Taylor doesn't feel anything and wants to forget about it?!
I feel so bad for Al. :(
Update soon, adn I'm sorry about the writer's block.
-LEPAuthor's Response: Thanks for an awesome review! Like hearing your input!! Will try and update again soon! Report Review
you are finally back! yay!!
please update soon :)Author's Response: I will try! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Great first chapter! I love the idea of the Dare Jar Club! I'm curious to see what type of mischief they'll get into ;) Oh, and I thought their signatures on the contract were hilarious - love the AVPM reference! But, um, where's Scorpius? :/ I really like where you're going with this story. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review! Love all the positive feedback and specific things you like! Report Review
AHDKDNWLDJDBDBSKAODKDJSLAPCBRYWOFBALALALALALALABLAH! (warning, the next message is a howler) IROBBEDGRINGOTTSANDGOTAWAY, HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HANGING ON TO YOUR EVERY WORD AND THEN YOU TELL ME THEY SNOGGED!!! GAH!! EVEN THOUGH YOUR DOING A WONDERFULLY AMAZING STORY FILLED WITH WONDERFULAMAZINGNESS, IM TERRIBLY UPSET!!! (howler ended) I shall be reading those stories and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!Author's Response: I will definitely try!! So sorry it's taking forever! Glad you're giving my other stories a shot!! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I KNEW SHE THOUGHT THAT TAYLOR WAS ALBUS'S GIRLFRIEND!! I KNEW IT!! Now it's time to tell you my favorite parts and quotes. Coming in at number one, without a doubt...
While maintaining your manliness, It's important to always keep up your own personal dignity during any sort of competition, event, brawl, fight, melee, match, game, or race.
Of course, the exception of this is to let the girl win. I know, it sounds pathetic, but there's a science to this.
HOW TO MAINTAIN DIGNITY WHILE PARTICITPATING IN A COMPTETITION, EVENT, BRAWL, FIGHT, MELEE, MATCH, GAME, OR RACE:
1. Always put yourself in 97.5%, and use the other 2.5% to make it look like you're only putting in 60% effort, to make it seem effortless.
2. Keep a poker face, especially during card games and mind games.
3. Make sure you don't look ridiculous
a. for example, do not wear a leprachaun hat while competing in a game of chess. Your oponent will view you as a lunatic.
I. The only exception to this is if you are trying to purposefully throw off your oponent, in which case, I recomend covering yourself in green body paint while wearing a ridiculous hat that makes noise.
4. When competing against a girl in a competition, event, brawl, fight, melee, match, game, or race, let her win every three games, at least.
a. If you really like this girl, you should let her win every other game so that she doesn't view you as a sore loser or big winner.
b. A good rule of thumb for this sort of thing is to measure how much effort she is putting in, then one up your effort to make it look like you're trying a tiny bit harder than her.
I. On this note, make sure you don't go past seventy percent, or she'll see you as trying TOO hard.
b. If the girl you are up against is Taylor Ackhart, then all I can say is good luck to you, and I hope you wear some sort of protective head gear. Just note that if you want to try and beat her, you should definitely put 100% effort into it, and disregard any rules about letting girls win.
NUMERO TWO, "Well, you guys do spend a hell of a lot of time together... in bed". Oh Tanner, such an odd child.
NUMBER THREE, (copy and paste your entire story.)
YOUR doing a TERRIFIC, job by the way. Each chapter is as good as the one before!Author's Response: Thanks again! Love hearing such good feedback and I LOVE hearing your favorite moments and such! So interesting to find out! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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