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Review #1, by LilyEPotter He Asked Me First

3rd September 2013:
Oh how sad! Poor Neville! To be in love with Luna and to go unnoticed. On one hand, it seems that Luna didn't have the same feelings towards Neville that he had for her.

Then for Neville to find out that she never found any of his notes or the ring he had given to her. Then his realization that if he had been a little braver and asked...

Great job!

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Review #2, by willow1 He Asked Me First

13th April 2013:
waaa! no fair! wwaaa!

Author's Response: Hehe - sorry!

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Review #3, by Shay_Gryff He Asked Me First

26th March 2012:
Poor Nevile... oh well! He still gets Hannah! They're a great match!

Beatuifuly written! I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
KEEP WRITING :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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