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Review #1, by RavenHairedGirl Blue, Gin, Phil and Jem Part I

27th July 2015:
Love love love this story, you have such a beautiful and amazing writing style!! James and Jenelle have to be end game! I hope there is more to Dom''s craziness because the whole confunding debacle is actual insanity. Please update soon, and I hope Katie is accepted by Fred because she seems lovely x

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Review #2, by greenbirds Blue, Gin, Phil and Jem Part I

16th June 2015:
it's so incredible comparing where jenelle and james are now to where they were in the opening chapters. their muggle studies trip seems like a century ago, as does jenelle's intimate friendship with dom and luke. so much has changed but i'm just so excited to see where it's all headed!

i love the realness of twy- i know i've said it before but i'm saying it again, the raw teenage language and interactions and thought process of jenelle's mind is so well written and authentic, which makes twy not only that bit more unique but also that bit more exciting. you're such an incredible writer. and the way you celebrate each characters' flaws, like you don't try to hide them or excuse them- i mean, just the fact that you've included them in the first place as opposed to pretending harry potter next gen characters are either BAD CHEATERS or GOOD VICTIMS ala almost everyone else in the rom/com genre is so so SO great.

yeah i mean i LOVE this! i love james, i love freddie, i love jenelle's family we've only now been introduced to really- katie reminds me of a girl i sit next to in history so i suppose i like her in the sentimental but also pitying way, she's sweet- but above all i love jenelle! this is so jenelle's story. from the way she describes the hate she's getting at hogwarts for being the James Potter Heartbreaker to her interactions with her siblings and her friends- also the way she's presented in the opinions of other characters, such as katie, and ESPECIALLY the way she's so refreshingly unconcerned about this finn/james love triangle... i mean, you know? so done with all this teenage angst over two boys fancying a character and the said character collapsing over the pressure of it all. i just love love love jenelle. (finn seems a bit boring but obv we haven't actually met him yet so ye very excited for him in upcoming chaptahzzz)

i don't really know what else to say apart from you have GOT to update soon. and your russia thing was SO SO COOL i am so happy fluorescent adolescent inspired you does this make us friends?? i hope so??

update sooon ♥ ♥ ♥

Author's Response: YOU'RE REVIEWS ARE ALWAYS THE BEST AND MAKE ME SO HAPPY. This is so sweet and amazing and literally everything you're saying is how I feel about Fluorescent Adolescent so ... cool. Very cool. And yesss ... Finn is quite dull right now, I actually still have no clue what kind of a person he's going to be!

I'll try to update as soon as I can! And of course we're friends! :) Thanks for this lovely, lovely review!

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Review #3, by mrsdeanthomas421 Blaze of Quidditch

6th June 2015:
the quidditch confrontation was the funniest thing I have read in a while and I already love Finn! I am loving the return of the gang to Hogwarts, yet this has alao solidified my anti-James feelings lol (I always seem to like the underdogs). keep up the good work!

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Review #4, by mathildarose Blaze of Quidditch

21st May 2015:
so good! i love blaze. also, go Nell!!

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Review #5, by greenbirds Blaze of Quidditch

9th May 2015:
i am so freaakking ecstatic you're back. blaze is honestly my own 14 year old brother (isn't it weird how cocky young teenage boys are all basically the same? obsessed with middle fingers, fight threats and the lad bible?)
urgh. you write so well. I MISSED THIS SO MUCH. sorryyy that's not okay how people are taking dom's side. why is jenelle getting a bad rep for being the only recent (if slightly over-reactive regarding james and luke but DEF not dom what an absolute idiot!! cannot stand her) person in that mess? apart from fred, ofc, but i suppose he wasn't really in that 'mess' to begin with. your quidditch scene was 11/10, amazing, top notch, fab fab fab and it's going to be difficult writing another quidditch spat after that one! which is annoying because they are so much fun to write. you are the queen of that.
please please update soon again ♥ ♥ i want to know everything !!! woo jenelle !!!

Author's Response: I'm freaking out that you're reviewed my story! I absolutely love Fluorescent Adolescent so this is so cool for you to say all these things! You're a brilliant writer. And thanks! That Quidditch scene was a rave to write, loads of fun. I just might have to do another one.
A new update should be coming in the next week!

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Review #6, by beka_wotter Close But No Cigar

22nd March 2015:
I really like this story, it's interesting and unique and I would really love it if you would update soon, I NEED MORE aha ;) this is so good though, can't wait to read more!

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Review #7, by kitty Close But No Cigar

16th March 2015:
that was INSANE.
in such a good way. dom is actually crazy.
i loved how you were consistently building it up to the moment of the big reveal. i have to say, i did think dom was behind it all
and i did suspect that fred was gay but the moment that got me was that dom confunded her to keep the lie going!
i did think parts of the plot were a little repetitive at times - like the whole muggle studies project. i felt like james and her were always having the same conversation - but i suppose that's good and realistic because it just proves how messed up the situation was! i liked the idea of he project as well - that oscar wilde quote is one of my favourites and i love how they represented it! and fred was so funny. i think he definitely added lightness and humor to the trip! kind of feel sorry for luke though. i agree with jenelle's decision to take time - after all, i would be angry if someone broke up with me for that! i think james is going to have to do alot to win her back!
anyway ten out of ten. this story has it all!

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Review #8, by mathildarose Close But No Cigar

18th January 2015:
YAY JENNY! You go girl. I love that she doesn't just fall for James. He screwed up. Also, Dom really needs to find a way to fix this friendship. I have to say I feel sorry for Luke. Poor guy. (I loved the whole scene with Jen helping James with the elbow pad. I could see the scene beautiful stuff)

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Review #9, by aeternalis Close But No Cigar

17th January 2015:
I feel like this story is so completely underrated. Why don't you have more reviews and favorites?? You write so beautifully. It's 4 AM and I work in 6 hours... I should have been sleeping forever ago. But your summary caught my eye and once I started reading, I couldn't stop. I'm entirely caught up in your (and Janelle's) world.
Okay, thoughts:
What. The. Heck. Dom. I'm conflicted. She sounds like she's so sorry, but it doesn't excuse what she did... Would she have honestly ever confessed to Jen if she hadn't been caught? :(
As for James... This chapter's James is wildly different from previous chapters. It's going to take some getting used to. But yes, he's a total idiot for handing his girlfriend off to his best friend due to spite.
Jen deserves time! Her life is a mess, and after James dragged her through hell, the least he could do is give her a week to sort out her thoughts.
Favorite moment: Luke and Jen are friends again! I love Luke, if James didn't exist I'd ship Lukelle 1000%
Favorite color, green. ;) Lol.
Please update soon! I'm so impatient and can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hahaha oh my god! That's so sweet, but I love just getting reviews like this honestly, it doesn't matter about the number! And lol "Lukelle" I love it. But, yes, Dom is probably super sorry but she's a jealous ex girlfriend that has unbridled access to magic. The options are endless. And yes, James really needs to see that Jen needs time!

Thanks so much for this lovely review! xx

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Review #10, by TheTenthWeasley Starlight - Part II

5th January 2015:
The suspense is literally killing me.

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Review #11, by WhiteFeather Starlight - Part II

25th December 2014:
When is something going to actually happen?! The tension is unbearable!

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Review #12, by mathildarose Starlight - Part II

24th December 2014:
duuude. this is good. but please have them talk. What is happening??

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Review #13, by Lola X Starlight - Part I

17th October 2014:
Really enjoyed reading this story! Please continue!

-Lola X

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Review #14, by mathildarose Starlight - Part I

8th August 2014:
gr. what the hell james! (this is good, i'm way too invested as you can see)

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Review #15, by Ashley Starlight - Part I

7th August 2014:
Alex seems like a genuinely nice person! I feel soo bad for her! But James and Janelle just need to have it out... properly when neither of them are drunk! Great chapter! Cant wait for the next one!

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Review #16, by Goldenginnyx A Liar, A Cheat And An Idiot

1st August 2014:
Love this story!! Can't wait to read about the party! Please be quick to update :)

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Review #17, by ashley A Liar, A Cheat And An Idiot

31st July 2014:
yay :) new chapter! more drama... that kiss! I just want James and Jenny to work it out!

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Review #18, by Ashley Coming Out The Bathroom - Part II

28th July 2014:
Great chapter! It makes soo much sense now why James broke up with Janelle. Sooo much drama!!

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Review #19, by ally_kat Coming Out The Bathroom - Part II

28th July 2014:
Love it! Thanks for the update! can't wait for the next chappie!

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Review #20, by crimson-creamcer Perfect Start

27th July 2014:
Is it cool that I'm totally shipping Jenny/Luke - Juke/Lenny perhaps? James sucks.

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Review #21, by mathildarose Coming Out The Bathroom - Part I

16th June 2014:
dude. why did he break up with her? & dom is not being a good friend. I need more, the tension is killing me.

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Review #22, by dhee The Afterthought

5th June 2014:
VERY MUCH ANNOYED AT PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE except jen! but its okay. i just wish jen actually moves on and make James feel angry and stupid for treating her that way. ollie and jen? meh. luke and jen? better and it might tip off Dom into actually caring. ples for a sooner update becuz no matter how much u screw with moi i love u

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Review #23, by dhee The Afterthought

5th June 2014:
VERY MUCH ANNOYED AT PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE except jen! but its okay. i just wish jen actually moves on and make James feel angry and stupid for treating her that way. ollie and jen? meh. luke and jen? better and it might tip off Dom into actually caring. ples for a sooner update becuz no matter how much u screw with moi i love u

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Review #24, by greenbirds The Discovery

2nd April 2014:
lovelovelovelove this! my favourite thing about it is the characters- they're so realistically written, you know? you don't smooth over their flaws but you bring them out and embrace them, and that's what makes them so vivid and exciting. jenelle's internal monologue has a fantastic range from witty and sharp to sensitive and it's all very relative; the james/alex/jenelle triangle is SO well done, i'm just so excited to read more! an d the plot, too- so original and it could be a bit risque but you've pulled it off magnificently. please update soon! bea x

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Review #25, by Emma The Discovery

31st March 2014:
YES FINALLY THE UPDATE! THIS CHAPTER WAS SERIOUSLY AMAZING. Like Jenelle's inner thoughts are basically my inner thoughts, I love her. I love James but I also really hate him and UGH ALEX.

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