I swear to god if you don't update soon I might cry. Such an amazing, well written story. Sooo good.Author's Response: Haha but I only just updated this chapter! My fingers will fall off soon if I don't take a break from writting :P
You're too lovely. Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read and review. I'll try to write the next chapter as fast as possible! Report Review
OH MY GOD JUST READ THIS ALL, IT'S SO FANTASTIC! Great writing; absolutely hilarious (my favourite so far was Flitwick's left buttock ;) ) but also really emotionally satisfying (WHEN WILL ROSE AND SCORP JUST GET TOGETHER ALREADY!? Even though I love the chase/complications), as well as really deep insight into anorexia nervosa (pulling on personal experience? Or you're just an absolutely amazing researcher/authentic believable writer). Please update as soon as possible, I am dying to read what happens next :D xxAuthor's Response: You're far more fantastic than my story - thank you so much for such a lovely review!
I love the chase so much, just in case that wasn't clear haha it's heaps of fun to write, and adds to the plot I think. I should bring it to an end soon though..
I write from both personal experience and extensive research. It's so easy for a diet to spiral out of control, but it was a few years ago now so everything is okay :)
I can't believe your read it all in one sitting, I hope you didn't lose any sleep! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to review, I really appreciate it and hope you read the next chapter too! Report Review
Gah, that last part!
Please.Author's Response: Ooomg I know right. I felt all gooey just writing it! Hehe the next update isn't far off, I promise. Thank you so much for reading! Report Review
You do know that it's been ages since the last chapter right? I was literally checking the site every single day.
Yet again, an amazing chapter. Scorp is adorable in this. And Rose on the way to recovery! Yay! Scorose Forver!
I loved it.
Update the next chapter soon.
I can't wait (all over again :P)Author's Response: Haha it has not been ages! Technically I'm in the middle of exam block, so be thankful that i updated at all :P kidding you're rad.
Ahh i love your reviews so much, they really feed my big head hehe. She's so close to getting better again, it really makes me happy.
Thanks for ANOTHER REVIEW!!! You honestly are the best. The next chapter will be up.. soon :P Report Review
I love this story! Thank you!Author's Response: No, thank you for taking the time to read it, and even leave a review! You rock :) Report Review
I can't tell you just how much your novel touches me. I've never had an eating disorder but the way your relate her story is so realistic and overwhelming. I don't think i've ever been as affected by a story than i have by yours. I've cried reading this. You've managed to make your reader - or at least me - feel like we're part of the story. I feel like i'm a part of Rose. The way she struggles with this disorder is so emotional i feel like i can actually understand the hardship she is going through. You're truly an amazing writer.
When i found out Scorpius was the one who came to save her and was the one behind the plan, my heart just melted. Why can't Rose just see how much he adores her? I'm sure in the following chapters things will be explained between them - at least i hope :) - and that her return to school will not be easy but with her friends, she'll persevere :)
I really love how you portrayed her disorder. You made it seem like for the longest time she didn't see it as a problem, and i think that's really realistic. I mean, i wouldn't know but it seems as though that would the case in reality.
Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful piece. I can't wait to read more. I'm so engulfed (is that a word?) into this, i really feel like i belong to the story too.
Thank you so much, i hope you'll update soon
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Well I guess the only thing I can say is that yours is the most AWESOME story I have ever read and when I saw you updated I fell from my chair.
Please keep writing, you are faboulous.Author's Response: What! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it :)
(don't fall off your chair, you might hurt yourself)
Next chapter is coming soon. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, you're rad. Report Review
YES THEY'RE OUT SO HAPPYAuthor's Response: Yay! Me too! :) Report Review
This was so beautiful and lovely!
I'm so glad they're free as well as on the road to recovery, yayay! It's really evident in this chapter why Rose was made head girl... she's such a great role model when it comes to her strength and is so lovely to Lucy :)
Ackk. Misunderstandings, although inevitable, suck. Scorpius is incredibly lovely and in the last scene he made my heart melt a little haha! He really is The Boy Who Refused To Let Go ;-)
Excited for the next one!Author's Response: You're beautiful and lovely!
I'm so glad you picked up on her head girl/leadership qualities in this chapter. I couldn't help but feel that apart from being good at organising things and studying, Rose wasn't the best head girl. I thought it was about time to show you what she could do!
Isn't he the cutest? He puts up with too much rubbish from her, I think.
Thanks so much for the fab review! Can't wait to show you the next chapter :) Report Review
I really hope Lucy will get better soon! Scorpius is so cute and I love rose for being such a gryffindor and getting out if that horrible place!!
Please update soon, I absolutely adore your story!!Author's Response: I hope so too! I'm happy that you liked this chapter. Next one is on its way! Report Review
omg I love this story! Please write more as soon as you canAuthor's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review :) you're rad.
The next chapter is waiting patiently to be validated! Shouldn't be too long at all. Report Review
omg there both out i'm so happy great chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
So, okay. That was probably one of the cutest, loveliest chapters I've ever read (and I've read Clash! ;-) )
By reading this story in one sitting (it's 4am...um) I can clearly see how much your writing has improved! It's really wonderful, even though it was already very good to start with :D
Also, Scorpius's 'you bewitch me' made me smile, cus it reminded me of the awesome Mr Darcy's 'you have bewitched me, body and soul' line hehehe ;)
So, yes. Thanks for this lovely chapter :)Author's Response: So, you rock basically. Thank you for taking the time to read, and to even leave reviews. It means a lot to me.
I love that you think I've improved. Every time I reread the first few chapters of this story, up until about chapter 9ish, I wince and change several things. That might be my perfectionist tendancies though - I probably won't ever be completely happy with the way some things are written. It's also a lot easier to write now that I know my characters and I know a bit more about my own style.
Okay sorry about the essay. Haha I might have unintentionally liberated that line from Pride and Prejudice! I love it so much!
Thank you again for taking the time to read my little story! I hope you have a rad day :))
I'm really confused... I think your chapters 9 and 10 might be in the wrong order? :SAuthor's Response: Ohmigosh haha thanks so much! I'd have never picked up on that. I think it's from accidently pressing one of the little arrows next to each chapter. Hopefully it's fixed now. Thanks for pointing it out! Report Review
w-o-w dude, you've got me hooked and it's only chapter 1 :p
Your writing flows really well and I thought the beach scene seemed really vivid. Hugo's an immature little twerp. Rose's friends seem lovely, though.
Excited to read on!Author's Response: Really?? Wow, thanks!! The first chapter is so important to a story, and I think I must have edited and rewritten this one over and over again.. in fact, there's another version going through validation right now :P
Haha I love your description of Hugo, very spot on. Unfortunately, he doesn't develop mentally until about halfway through. But what are brothers for, right?
So captivating!! I want more!Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! More is on the way ;) Report Review
please write the next chapter fast!as fast as you can!
oh!what happened to scorpius anyway?Author's Response: I'll try! About to start exam block at uni so everything wants to be done at once, but all I'm hearing is excuses ;) next chapter will be out in the next week or so!
Thanks heaps for taking the time to read, and review to boot! Report Review
i really love your story you are very talented!
i think its great that it wasn't all about scorpius, but that she actually did something on her own and helped the kids!
she's such an amazing character, i love your version of rose!!
and please update soon!!Author's Response: Naw haha thank you!
I personally, unless it's an epic, awesome plot line, get a bit bored when reading straight out romances. Don't get me wrong, there's some great ones out there, but I don't think I'd be interested as a writer to do that. So yeah, throw in an eating disorder, and I'm set!
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I really appreciate it, and I hope you keep reading! Report Review
i hope she is not going to be anorexic
i think she is not fat but curvy
that's why the boys looked her.
She thought they looked her with the bad way but they were like admiring her body.Author's Response: Very perceptive! She's beautiful just the way she is. Report Review
Oo-er!!! Oh scorpius, he really loves her, doesn't he? Very good so far, well done :)Author's Response: Hehe he sure does ;)
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it! Report Review
So... I kind of love EVERYTHING about this story.
It's well written, you've done a fab job with all the characters AND I WANT YOU TO UPDATE NOW.
Either would suffice.Author's Response: Naw thank you! Guess what? I'm writing the next chapter literally right now!
Lots of Scorose action ;)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I kind of love everything about you(r review)! Report Review
Oh my goodness this is better than amazing! I'm so hooked and can't wait for the next chapter!! You've got some serious talent, I'm very jealous:) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm so happy that you like Love Rules! Report Review
I LOVE this story, and I was sosososo excited to see you had updated!!!
I was disappointed when Rose left Hogwarts, but you've really made it work - this chapter had me on the edge of my seat! Your version of Scorpius is absolutely... delectable. So glad he's back in the story!
PLEASE keep writing! Waiting for updates on this story is killer, since it's so addictive. Awesome work!!Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! It's really appreciated :)
I couldn never stop writing this story! Love it far too much. Report Review
Whew! I am so relieved I can't even describe it! I was so afraid Rose would be imprisoned in there forever. I knew pretty much as soon as I saw how mistreated they were that all was not exactly on the up-and-up at that hospital. And now you have our Scorpius helping get her out! Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Couldn't leave her rotting away forever! I'm glad she's escaped too, I miss Hogwarts.
Thanks heaps for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it :) Report Review
I am beyond obsessed with this story. Like I stayed up all night to finish it. Pretty please update soon!Author's Response: Oh no, no sleep! Hehe I do that all the time with stories on HPFF.
Thank you for reading and leaving a review! It's greatly appreciated :) Report Review
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