Love it! Please finish it! Report Review
I'm from the US, so maybe its a NZ thing but what are Sealegs? Report Review
lovely chapter as always, i cannot wait for more! Report Review
HEY!! I'm sooo glad you decided to do a sequel.
FYI, WELLINGTON IS AWESOME!!! And its not ALL Hills ya know!!
And wind is good. Who wouldn't wanna live in Wellywood???
Great, story, keep on updating!!
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OMG WELLINGTON BASHING HOW DARE YOU! :P Report Review
This made me really, really want to visit New Zealand. Also, it made me wish it weren't 26F where I am *sigh*
What I mean to say was your description in this was lovely lovely lovely, an excellent start to what I'm pretty sure is gunna be a sweet sequel. I also thought the exchange between the boys and especially Georgia and Adelaide was cute. I think I had a similar one with my friends before leaving for college the summer after school ended. You did it really well and realistically, so it's cool to see you've kept that up.
As with the last one, this was well written. Have I mentioned you use present-tense really well? Normally I don't like it, but you do it super awesomely. Can't wait for an update!
-Elle :) Report Review
I cannot tell you how happy it makes me to see you've posted a sequel. I missed Adelaide and Gerogia! I lovee Georgia. This is a great first chapter and the dialogs are great. The vibe of this story just puts me in a special place and it really made my day! Please update soon!Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love my characters too :P I'll update soon, hopefully - within a week. Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
-pouts- I wanted first review. But I'm mostly just happy that I found this story because YAY I get more Adelaide! Winning.
Not to mention more Georgia, who I had been missing most terribly. She and Adelaide are just about the best pair ever. They've got such an awesome dynamic - everything they say just seems so real, and I can totally picture two of my friends happily bickering away like those two.
Also there is Henry and that makes me happy because oh man, I like Henry. He's awesome.
(Also, might be off my rocker, but I'm pretty sure said school where Ella's going is mentioned in the Thinkery. Yes? No? Maybe so?)
This chapter had this perfect balance of wistful reflection and friendly banter. It's sort of sad to think this could be one of the last times that they're all together at once... but I guess that's part of growing up.
Love this beginning. Already love this story. I can't wait for more - as soon as I saw this, I got so excited. And then when I finished reading it, it felt like I had come home. ♥ HOORAY FOR MORE ADELAIDE!Author's Response: Whoo! I'm so glad you're back!
I've missed Georgia as well. I'm actually really sad I have to split those two up and send them off with their boyfriends instead of each other. They bicker away like I do with my friends :P
Henry is pretty awesome. I look forward to writing more Awesome Henry.
You're not off your rocker! Good spotting, the European University of Sorcery is the one featured in The Thinkery! As far as I'm concerned, that place is now canon.
It is sad that it could be the last time they're together as a group - I never realised how much I loved them being a group until I decided to split them up. I'm horrible.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you're back, and you're looking forward to the update! I'll try and get another chapter out before I begin my Epic Homeward Bound Journey (getting from my little town in Japan to my little town in NZ takes a while, y'see) and look forward to seeing you back :) Report Review
Loved it! I especially loved all of their chatter, because it was so realistic, and /exactly/ what people do - I've been in convos like that more often than necessary :/ Anyway what I'm saying is that quite often you read conversations that would /never/ happen in real life so it was refreshing :) I can't wait to see what goes on next! I love that Scorpius was there with them! And with Georgia ;) So happy about that! :DAuthor's Response: I love writing chatter. Fabulous, fun, pointless chatter. I'm not really big on plot. I do plot by the seat of my pants.
I SHIP GEORGIA/SCORPIUS SO MUCH IT'S ALMOST PAINFUL.
Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the review! Report Review
Yay! The gang is back...can't wait to see what they do next! Please post next chapter soon! Tnx! :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm happy to have the gang all back together again - even if it is only for a chapter :P I'll get the next one out soon, thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh man, it's really late here but I couldn't resist reading and reviewing this ASAP. Some of my favorite parts: Scorpius' ideas about how girls operate and Georgia's response, everyone's secret affair, reading Henry's name again... And I'm just generally excited that the gang is back even if they are going their separate ways. Of course, they were separated for a good part of Southern Cross too.
Also, I've got English friends who do call dinner tea. Scorpius' confusion stood out to me because I've said similar things, but I'm American and they're English. Maybe not all English people say tea... Not sure.
I'm running out of things to say and it is late... So... Yay for sequels! And yay for Henry!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing even though it was really late :P
I loved those conversations. They were fun. I was going to say I'll miss Georgia, but she'll crop up every third chapter because I'm going to be switching perspectives all over the show for this one.
I can never be entirely sure what's native NZ slang and what's also used in other countries, and I don't have my go-to British friend at the moment because she's in NZ and I'm not.
Yay for sequels! Yay for Henry! And yay for your review! Report Review
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