This is the best fanfiction EVER, please don't take too long between chapters, I'm going insane here ! Report Review
Still kind of hoping that Dan will die, though the chances seem slim. I'm really proud of Aimee though for that whole monologue she had in the hospital ward. She's really starting to figure things out be strong. You keep saying that James isn't even sure if he likes her and blah, blah. But I know he does, even if he doesn't realize it yet. He clearly cares about her in some way for always being there for her. And he's also clearly attracted to her. So maybe his feelings aren't exactly strong, but there's something there. He just doesn't know it. Or won't face it. And the same goes for Aimee but I'm convinced she likes him a significant amount. I think they're almost friends.
James and Mark being friends doesn't really surprise me because for whatever reason I kind of assumed they would be on friendly terms, at least. They played quidditch together so they have something in common, a bond, memories, etcetera. I do wonder why neither of them has mentioned that they're actually friends to Aimee, though. That's sketchy.
And I feel bad for Mark. He acted on instinct while he was panicking when he left Dan behind. Yeah, it was rotten of him, but I don't think he would ever do something like that again. Sort of like Finny and Jean in "A Separate Peace". I don't know if you've read that? It's good, I read it freshman year. But at the same time, though I feel bad for Mark since I really do think he's a good guy, he deserves whatever comes to him. Sure, the situation affected his behavior, but he put himself in the situation. He planned to do something he knew was wrong. And he had to have known there was some sort of risk involved. He wanted to rough Dan up a bit and went to far. His intentions were never good...I guess everyone has a dark side.
(You should write soaps -you would make millions ;) ) Report Review
amazing. i left an epic review before, but it got deleted, so i cbb to write it again; but just thought you should know i loved this chapter :D Report Review
ELLIE! You're all for plot twists aren't you? :P Mark? I didn't see that coming! I never took him for someone like that hey ho i guess we all have our dark sides!
Ah. Jaimee moments! EEP! I absolutely loved those! And i loved how you brought Aimee's feelings for Dan. And you told us about the relationship they had in depth! It gave us a lot more insight as you why she was so heartbroken when he left!
Anyways, update soon and good luck for your GCSE's! :) Report Review
but I have this scary / sad thought that either Aimee over heard and will hate Mark forever or James takes the fall and Aimee hates him forever ! Report Review
I did not see that one coming. I LOVED THE JAMES AND AIMEE PART! I was excited...buttt MARK?!??!!? HOWWW???! I mean.urghh im so conflicted.
great chapter by the way! Report Review
HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF JESUS
i think it was silly for aimee and james to talk about how their relationship is fake because if dan could still hear what they were saying...then...
i don't dan will die.
ALSO OMG WHAT MARK IS THE REASON DAN'S DEAD-ISH WOW, THAT WAS UNEXPECTED TO SAY THE LEAST.
and i think you already mentioned before that mark and james were on the same team in hogwarts, and they were friends or something?
UPDATE SOON! Report Review
holy crap you did not just leave us hanging there. oh my god i can't even begin to fathom everything right now. so much happened in this chapter oh my god what. what. whatt.
the jaimee moments are making me happy Report Review
Well then, things escalated VERY quickly. As bad as I feel for Dan, my pity for him was kind of overshadowed by all the cute James/Aimee moments in this. I was practically squeezing at all the nice things that James was doing and all of the cute stuff going on.
And then Mark shows up and says that he basically killed Dan and honestly, I should be hella mad right now but I'm still trying to get over the shock of the fact that Mark may or may not have killed someone.
That was just a major plot twist. Oh my God, what's going to happen, I don't know! OH MY GOD THINGS ARE GETTING INTENSE! Report Review
Holy shit talk about DRAMA. That cliffhanger asdfasdgfadfgh! I can't believe it. And Aimee, girl do you not see that James is falling for you?! Ahhh. Can't wait for the next update!!! Report Review
That chapter was beautiful!
I'm so glad she realized how bad Dan was for her and decided that she was done, even if he did wake up again! I feel oddly proud, even if she isn't a real person.
Jaimee moments:) Them actually happening is so close, I can smell it!
That twist at the end, though. We all make mistakes, and Mark's mistake... I don't know. Wow. Report Review
As much as I absolutely love the story line and characters, I just find that there is too much muggle stuff incorporated into the story. I know that it's not from her family background because her family are all magical (Jack to yet become known), so I don't understand why her mother went to a muggle hospital and not St. Mungos. This review may seem quite negative but other than this I love the story. Report Review
oh my God I loved it! I too have been GCSE mad (year 10, boo!) so I haven't been on here for a while and I come back and both Summer and Bang have updated?! It's like christmas! I loved this chapter, I think I'm a slightly calmer version of Laurie. Yeah, that's right! Plus this whole Dan crash has mixed it up and that makes things interesting- plus James definatly likes Aimee- and its brilliant :)
You keep soldiering on, not too long now and these GCSE's are OVER! Report Review
WOW i love this story more and more every day! i love that james has tattoos its so hot! and dan dying?! im afraid thats gonna make him go on aimees soft side and shes gonna feel bad and everything!:(
its so cute how people notice changes in james and aimee! like they're so good for each other even if they dont see it yet.
nways cant wait for the next chapter, update soon please! Report Review
HAHAHAHA! I'm sorry I probably shouldn't be laughing because of the whole Dan dying thing, but I really loved this chapter! I just wanted to ask how long you think your story is gonna be ? Cause personally I would be okay if it lasted forever! :)
Oh! By the way , I loved the fact James had Lily's and Albus' names tattooed on him! Report Review
This is so good! I love it even though I'm not normally the biggest fan of next generation stuff! It's truely truely fab! Good luck in your exams, btw. ;) :) Report Review
hahaha I'm laughing so hard right now. I was really confused over some words until I got it: it's April Fools day! so every relationship is a relationboat, every 'hair' is 'ears', 'arms' are 'garden shed'? and maybe 'face' is 'underwear'. so good and funny :D
but now to the chapter: It was really amazing! I liked the subtle changes in James' and Aimee's relationboat :P to being closer - friends or even getting to more - and how they each react to that change. I also love the new characters from Aimee's work, they're a lot of fun, especially Laurie :D
anyway, I hope you'll update again soon, can't wait! :) Report Review
WOW um ok that was an amazing ill start with that i love this story and James and Aimee are the cutest couple. I really don't like Dan but killing him seem a bit harsh besides i like him having to watch Aimee be with someone else and him not being able to have her. I cant wait for the next chapter great job.Author's Response: ha, yeah, this chapter was quite full on at the end. but dan isn't dead, nor have I ever said that i'm going to kill him off - all that we know right now is that dan has been in an accident and aimee is taking it badly. I like james and aimee together too ;) thanks so much for the review!
ellie :) xx Report Review
I hope he dies. Oh, actually, I don't know. I mean, I think he probably is going to die or maybe Aimee will be the brilliant one to save him? Or he'll just get lucky. But on the one have I would be really happy I he dies because I freaking hate him and he sucks, but then that might make Aimee, the ridiculously sympathetic sweetheart that she is, feel bad for moving on from him. Which she was doing. High she was almost done with. So that's annoying because that would be like taking a step backward. Unless she's strong through this and grieves, but gets over it and realizes that they weren't in all likelihood going to get back together anyway. Because they shouldn't because they were horrible together because Dan sucks.
But then if he lives...he'll still be around. And he may try harder to win her over and he may not be able to leave to travel right away because he'll be recovering. And that would be annoying because I WANT HIM GONE.
Just kill him off.
I'm sure you've probably already decided where this is going but just in case you haven't, that's my vote.
And James. I was loving him being all flirty. It was sort of creepy and weird and random but I was loving it. And then he had to go be a jerk. And I don't like him much at all anymore. Does he seriously see her as a prostitiute? I know she's practically an escort, but what he did was just so wrong. And how would you feel if that happened to you? If someone just expected that sort of thing from you all of a sudden? That would be horrible and mortifying and...wow, I'm surprised Aimee wasn't avoiding him like the plague and really upset.
What was going on with him? Was he being silly? Because he seemed serious and that just not okay..
It's sort of hard to like him now, you know? Before he was rude and kind of mean and annoying and whatnot, but they were sort of becoming friends...now it's all just weird. I don't know, maybe it's only me that thinks that? Did I interpret it wrong?
I love Molly, though, and I'm glad Aimee has some new friends. Sienna and Laurie seem nice.
(PS sorry if this is a mess, I'm very sleepy :3 ) Report Review
please please update soon!
omg i cant believe you killed off dan. i cant feel like i can even talk about how happy i am about JAMIEE because like, dan's gonna die.
unless, this is a plot twist.
it's probably a plot twist.
what if its not a plot twist?
OMG DAN IM SORRY FOR SAYING I HATE YOU, PLES DONT DIE. Report Review
At first I was nearly crying because of the beginning and then I got to the end and I stopped laughing and my reaction was more along the lines of "well, things escalated quickly."
Now I'm just kind of sitting here shocked out of my mind an mindlessly typing this because I am that shocked. You really know how to make a plot twist, don't you? Hot damn, well good luck with your GCSE's! Report Review
Omg, Dan isn't dead yet is he? I didn't like him very much but dying would be rather extreme!
And - James and Aimee moments! I nearly died! (not literally)
And you're taking your GCSE's at the end of the year? Like as in november? Because i'll be taking mine in May. So since you're revising so much i thought you would be taking yours at the same time! Sorry - i'm just curious!
Anyway - update soon! :DAuthor's Response: nooo, nooo, dan isn't dead yet, he's on life support potion in st mungo's. he got into a car accident on the way to aimee's place to see her.
ahaha, i love writing jaimee moments, i've got to say.
and when i say 'at the end of the year', i mean the end of the academic year - yeah, may & june of this year. sorry for making that unclear. anyway, thank you so much for the review!
ellie :) xx Report Review
WHAT? WHAT? DAN'S DEAD? WELL POSSIBLY DEAD. WOW. JUST WOW.
i absolutely love this story, and obviously i ship aimee and potter as much as a person can ship a make-believe couple but..
KILLING OFF DAN? YOU MAD GENIUS.
amazing story, really. update son. PLEASE. I BEG YOU!Author's Response: YEP, POSSIBLY DEAD. BECAUSE I DON'T LIKE MAKING DECISIONS LATE AT NIGHT.
i hated writing them in the beginning, together, because i just didn't have anything to say between the pair of them. but now i like writing them more than james & summer, which is saying something.
when you say 'mad genius', i imagine myself sitting at a keyboard typing like a mad person and cackling.
it's three in the morning, you know how it is.
thanks for the review ;)
ellie :) xx Report Review
This may sound horrible, but I'm okay with Dan dying. Aimee deserves better than some guy who is going to make promises he can't keep. Plus I really think James likes her, but doesn't know how to tell her.Author's Response: ahaha, nah, it doesn't sound horrible. dan's been hanging around aimee for too long when he's not wanted. i don't know if i have the heart to actually kill him yet, but aimee does deserve better, you've got that one right.
ellie :) xx Report Review
ohh i really love this chapter (:
james/aimee all the way!
but god dan is so annoying, why wont he just leave her alone?Author's Response: aw, thank you so much!
i'm thinking jaimee - it's a regular name & a couple name.
and he wont leave her alone because he thinks he "loves" her.
ellie :) xx Report Review
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