Aww! It's soo cute! I love it! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you :) And sorry everyone for the lack of update, I'm revising hard at the moment D': Report Review
that was a cute scene! i thought it was adorbs, just keep at it Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try and update soon, but I'm currently revising, so it might be slow... Report Review
I have just discovered this story and devoured all six chapters!! I think it's a really promising start to a story and I think you right from James' POV really well I can't wait to find out more about why Lara was crying in the Owlery and I really like the blossoming relationship between her and James! Update Soon! :)Author's Response: aw thank you :)I will update soon hopefully, but I can't quite decide what to do this chapter... it won't be too long though. Thank you again :D Report Review
This is a really, really good story. It's so light hearted (so far, anyway) and I like the easy friendship, family, being-at-Hogwarts side of this.
I like your characters. James is pretty chill and I like Lara. ...In this chapter it seemed a bit like Lara was written purposefully 'cool' or something. Like, she's got oh so much in common with James and... I mean, sure, that's cool. But it seemed a tad forced or overdone, I guess.
I liked their game of thruth or dare. And that they didn't get piss drunk. Yay for butterbeer and Howarts kids.
...You write well and I'm looking forward to reading where this is going. You've got a fan, here ;)Author's Response: Thank you :) I totally know what you mean about it being forced, I thought that when I was writing it, but it's so hard :'( Keep reading because it's not light hearted forever... the main plot will kick in in a few chapters ;D Report Review
Hello! I like your book! its cute, cunning and awsome! Cant wait to read more! Keep at it! Author's Response: Thank you :) I will update soon... Report Review
Hey, you write really well. You have a knack for James' POV, too, it seems. I really like it, so far. Your characters are interesting and pretty chill. I like the humour and the way you write their life at Hogwarts. Spin the bottle is not something I think they would still do, especially at that age, with so many relatives and younger students, but whatever...
Sweet that James sneaks out to owl his parents.
Lara seems great so far. I like James, obviously. And his friends.
Anyway... good job!Author's Response: :) I know what you mean about spin the bottle, but I wanted to get in some Scorpius/Rose... Thanks for the great review! Report Review
I like this story so far a lot and cannot wait to see where you will go from here with it. I hope we can get some more James/Lara interaction in the next chapter or atleast some time in the not so distant future of this story. I hope you can update soon cause I'm looking forward to reading more.Author's Response: Thank you! There will be some more interaction between those two next chapter and lots more later in the story ;D Next chapter is waiting now... Report Review
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