Reading Reviews for Harry Potter 2 A New Beginning
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Secret Prolgue-creating a new beggining

14th June 2012:
There were a lot of words that weren't spelled right.In the title you write beginning right,but throughout the story she don't spell it right.Plus,sometimes you didn't capitalize Hermione's name and didn't capitalize beginning sentences.

Author's Response: real sorry it was my first fanfic ever and im try kk ?

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Review #2, by hermy_xxx Hogwarts and other unbelievables...

23rd March 2012:
dis k an i hopeee u rite mawr hah (i know thats very bad grammar :)

Author's Response: thank you sooo much for reviewing!!! and thanks ill keep going!!

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