There were a lot of words that weren't spelled right.In the title you write beginning right,but throughout the story she don't spell it right.Plus,sometimes you didn't capitalize Hermione's name and didn't capitalize beginning sentences.Author's Response: real sorry it was my first fanfic ever and im try kk ? Report Review
dis k an i hopeee u rite mawr hah (i know thats very bad grammar :)Author's Response: thank you sooo much for reviewing!!! and thanks ill keep going!! Report Review
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