I'm so freaking sad. Reese's childhood friend gone. She can't ever seem to keep anyone in her life.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry! But yeah, Reese has a hard time keeping people in her life. :(

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Oh my god is Reese going to go into surprise labour?! Are they going to name the baby Jordan?!

Ahh I'm so excited for the next chapter! But I'm so sad about Jordan. Poor Reese, I hope this doesn't tip her over the edge.

Well, I'll still love this FF either way.

mrsronaldweasley262

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not! You'll have to keep reading to find out. ;)

I'll try and update soon, I've just got a lot on my plate right now!

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Haha drunk texts are the best!! It's probably a bad thing that I can read them without any trouble even if they make no sense.

I Love Reese, and for her choosing the second option, to be honest I would have as well. Much more fun :D

"He took his pants off and showed me the scratches" - I laughed so hard at this for no real reason, but I think you mean trousers rather than pants.

"Do I just throw it to you like a Quaffle? What the hell is 'catching' a baby?" - Oh god, funny thing is I could imagine them doing this though :)

Aww bless Reese for freaking out so much. Although if I was her I would probably be freaking out even more.

Awww, I got a fuzzy feeling inside when they Weasley women threw Reese a baby shower. That is so sweet!!

I love the whole Fred was meant to be a girl and Fleur thinking Dom was gonna be a boy. It just makes me laugh especially after the day I've had because we were on about it with our one tutor.

I'm with Reese baby clothes are too cute, I mean it's mad to think that something so small will into them.

Reece...Awww :'( juts aww, I could never imagine losing any one of my lot. Aww. ♥ Hugs to Reese.

10/10
-Potterfan310

P.s I can't believe it's nearly coming to an end :(

Author's Response: haha I personally haven't received any but I've seen drunk tweets and I just kind of popped my phone out and tried to text as if I was drunk. :p

Being mean is so fun. :p And James is a big boy, he can handle that!

Oh do trousers and pants actually mean something different in England? I thought they just meant the same thing, so I just left it. I'll change it soon! Thanks for pointing that out!

haha nooo! I doubt that they would throw their baby at each other! :p They're silly, but not THAT silly! I looked up a birth form on the net and that came up and I was SO confused. So I thought Reese and James would be too. :p

ahaha Reese is a bit of a loon, she's always going to be freaking out. She's a drama queen. ;)

The Weasley women are sweet, aren't they? I love writing them! :D

I actually read something online where people prepared to have a girl (because that was what they were told) and then the baby popping out as a boy. I thought it was so funny so I wanted to put that in there. And of course it would be Fred. :p

Whenever I see baby clothes I get so excited and squeal because they are always SO CUTE. I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW CUTE THEY ARE. :'D

It's one of the hardest thing anyone ever goes through, losing a friend. I wanted to put that out there because a lot of people don't realise HOW hard it is, and how much your life changes because of it.

I know, it's so close! I don't know what I'm going to do after I finish it! The only thing that's ever on my mind is this fic! I don't know what I'm going to think about?!

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Nicole seems like such a sweet heart. Fred better not break her heart. Promise me. Pretty please!

Author's Response: I didn't even think of breaking her heart but now that you've mentioned it...

haha I'm just joking! I won't, I promise. :)

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"some cool peeps I could hang out with, yo. I should be a gangster. It works really well, yo." - This just had me giggling so much, but I'm not 100% sure why, although it may have something to do with my friend saying something like this when we were on the phone the other day :)

I absolutely love right now, it's so nice to see him in a different light and he and Nicole seem really good together.

Drunk James - I just want to pick him up and squish him, he truly makes an awesome drunk (if that's possible?)

Oh god, Scorp being British = best thing :D "It's just bollocks that you can't drink tonigh', innit" -No one can say bollocks quite like the British :)

OHMYGOD!!! SAY WHAT!!! Are you kidding me, Al is in love with Reese!
I'm not fond those Weasley boys right now, nothing can ever happen to Jarissa ♥ I genuinely though he was being serious and I kept whispering 'no'

Good on Reese for whacking them both around the head.

Awww, the ending aww. So sweet!! I love them so much, Jarissa ♥ ♥

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

Author's Response: ahahaha I must be psychic! :p I just wanted to add it in because I'm a bit weird. :p

I'm guessing you meant Fred because of the Nicole thing, you've just forgotten his name. :p Yeah, they are sweet together. I really like writing them! :D

haha I just imagine Drunk!James to be the 'I love you' type. I always have haha. :p

That was my most favourite part. I think I'm going to write another scene where Scorpius is drunk just so I can write him again. It was SO fun to write! :p

hahaha there are so many fanfictions on the James/OC/Al love triangle so I thought I'd do a mini parody. I've never really liked those types of stories (mostly because I hate all love triangles :p) so I thought I'd pop that in there for a giggle. :p

I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for another amazing review! You're always so kind! ♥

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Another great chapter, I really thought Al was being serious there! Nice romantic ending too :)

Author's Response: thank you! Yeah, I've seen so many James/OC/Albus fics and I knew I would NEVER do that so I just wanted to put a little bit of a parody in there haha. :p

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I LOVE Lily, she is one of my favourite next gen kids. She's brilliant.

Fred with a girlfriend, the shock. I've always read Fred II as a prankster along with James and half the time he's always chasing off fan girls with a stick so it's so nice to see him with a girlfriend, a serious girlfriend!!!

"with a frypan" - I was reading this bit and I got totally confused and kept thinking what the hell is a frypan and then I realised. I think you mean frying pan not frypan.

Oooh even better, I hope Fred's girlfriend is a muggle, I mean it's rarely done one of the Weasley/Potters with a muggle so it'd be really interesting to see. Aww Freddie, I love you right now. And you, Kayla that's so original!!! I really hope we get to meet Nicole, although it may be tricky to write???

"because Fred or Louis was getting" - Try changing 'was' to 'were' so it flows better.

I'm wondering is Jordan the daughter of Katie Bell, I know it might not make sense if she moved to France when Reese started Hogwarts, but maybe she went to Beauxbatons???

Jarissa = ♥ ♥
Lionel is just adorable, I love that he's stealing James' socks. Haha :D

Can't wait for the next chapter.

10/10
-Potterfan310

Author's Response: haha I love Lily as well! She's adorable!

I've always seen Fred as someone who just 'accidentally' gets into a serious relationship. He always tries to be flirty and a bachelor but then some awesome girl comes along and WTCHHH! (whipping noise) :p

Er, no. I call them frypans. I just asked my brother and he does too. Maybe it's an Australian thing? :p I'm pretty sure it's a word, as it doesn't come up with a squiggly red line in Word? :p I don't know, but yeah. Frypan=frying pan.

She is a Muggle. She's not that tricky to write (I've already written the next chapter) but yeah, I found something on sign language on Tumblr and I was like, "What if one of my characters was deaf?" So yeah, that little tidbit popped up! :D

UGH. Thank you! I usually write these chapters when I'm half asleep so thank for pointing that out! :D

Nah, she's just a normal Muggle. I really just wanted to use the 'Bell' pun hahaha :p

The next chapter will come when I have finished writing my essay. Those are the terms that I'm currently sticking to. :p But I've only got a little bit left, so hopefully it'll be up soon! :)

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Jarissa = perfect ♥

They are so adorable together, as well as Lionel who is a cute kitty :)

I'm kind of with James on this, I mean I was Christened and my Nan went to church but the sentence James said sums me up, "Well it’s not like we go to church every Sunday but… I don’t know, I still consider myself as a Christian"

Hehe, it's strange reading about Christmas when it's the start of March :)

I really like that Harry (and the family) keeps in touch with petunia and Dudley but happened to Vernon? I'm curious.

Dudley's wife seems a lot like Reese's mother, any relation? lol :D

I love Lily and Al, they're such great characters!! Especially Lily's reaction to feeling the baby kick and what she said to Reese about her Lysander breaking up, it made me giggle!

Can't wait for the next one!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx :)

Author's Response: haha I'm glad you enjoyed!

I was Christened (but as a Greek Orthodox) so I've just grown up with the notion that your baby gets Christened. Even though I'm not particularly religious (sentence with James also sums my religious beliefs up), I still feel like babies should be Christened. Just my belief though. :)

It was so strange writing it! I kept getting excited and then remembering it was April (that was when I wrote it) and getting sad. :p

DAMMIT I FORGOT TO ADD THAT PART IN! D:

Well basically, Vernon (sadly) died when Lily was about 2-ish. I was going to make Reese ask but I completely forgot! Thanks for the reminder!

No relation, just arrogant haha. :p

I love writing Al and Lily, I really do. They're so much fun! :D

I'm going to put the next one in the queue right now! :D

Thanks for another amazing review! ♥

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Awww! They're just adorable! But seriously, is the baby coming soon? Are they going to break-up? Is some awful, heart wrenching tragedy going to take place? What's going to happen at Christmas? Between her parents? Between Louis and Colleen? (that question has been on my mind for ages!) I don't know, so update!

Author's Response: haha thank you! :)

Keep reading to find out. ;)

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Hi, i really enjoy your story!! hope you don't abandon it like some authors haha- tho i doubt u will :)
i like reese's character, although sometimes i do find her a bit much, but it is completely understandable with what has happened so far, and nobodies perfect!!
Keep it up xx
p.s. sorry about you having to go back to school!! haha i have exams at the mo so am fairly sympathetic- and if u haven't realised that means I'm reading your story instead of revising!! oops :/

Author's Response: Hi! Glad to hear that you're enjoying it! :D

Don't worry, it's too close to the end to abandon it now. I did have a moment of doubt but it's gone. :) I'm definitely finishing it! :D

I'm glad you find Reese a bit too much, I've made her into a Mary-Sue a bit. :/ I'm happy to hear that she has some flaws haha! :p

School does suck. :( BUT THERE IS LESS THAN SIX MONTHS LEFT FOR ME I'M SO EXCITED!!! :D

Thanks for the lovely review, and hopefully you go well in your exams! ♥

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I'm almost crying. I never cry. YOU ARE AMAZINGG

Author's Response: aw I'm sorry!

But thank you for your comments and review. :)

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Great Chapter and i loved Merlin I watched it on Netflix

Author's Response: thank you!

Merlin was my favourite show. I'm still so gutted that it's over. :'(

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Omg. Super hooked to this story and wanting to keep reading but figured I'd review and say I love this!
~M

Author's Response: Aw thank you! :D

I've got chapters 28 and 29 written, and currently working through 30! There's going to be some updates soon! :D

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I like this so far! I'm definitely going to continue reading :)
You're a good writer and this story seems different from other James/oc stories I've read.
~M

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! :D

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I hope Reese's mother has toilet paper stuck to her arse.

Author's Response: ahahahahahahaahahahahaha

I laughed SO loudly at this! :p

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"Sherlock came over to my old apartment and found that I had left the baby there, along with Merlin. And John just sat in the corner sipping tea as Arthur tried taking the sword out of the microwave." - AHHH, SO MANY FEELS!!! I LOVE THESE SENTENCES SO MUCH!!! Yay Reese!

"So then I turned to Muggle television shows. And it may have been the worst decision of my life." - I feel for Reese I really do, not only do I agree I feel her pain as well. So many Tv shows/books have ruined my 'life'.

Aww bless James, for sorta keeping calm. God knows what he'll be like when Reese is in actual labour.

Poor Reece having to put up with her mother, who seems like such a cow. *Hugs and squishes her tightly*

Zoe's dress sounds so pretty!!!

I liked the wedding and thought the henna and stuff was cool! :) Nate is as awesome as he normally is. ♥

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

Author's Response: ahaha I had just finished watching Sherlock that day and I always cry/talk about Merlin so I needed to put it out there. I was having a very feel-y day that day. :p

Ah yes, that is a quote from my life. I just sit in a ball and sob over everything now. It has also ruined my 'life'. :p Good to know we're both fangirls! :p

Reese's mum is a cow. I considered having a reason as to why she's a cow but I was doing some stuff for school and found out some people are cows for no reason. So yeah... Reese's mum is a cow for no reason. :p

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OK, I simply love your story. I think it's marvelous. But, to the reason I'm reviewing. Could you please update a little bit faster? I know you have lots of other things going on, ofc, but it pains me to have to wait so long for the next chapters. I have been following your story since chapter 4, btw. You are one of my favourite authors... :)

MVH
Justine Marilyn

Author's Response: I'm glad you seem to be liking the story, and I'm happy to hear/see that you've been with me from the beginning! That really means a lot to me! :D

However, I do have a life outside of HPFF. I've just been away on a camping trip for a week so that's the reason this review hadn't been responded to.

I'm also doing my HSC - aka my most important year of school. It will get me into university and then lead me to a better life, so I do have to put that ahead of my writing.

I also have a lot of personal issues happening and that also takes up time to write. I also need to sleep, a lot, so that takes about 12 hours (on a good day).

I think I update fairly quickly. I could leave HPFF for this whole year, and completely focus on school and trying to work out my issues with my friends. But I haven't. I've put my other W.I.P on hold, just so I could finish this one, for all you lovely readers.

Also, I'm EXTREMELY close with my family, cousins, aunts and uncles included. We do A LOT together. We just went on the camping trip I mentioned earlier together. I need to spend time with them, they're the most important people in my life, especially now with this really stressful year.

So please respect that I have a life and I can't dedicate all my time to HPFF. I try and fit in as much as I can, and I think I've got it really well. I thought I was updating really quickly, because I was actually planning on having little to no time.

I don't mean to be rude or anything, it's just that I wanted to make it clear that I can't dictate my life around my fanfiction.

Thanks for the review, and hopefully you'll like the other chapters. :)

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Ohmygod, I love that they've gone to different restaurant's to get free food.

Nate is really adorable *squishes him tightly* and him and Reese together, they're brilliant!

The cousin who smells like soup, haha nice touch. There always seem's to be one person in a family who smells of something. :)

Oooh I really like that Nate works in the magical world and for Harry, it's a small world eh. It seems like a really interesting job.

Aww no, fighting between Jarissa :( THEY HAVE TO GET THROUGH IT!!! THEY JUST HAVE TO!!! Jarissa for life!!! ♥ ♥

Can't wait to see what happens next and if Jarissa have sorted their problems out.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: ahaha I'm glad you liked it! :p

They do get through it, don't worry. :D

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great chappie! although it's the indian weddings that do henna not sri lankan! :)

(although if do - then well you got it right :) )

Author's Response: Thanks!

See, I know friends who HAVE done it so I'm not too sure. I know Hindu weddings do it, but I think Sri Lankan also do it, I just wanted to be sure.

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pls keep writing! i love ur work n m nt sure about sri lanka, but in india in hindu weddings we do thhe whole henna thing...

Author's Response: I will, don't worry! :)

Yeah, I Googled it, I've seen my Sri Lankan friends do it, but I'm not 100% sure, that's why I asked. I know Hindu weddings do it, but I wasn't too sure on Sri Lankan weddings... :p

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I begging you to please update soon. My heart shall cease to live if you died or something. The ring thing was hilarious! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: I'll try to as soon as possible! :)

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Please write more soon!! :)

Author's Response: I'll try! I'm having a bit of difficulty but I'm hoping it's going to be up soon! :)

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Poor Reese, freaking out like that. She sure does have parental issues if she feels that way about marriage.

I thought it was such a British thing about the tea. One can never have enough cups (Or so I'm told, since I don't actually like tea).

Reese you little beauty for working it out, not too mention my prediction was right!!!

I panicked alot when James was telling Reese that they might be too serious. So, so, so glad there won't be any break-ups. (At least I hope not)

I have so many feels for the chapter because it's just so adorable and filled with fluff!! Jarissa, Scorose and the Weasleys = Perfect and a very happy me!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm guessing it's going to be James' birthday dayout.

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: ahaha yeah... Let's face it, most girls that get pregnant at a young age have A LOT of problems. :p I wanted to try and portray that in here. And parents, they fight and FIGHT AND FIGHT and then act normal. :p It's normal, but when people suffer from mental issues they don't realise that... :/

So yeah. :p

Personally I hate tea, but everyone I know LOVES tea. I don't see the big fuss of it, but everyone seems to love it. :p

Yes! You were right! :D

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the lovely review! :)

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I REALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE this. When will chapter 25 be published. I just cant breath. Im really confused. Maybe its Scorpious's ring to Rose. And it will be really awkward if Reece put the ring back in James' s pocket and... Yeah you know. *Awkward*. And i really just cant… LIVE MY LIFE. if you dont publish chapter 25 right now Young lady. ( whait are you a Girl or a boy?) Dont get me Wrong. I live this story. And i really do love you. Because you're such a good author. Please please please never end this story. Please. I'm sorry if I'm annoying because I also have written other reviews. I dont know if you remember be… Im Sara Potter. I reviewed chapter 23. Oh anyway. Please i want chapter 25. I really do need chapter 25. Or i will die.

Author's Response: It's currently in the queue and has been for a while now. I have no control over the validating process so please be patient.

I'm a girl, ahaha. :p I'm sorry, but this story will be finished one day -- I just don't know when. :p

Yeah, I remember you! You said that I should be an author and it made me smile so widely. :p

So you got an account here? That's awesome! Welcome to HPFF! We're a great community, really! :D

Thanks for the review! :)

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PLEASE WRITE MORE REALLY SOON! ONE DOES NOT SIMPLY END A CHAPTER WITH SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!
SIRIUSLY.

Author's Response: THE NEXT CHAPTER IS IN THE QUEUE, NEVER FEAR! IT'S BEEN IN THERE FOR A WHILE, HOPEFULLY IT GETS VALIDATED SOON! :D

Thanks for the review! ;)

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