{reviewid: 2779330, reviewer: 'queenwombat'}
1st April 2013:
okay. this is really awkward but yeah ummm sorry about all my reviews cuz it was just an HPFF joke so yeah um this is really awkward
Author's Response: haha no problem. At first I thought that it was real too, but then I remembered it was the first of April. No problems and thanks for checking my story out.
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{reviewid: 2779322, reviewer: 'queenwombat'}
1st April 2013:
sorry about my other reviews i realize noe that you are an awesome writer and that all the weirdness is from HPFF stupid new no romance rule I'm sure you probably figured that out but I thought it would only be right to apologize. Good luck with your story now that you can't write any romance!
Author's Response: It's really strange seeing all of these right after each other.
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{reviewid: 2779311, reviewer: 'queenwombat'}
1st April 2013:
this story would actually be good if it wasn't for 'Hermyi.. Hermon... bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet' because any educated person can say Hermione and those charters have been saying it for years
Author's Response: I'm assuming this is an April Fool's joke so thanx for looking at my story. But not really sure what your point is.
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{reviewid: 2779307, reviewer: 'queenwombat'}
1st April 2013:
this story is kind of annoying the Hermione Janet thing was funny at first but it got old repetitve and annoying fast
Author's Response: Um, okay? Not really sure what you mean.
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{reviewid: 2773998, reviewer: 'Mikayla'}
4th March 2013:
i really like it so far good job!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2773639, reviewer: 'Taylor'}
2nd March 2013:
KEEP WRITING! I check ALL the time to see if you updated yet. Love. It.
Author's Response: I will! It's really flattering to see this review. I try to get a chapter up every weekend, so hopefully I can keep that up! Thank you for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2772071, reviewer: 'KeyWitch22422'}
22nd February 2013:
well, he's in love with Ginny OBVIOUSLY xD
Great Chapter from a Great Writer
waiting for updates :)
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is, but Harry is shortsighted sometimes (not necessarily from his glasses) and he has trouble understanding that.
New update should be in the queue soon!
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{reviewid: 2772017, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
21st February 2013:
Okay! I haven't reviewed yet because i have been so engrossed in reading this story! Please keep going! I loved how you ended it with a sweet note on Harry and Ginny. But I think you should add some opposition to the PEACE, some people might not like restarting a Wizengamot. I think that you shouldn't make it too similar to the 2nd Continental Congress, (Idk if you live in America but that is a part of American History) But that you should totally be creative with it and let PEACE fly! I REALLY REALLY love this story!
Author's Response: No problem, I'm just glad that you did review. My plan is for PEACE to have some opposition, someone to throw them back so they only get so far forward, but I'm working on who/what would be the right opponent. Mostly what kind of character should I have for-fronting the opposition group.
I am American, and it is actually really sad that I can't recall the 2nd Continental Congress. History is my favorite subject, and I know the 1st Continental Congress, but I have no idea the 2nd and it's really bugging me. (Going to go look it up right after this.)
Thank you so much for reviewing and I hope I can put the next chapter in the Queue in the next day or so!
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{reviewid: 2766943, reviewer: 'Magicalis%20Writer'}
28th January 2013:
AHHH. Poor Harry! Reading on... you're an amazing writer, by the way.
Author's Response: It had to be done... Sometimes I post chapters and I'm like, uh, was that good, so it's good to see that you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2766938, reviewer: 'Magicalis%20Writer'}
28th January 2013:
I liked the sort of darker theme. It's something that I was wanting to do, but I couldn't bring myself to do- I can see Harry shutting himself away after the war, and drinking. This next chapter might be my last for tonight, but I'll hopefully remember to come back and read a few more chapters tomorrow!
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write but for myself to do justice to the story I felt I had to do it. I'm glad you think it's realistic.
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{reviewid: 2766936, reviewer: 'Magicalis%20Writer'}
28th January 2013:
Another great chapter! 9/10, and continuing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2766935, reviewer: 'Magicalis%20Writer'}
28th January 2013:
I love it! I saw it at first, and since it seems so... well.. angsty, I had to! I'm not logged in, so I'll have to type in my Pen Name, but I'll continue reading!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Each review means so much so thank you for just taking the time!
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{reviewid: 2766394, reviewer: 'Lilo%20Lily%20Louise%20Woods'}
26th January 2013:
I really like this story I feel bad for Harry though
Maybe you should make the chapters longer
Long live HARRY POTTER x I'm his biggerst fan my room is Harry potter my walls have him on it so does my bed PS ur grammar needs improvement I love this thanks again
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and your vote of confidence. I think making the chapters longer is what I struggle with a lot because I want to make the chapters flow but still I want to have a lot of stuff in them. Grammar is always a problem for me because I just write and then forget about this thing called proofreading, whoops, but thanks for the input!
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{reviewid: 2765971, reviewer: 'HedwigAndDobby'}
24th January 2013:
I really like that Patunia cares about Harry, I always imagined she would. I also really love your way of writting:)
There were a few places where you put they instead of he or him but that was it. Loved it!
Author's Response: I figured that once you lived with wizards for a year and were in danger, Petunia would have a greater appreciation for her sister. Then she would look at how she treated Harry and how Dudley had changed and herself have a change of heart.
Thanks for telling me about the edits, any help like that is appreciated.
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{reviewid: 2762795, reviewer: 'kspence'}
8th January 2013:
great story, looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response: Thank you and I will keep writing, not sure when the story will be done but I have all intentions to finish it.
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{reviewid: 2754961, reviewer: 'sgtpitviper2011'}
27th November 2012:
I suggest using posthumously instead of post-mortem.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. Now that you say it, it makes much more sense and once I get the story down I will go back and change it.
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{reviewid: 2754068, reviewer: 'gubbar'}
23rd November 2012:
Your story is awesome, thanks for writing and updating:)
Author's Response: It's my pleasure. I continue to do it as long as they're are readers who want to know what happens next.
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{reviewid: 2748529, reviewer: 'Kathleen'}
26th October 2012:
More please! I love it :)
Author's Response: I'll do my best, very glad that you enjoyed it. Really means a lot that you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2745847, reviewer: 'Aurorofthelight'}
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13th October 2012:
This has been a brilliant story so far and I always look forward to the next chapter! Keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! NaNoWriMo is happening and in case you haven't heard of it I suggest you search it, and I usually use the month of November to work on Original Fiction, so updates might be a bit slow. Sorry about that.
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{reviewid: 2737992, reviewer: 'Meg'}
6th September 2012:
Great Story! I'm super excited to read more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter is in the queue so there is more on the way!
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{reviewid: 2734980, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan12345'}
26th August 2012:
thank you so much for updating :) Completely understandable about school, I just started again too so I think everyone is going to be busier. I really liked this chapter it was interesting to see him in training. I was a little confused about what exactly happened when he went in the room to talk to guy who asked for him. Did Harry stun himself? Or did he make the other guy stun him as a distraction? Either way it's a good chapter lol :) And I love the fact that he is going back to godric's hollow it seems really fitting. It isn't super flashy and he won't always be in the spotlight, but he can still be around his roots. Again, thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Love the feedback. Harry gave the ministry man a fake wand and then stunned the man which would be against, in my mind, regulation to have a wand in interrogation. I will, at some point go back to rework it to make it a little bit clearer, and thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2727921, reviewer: 'Lauren'}
5th August 2012:
One of the best stories I have ever read, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2722872, reviewer: 'robin'}
20th July 2012:
I just found your story and I've read it through and i must say it's great! It is just about how I imaginated the harry potter story to continue:) keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love that you find it realistic because that's one of my main goals with this story.
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{reviewid: 2722683, reviewer: 'GinnyGryffindor'}
20th July 2012:
Love it. Make a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks and yes, I do plan on there being a sequel.
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{reviewid: 2720693, reviewer: 'harrypotterfan12345'}
16th July 2012:
thank you so much for updating :) I really liked how this chapter was both a little bit of drama but also some fun. I'm glad that Ron had come around to being okay with Harry and Ginny dating. What was George trying to tell Harry though? That he is good for Ginny? Can't wait until the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I do hope that everything is flowing well, and you did guess it. George is trying to tell Harry he thinks that he's the only boy that he would be okay with Ginny being with. Thank you so much.
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