Damion is to old for her but they should have a flirty friendship, I personally want her to be with Al! Love it so far!Before I forget, how old is Jace?

Author's Response: hahaha yeah Damion is a bit old for her but I find their relationship to be funny but not romantic lol as for Al normally I would agree with you but Al's too sweet more like a brother to her and come on who can resist a bad by like James??? lol expect twists and turns you might be surprised where this goes ;) as for Jace he's a year older :) He's in James' year! I'm glad you like the story I promise promise promise updates are coming soon!!! It's been busier on this end than I care to admit but believe me when I say I expect to update all stories within the next two months depending on the queue!! Thanks for reading!!!
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OK... not even going to point out specific errors, love. :P Just let me edit, 'kay? xD

Anyways, I really liked this chapter. Not because she got hurt, but because it seemed to feel a lot less forced than some of the previous chapters. I will, however, point our that you love awkward wording again. ;P

Keep up the good work my dear! Update son! It's been almost a month! Ish.. *gasp* I love you! S2

~Mischief_managed18
8/10
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Author's Response: I know I'm trying to update but this next chapter is so hard to write *face palm* not to mention with all the planning and school work we have to do :P gah ok but I need to update all my stories this month that is my goal so be prepared for your email to blow up with stories to edit lol S2

Thanks for reviewing!!!
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I'm pretty sure I'd be screaming right now if the computer wasn't right next to the living room, where all the PEOPLE are. OMG WOMAN, YOU ARE EVIL!!! IS SHE OK? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE TELL ME SHE IS!!! And DI James say 'Love you?' ,':) DID HE?!?! If you don't update, I will die and then I'll make sure I come back to haunt you and you'll feel guilty every day because I died and it would be ALL YOUR FAULT.

Author's Response: .THAT IS THE EXACT REACTION THAT I WAS GOING FOR!!! YESSS!!!

Bwahahahahahhahaha I love being evil so I shall not tell you but I will tell you this if you die now you'll never know ;)

I'm writing the next chapter now so it should be ready to be put up soonish depending on how I like this first draft so pray that it's amazing lol

Don't die I will be sad because that means no more ninjaness for Lyra :( and I NEED TO KNOW THEY ARE OK!!! GO ROSE AND LYRA!!! FLY AND DO AWESOME FLIPPY THINGYS!!! GAH!!! I am really super hyper if you couldn't tell...

And I'm not going to say because that would give it away but ickle jamsikins is going to have a chapter devoted to his POV so you shall see!!!

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Don't die!!!
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I pretty much flipped out at the end of this chapter. Only it had to be silent because there are people... OH MY GODRIC GRYFFINDOR, INTENSENESS!!! Alos, I totally love Damion right now and I want him for my older brother because that would be AWESOME. And Adycus needs to die. Like NOW. >:(

Author's Response: :D YESS This review makes me really happy!!! I love Damion and if it wasn't for my friend saying no he's too OLD then they'd probably be dating but I love this so much better than that first thought! Don't you agree? Well stinks even if you don't because I wrote it already BWAHAHHAHAHA!!! And I know Adycus is such a jerk! I hate him! Gahhh he makes me so frusterated! But his character is so dynamic that I love him too but I hate him more than I love him because he's a jerk and now I'm rambling gahh!

I'm so glad you like this story it's really really making my day reading your reviews!! Thank you so super duper much!!

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HI. I LOVE Lily. I truly do.
I like it! You can do some charater development on everyone else.

Groaning, "Fine!" and then I rolled out of bed...literally rolled out of bed. I landed in a heap on the side on my bed and did an army crawl into the bathroom.
A chorus of laughter greeted me and I felt as if I was back at my muggle school entertaining the eager faces of my classmates. I stood groggily, turned to face my peers and saluted my three best friends who were each sitting on their beds. They each saluted back seriously and three seconds later busted up in laughter. I smiled and showered.

It's a tie between Lily and Rose. I'd like Lily with Al I think.
GRYFFINDOR!!!

Author's Response: I know I know I'm trying to get that done in the next couple of chapters I LOVE LILY TOO!!! hahaha and I love that scene it makes me giggle every time :D And in a perfect world she'd be with Al but don't all the good girls like the bad boys??? haha I guess you'll have to read and find out!!!

Thanks for the review you have no idea how much it means!!

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SOOO many boys like her. It's quite exciting. :D And that scene sounds familiar... great mind think alike, eh? I love Lily so much. She is amazing!

Author's Response: Hahaha I didn't even realize it I guess they do :D I love Lily too she is by far my favorite character Avila a close second because of her innocence. This chapter makes me smile it's so exciting a Rose is such a boss in it!!! Read on read on!!!

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What year is Jace? Because if he's ahead of Lily, wouldn't she know about Hogwarts already? I'M CONFUSED.
Like James. James is confused. Lilianna is pretty and smart and funny anf fiery and the granddaughter of one of his father's biggest enemies. So THERE'S a bit of internal conflict!

Author's Response: Jace is a year above Lily so a second year. He's in the same class as James. Jace does know about Hogwarts but coming from a muggle family didn't want to get her hopes up on being in the school as well.

You are the first of my reviewers that likes James haha but I'm glad that you do! I agree he's got way to many things on his mind and can't exactly sort through them. I think he's overreacting but for good reason. I guess it depends on how you look at things.

Thanks for reviewing!!!
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This looks really good, especially since it seems like Carter, and Al both like her, but it looks like she already likes James, so this is a love... it's not a triangle. It's like a... pentagon? Maybe? We'll go with that. For lack of a better word, it's a love pentagon! LOVE IT!!!

Author's Response: I am so happy you love it! Lily is just amazing I love her character and her development I can't wait until you get to the story story part of it YAY!!

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This one is REALLY good! I'm super excited to see what happens next!!! I hope Carter is a wizard too, it seems as though Mr. Blake certainly knows about magic.

Author's Response: HAHAHA!!! This one is my favorite story EVER!!! I am having soo much fun writing Lily and it makes me so happy that you like this story!

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Bela!!! So many typos and grammar issues love... Let me edit!! I'd be quite happy to, you know that! ;) Anyways, interesting chapter. I love Damion and it was quite sad to read about what happened to his sister. *sigh* James is still a prick for what he did and I want to hit him. Ugh. Bella Bella Bella. Hi. I love you, keep it up!! I can't wait to read more. Off to the next chapter!!
9/10
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: I will let you edit calm your butt! Thank you I think so too Damion is one of my favorite characters and I was crying while I was writing it :P derp...James is and will always be a prick because that is James haha Due going to keep it up :D

Thanks for the review!!!
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AGH!!! MUST. HAVE. MORE!!!
Such an amazing cliff hanger! Brilliantly written. I really like James in this chapter, and the way Lily is starting to sort of admit that there is something about him that makes her react differently to him. Once again, my only complaint is that there aren't already more chapters up. =) Thank you for the story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Not many people...ever lol tell me that I have an "Amazing" cliffhanger! But I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!! And in Lily's defense she's always known that her and James have this strange connection thingy but was so worked up about the whole scenario that she hasn't had the strength to deal with her personal feelings toward him.

MORE CHAPTERS ARE COMING I PROMISE!!!

And Ruth I'm going to tell you this in all seriousness...I swear your reviews really make it so I write until I finish. In one of my other stories no one reviews and no one reads so I don't like to write them anymore...I know it's sad but you and all my other reviewers give life to my story!!!

So don't thank me :) Thank you!!!

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"I loved this chapter. You did a very good job with it.Please update soon. I can't waito see if she is okay,and what James is going to say to her!!!.James is still a prick,but James is James :P Keep it up Bella.

Lily

Author's Response: Thanks Lily for your awesome support!! I'm writing I'm writing but th ideas can only take you so far lol It'll be updated soo I promise!!!

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"I groaned loudly and heard the giggled erupt from the nearby beds." BELLA! Child, please let me edit your stories!!
Anyways, back to the review, I liked it. You did a pretty good job with this chapter, though I'm a little confused because 1st years shouldn't be allowed to try out for Quidditch. All that aside, good chapter. James is still a prick, but what can you do? :P Keep it up dear. S2
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Ah stop pointing out my mistakes gr hahaha thank you though that would bother me too!!! I'll send you the next chapter and hopefully it's not too horrible :D Thanks for the review love!!!

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Your voldermort reincarnated aren't you?
Evil, pure evil
*Throws daggers a arrows*
WHY? WHY, GOD WHY WOULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?
Update Fast.
I DEMAND it.
My father will here about this.

Author's Response: This is the best review EVER!!! haha I swear I couldn't stop laughing for like ten straight minutes!

*dodges daggers and arrows* you know if you kill me now I can't write anymore lol Anyway I'm writing the next chapter now so it should be up soon!!!

Keep your eyes open you are awesome!!!

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Please update soon! This was a really good chapter!! I can't wait to see it she is okay! And what James is going to say anything to her!!!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh!! Thank you so much for the review!! I'm writing so the update should be soon so keep your eyes open!!

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I love this story.Please continue.James is such a jerk.Lily's awesome.By the way my name is Lilyanna too. :)

Author's Response: YAY for twinners! Thank you so much for the review it is really appreciated and James has to be a jerk haha because thats just how James is haha

Will continue!!

XOXO Happy Valentines Day!!!

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Well, I'm glad she's a good flyer. :P It was a little bit too much like the scene from SS but I like that you've put a twist on it. I love Rose. Must she be so kick ass in every story? xD There's just something about her character you can't help but love. She's always so feisty.
I love the character you've created and I think this story definitely has it's potential. :)
Again, watch grammar and awkward wording. :P
~Mischief_managed18 S2

Author's Response: Haha the flying scene is supposed to be similar to SS her life is kind of mimicking Harry's loosly with almost being put in Slytherin with having to defend herself when a secret was let out (in Harry's case Parseltongue) etc.

And Rose is just amazing! She a mix of Ron and Hermione you can't go wrong haha

And I'm trying :P lol

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Good chapter. I still feel like James is being a prat. And love, you have to keep in mind, she's 11. Not 16. The words she uses and the way she thinks is far to advanced for her age. 11 would be us in 6th grade, I don't think anyone talked or thought that way in 6th grade..
I'm glad you decided on placing her in Gryffindor, it seems more fitting of her character. Another way to prove to James she isn't her grandmother.
Anyways, keep up the good work. :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: James will always be a prat...that's just James lol I know she's supposed to give the impression that she's advanced for her age and I have an issue with writing young as you can tell. Haha and I'm glad with the plot line so far but more twists and turns to come!

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I enjoyed this chapter. Lucky that girl has friends in high places or I fear she would get in loads of trouble. How do you explain the whole flame thing? 'cause I've never heard of flames that are visible only to specific people.. Glad she finally learned about her past, James is a prat, no surprise there. Can't wait to read more. Dear. awkward wording seems to be your thing. Work on it love.
~Mischief_managed18 S2

Author's Response: The flame was basically saying she's abnormal the wizards and witches could see it and so could the person it was being done too. It is odd because only she can specify a spell so she's really powerful that was the point I was trying to get across.

And I'm trying gah lol

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ME GUSTA. Only complaint is that there aren't more chapters already posted. Yay for Lily kicking ass in a duel, and that Flint needs to die. What a prick. I'm REALLY glad Damion is gonna be a brother figure rather than a romantic interest. I also still think James should eventually end up with Lily and Al should find someone totally awesome for himself. =) More please, and soon!

Author's Response: Yay!! I'm soo glad that you like it :D

I agree Adycus is flippin annoying but completely necessary :P wait until the next chapters eeek I have great ideas but they aren't connecting...reason for...cough cough...no new chapters :P Sorry!!

I agree with your Damion ideals I love him to death but more like a brotherish person for her the romantic seemed a little icky haha I couldn't wrap my head around the idea.

Al and James and Lily will have definate twists! I'm loving my ideas bwahahahahaha

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Thank you for reviewing it means LOADS!!!

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Good story:) i like it. i like the events that have happened so far and the dynamic between your characters.
The only thing i'm not crazy about is the characters ages. The fact that Lily is 11 doesn't seem to fit with the things happeneing in the story. Like the way the characters talk, and particularly in this chapter with the dueling. I find it hard to beleive that an 11 year old would not only know a stunning spell and protego but that they would fire a killing curse. It seemed unrealistic given their age. I do however like the scene, and the chapters are all well written. I just think it might work better if the characters were a bit older.
keep it up though. I'm deffinetly curiouse as to where the story will go, and i have to say i love the Bellatrix's granddaughter plot. Im always looking for those types of stories.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: I completely agree with you but their DA Professor likes the idea of chaos and teaches those techniques first...weird teaching method I know but he likes working backwards. Adycus learned the killing curse from his dad Marcus who hated Bellatrix for killing his parents in the second wizarding war and swore to get revenge one way or another and this was Adycus' way of helping his dad.

I agree with the age as well but it kind of needed to start in first year I'm thinking of a way to switch and haven't quite figured it out yet but it's coming up soon!!

Thank you so much for the review!! It totally made my day!!

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aaaw Damion and Lily are so cute! :) I like that there's a platonic relationship, especially because they're so adorable :) love them!
and btw, awesome chapter! really, well written and it was really good :) liked it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank You so much for reviewing!!! It puts a smile on my face to see that I have another review!! I don't get many for any of my stories really ... *small tear* BUT You are amazing thank you for the review and reading!!!

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Poll:Gryffindor P.s Great Story!!

Author's Response: Yay!!!

1:Gryffindor
0: Slytherin

Thank you for reading and reviewing you put a smile on my face :D

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Yay! My only problem with it was the length.. I need more! =)
I'm glad her friends aren't judging her for being a Black. That was a really shitty move on Jame's part, but a clever way for her to get the snitch. I think she should eventually end up with James and just be friends with Al. The whole animosity thing at the beginning can echo the James/Lily vibe. Damion is way too old for Lilyanna, but they can be friends, yea? Update again soon please!

Author's Response: Haha funny thing is that it's almost my longest chapter haha :D I'm so glad that you like it :D I thought Lily was amazing at tryouts!! I agree with all of your hopes and dreams for Lily's love life haha but what fun is a fanfiction without a little drama??? haha I will update soon but it may take a little bit because I am now officially writing them as they come rather than posting one right after the other but they're coming I promise :D

Thank You for the Review
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haha brilliant! I love that she's a natural flier, and the comparison between James and Al has me all on edge. I still think she should end up with James of course, but it's definitely developing a twisty sort of plot line, and I love it. You also did a really good job describing Lily's methods for getting Avi back to the ground, it was very believable. Keep it up and update soon!!

Author's Response: OMGOSH Thank you so much for the review! I haven't gotten many so it make me so happy when I see one pop up! I love that you like my plot twist there are definatly more to come eek!! I'm so excited to see what you think! I love Al's character and he makes me smile at how sweet he is...and I love that he's there for Lily :)

The flying scene took my three days to fix because I couldn't get it quite right but I am so proud of how it turned out!

Thank you again for your amazing review

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