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Review #1, by Just constructive critism, no bashing intended. Chapter 1: Bad News

10th February 2013:
It is Very good :D! Except, remember the basics of a story. It is a new paragraph when a person speaks, and there are a lot of run on sentences too. It would be amazing but it is hard to read in the current format.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviews mean a lot to me especially constructive criticism! Yes I completely agree it needs editing so I'll try my best to make it better now that I'm ready to write my stories again :D

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