I loved that chapter! Love the way you skip between perspectives. I've read loads of stories that do that but you're the one who's done it the best!!!

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I liked the first chapter a lot better than this one. Rose's friend seemed way over played and annoying. The first chapter was much more mysterious and better written. I didn't like the charcters that much in this chapter. I hope to see the story start to inprove

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Aw its cute. And I feel you are tons like me, at least, from your bio page :P
I like it. And I'm a huge Rose/Scorpius fan too!
Keep going! :D

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"epitome of gitness on the planet"--- thank you for that, doll. And yes, I'm quite interested to see what Scor has against his best friend. I love their relationship, and I love how the Weasley/Potter kids react so well to him. Again. Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the second review!! :)
Well, this secret isn't going to come clean right away but keep your eyes open ;)
Varity is the coolest. She's going to star in future chapters as well and at a point may play a slightly bigger role :P

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Not really bad, actually. ScoRose is one of my otps, and I really like the way he's all. seductive, but still kind of down to earth? Its exactly how I write my Scorpius. Nice job. I'm excited for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! (:
Scorpius is just a typical guy with a bit of an ego, I imagine, so yeah, here we are :D
And I'm an absolute fan of ScoRose as well. They're just super awesome and totally meant to be :D

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I certianly enjoyed it!! I love what you have here, even though some of it I've seen before its still different in your voice. And I'll definitely read your next chapter. Also, I liked how you switched from Roses POV to Scorpius, I always wonder what's going on in the other persons head, so that was very enlightening!! I hope you continue writing because that was very good!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review

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This was amazing! UPDATE SOON!! =D

Author's Response: Thank you! (:
And the second chapter is up by now btw ;)

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