oOo I'm excited about a Louis/Teddy story :D
Neither of them can apparate? I like it! That's very different already, I always assumed that people would take it untill they ultimately passed, so it's good to see that they just didn't retake it.
I don't think that they'll make it in time, but I can't wait to read more and find out :D
I love that little bit of tension between Louis and Teddy when Louis was reaching for the phone :D
Louis is so wise and amazing in this, telling Teddy how he felt.
I want them to go out with each other! I'm going to pretend in my head that they are :D
You are definately my favourite Slash author ever! You write it all so amazingly and I love all of your stories so much! I'm so glad that I'm reading all of them :D Report Review
That was so nice. I what to know what teddy said. You could write another chapter/story with teddys pov. 9/10 : )Author's Response: There's going to be a sequel. You'll know what Teddy said. :)
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That. Was... AWESOME. xD I really liked this story! Teddy/Louis... Not something I've thought of (And I've thought of Teddy/Helga :P).
I didn't find anything I didn't like about this, so I liked it all xD
I thought how Louis' truth was expanded on near the end was really cool, and how at first Teddy didn't think it had anything to do with Louis himself. That was really neat xD
And the end was cool too! :D
So... yeah end of review! xD All my reward reviews are out :P (I think... Well for you...).
Mike.Author's Response: WOW! Thank you! Teddy/Louis is my OTP and everyone should love, read and write more so I can read. LOL.
Thank you for this awesome review, Mike!
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Just a quick sidenote - you actually have "friendship" misspelled in the story summary.
So Teddy/Victoire is actually my OTP (along with James/Lily), so I wasn't sure how I would like this. However, the way you've written this, it felt so natural and real that I found myself going along with it despite that. I loved the scenario you came up with for why Louis missed the Hogwarts Express - it was exactly the sort of thing that was completely plausible and has happened to many, many people. (Including me. Not the Hogwarts Express, of course, but the train.)
I loved the interaction between him and Teddy. The two of them felt so real as they were talking. The conversation flowed effortlessly from one part to the next, and the way you gradually built up Louis admitting his feelings and getting out of the car was amazing. (I feel like it probably sounds like I am using a thesaurus, but I promise that I'm not! I'm just being repetitive because this was really, really well-written.)
My only negative comment is that at times, especially in the beginning, I found it difficult to tell which "he" you were referring to in a given sentence. That's going to be a little bit of a problem with two same-sex people interacting no matter what, but I wish it had been a tiny bit clearer.
I was curious about whether you'd gotten the win that, having read this, I was convinced you deserved, so I went and found the blog post. I'm very glad you did, because this was a terrific piece of writing.Author's Response: Yes, I know. But I can't change it yet, because of the queue closure... LOL.
Teddy/Louis is my OTP, but I do love Teddy/Victoire too. I'm glad you still liked this, though. I'm like that all the time, so the scenario was just perfect. :P
They do feel so real and natural when they talk, that is why they are perfect for each other! Their relationship is effortless and perfect! ;)
Sometimes I doubt my writing, so thank you. I like the repetitiveness; positve comments definitely help me as much as CCs. :D
That's, like, the only think I need to work on; the right balance between "he" and their names. But I'm working on it. :)
Yes, I did. Thank you. I really didn't expect to win, but I'm glad you think this deserved to.
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