148 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Arianna The Lack of Courage

8th May 2013:
Please write soon!:)

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Review #2, by Allilipsie The Lack of Courage

24th April 2013:
Just a review of the whole series so far: I really enjoyed reading this and i thought giving Hermione such a realistic fear of Belletrix made me remember the movie and it was more 'homy' you know what i mean? It's something that i had gotten used to. I also love Hermione and George pairings. There's just something about George isn't there, that maybe Fred lacks...? Anyways great story can't wait to read more!

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Review #3, by Anon The Lack of Courage

17th April 2013:
What is this? I want a longer chapter and soon!

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Review #4, by DracoGal The Lack of Courage

14th April 2013:
:O oh no!!! What's going to happen? Update soon!

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Review #5, by Owlpost68 The Lack of Courage

14th April 2013:
AAArg! not the misunderstandings again!! I understand why and everything but Arg.. Things will get better too, but still Arg.. lol

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Review #6, by Owlpost68 The Goodbye

14th April 2013:
:( sad. But I guess this is the point where things are really moving forward with George and moving past all the pain of losing Fred. Fred will always be with him whether he sees him or not.

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Review #7, by Owlpost68 The Moments After

14th April 2013:
Aw jeez, you're too adorable! Talk about fluff!! It definitely reminds me of how my boyfriend and I feel about each other and how much we probably need to be with each other rather than trying to work alone to get there.. I still don't know how that's going to work, but we'll see sometime soon.

The whole thing is just too cute for words, very perfect... maaybe some cute prank might have been a nice touch, I don't know what, but it'd bring a little more of his or even Fred's personality into such a special moment, either way.. Soo cute :D

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Review #8, by Owlpost68 The Moments Before

14th April 2013:
I hope she gets the note!! The last thing that needs to happen is for something like that to go wrong lol.
Lovely.

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Review #9, by Owlpost68 The Plan

14th April 2013:
D'aaaww :D There he goes being adorable again.

Another couple things to point out :)

to insure their safety, but he was more than willing to do them all. But first, he had--- I don't think the 'buts' are needed. The first can be 'and' and the second can just be cut out.

they made a small appear at the corner of his lips--- here you just missed the word 'smile'

Another very sweet chappie :D I'm glad you involved Ron and Ginny, as much as I love Hermione and George I do love seeing the other characters too. It'll be a work in progress though since they're both getting used to being around other people still.
Good job!

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Review #10, by Owlpost68 The Other Question

14th April 2013:
This was so sweet, her finding out about twins.. It's just sad that these nightmares/ real or otherwise are affecting them so much.. At least she has George there for her, and Fred too since he shows up to both of them if I remember right. He'll protect her.

Just a couple typos I found:

on my hands.” Hermione said, so quietly as if it were a secret. --- hands," Hermione
she had fallen of the rocker,-- off

Really good job :)

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Review #11, by RhanaDubs The Goodbye

13th April 2013:
I just read the whole thing in 1 hours. I don't ever think I have wanted the next chapter to load so much. Amazing, cant wait for the next chapet

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Review #12, by DracoGal The Goodbye

7th April 2013:
Awe poor George :( I was really excited when I saw you updated!!! Update soon! :)

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Review #13, by UniQuorn The Moments After

4th April 2013:
I'm so happy for them ;) this is amazing, please update soon xx

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Review #14, by DracoGal The Moments After

20th February 2013:
Awe:) so adorably cute! Update soon! :)

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Review #15, by Shelbi The Moments Before

17th February 2013:
So sweet and romantic! Make a sequel to this one!

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Review #16, by SydneyBlack The Moments Before

12th February 2013:
Aww man! Got yourself a little cliffy, eh?
10/10

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Review #17, by DracoGal The Moments Before

28th January 2013:
One step closer to finding out George's plan! I'm still convinced its a marriage proposal. Oh I hope I'm right. It would be so cute! :) update soon!

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Review #18, by DracoGal The Plan

4th January 2013:
Awe yay! I have been waiting for a new chapter for so long with the queue closure and the actually writing of chapters! I'm still holding the belief that George is proposing haha! Update soon!

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Review #19, by Hannah The Plan

4th January 2013:
Too short, but beautiful!

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Review #20, by Cool Guy Thats Me! The Other Question

7th December 2012:
OMG!!! What is the question? Is George going to ask Hermione to marry him? Please update soon!

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Review #21, by longliveharry16 The Other Question

2nd December 2012:
Ah! I need more! ASAP!

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Review #22, by DracoGal The Other Question

2nd December 2012:
Ack! He didn't ask her! I still think its a marriage proposal but I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out! Update soon!

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Review #23, by Owlpost68 The Hospital

1st December 2012:
Ii know what he was wondering :D Well, it's great nothing happened, but What is going on with Hermione??? They should figure that out before she's able to go anywhere. Aaaaww Twins though!! I love it, I've always loved the idea of twins :) especially a boy and girl. Great job, I'm glad I actually waited a little while so I could read a couple chapters at a time, little less suspense that way lol.

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Review #24, by Owlpost68 The Trouble

1st December 2012:
oh my gosh, the dreams are REALLY REAL... EEEK! That is so freaky, the dagger she used on Hermione must be cursed or something... :/

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Review #25, by Owlpost68 The Baby

1st December 2012:
awww yay!! That's so funny, 'cause we just found out the gender of my friends' baby, and it's gonna be a boy, and my cousins' baby, who we didn't know the gender of, was born, and was a boy too :)
I do have to say though, at the beginning of the chapter you said "baby" one too many times, at least one could be cut and it'd be fine, other than that, great job!

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