This made me cry. For real. It's great writing. Good job.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
At last! Some 12 plus stories! Thank God for that. Well, I thought this story was beautiful, clever and very very nice. I like it a lot! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
so sweet! i luv it! u hve to feel bad for petuniaAuthor's Response: Yeah, I do too. She had such a hard life.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
This is very sweet. I like the way you portrayed Petunia's relationship with Lily. Especially the line "Petunia’s life was now an act." That is EXACTLY how I always imagined her to feel.
Vernon was as lovely as ever in this story ;) Great characterization although I do think he accepted magic just a bit too easily.
You definitely showed some great aspects of Petunia and Lily's relationship. I love the scene of them as children the best!Author's Response: Yeah, maybe. I didn't actually think too much on Vernon's thoughts on the magic. I focused more on Petunia and Lily's relationship.
But I'm glad you liekd it! :) Report Review
D": WHY MUST YOU BE SO GOOD AT WRITING?! This quite literally ripped my heart to pieces, thanks. BUT YOU ARE SO GOOD AT WRITING! I'm jealous... :PAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks. I hope your heart gets mended! ;) Report Review
that story was heart breaking. Although what it didn't say was why she was so mean to harry if she was sorry ;)Author's Response: I didn't really think of that actually, but I would guess that she would just have to act around Vernon so he didn't know and all. Report Review
Aww thats so sweet..but sad as well :'(
really good story, i think thats what would have happened (: xAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
That was very sweet, and I loved how James sounded kind of like jerk lolAuthor's Response: Haha, thank you! Report Review
I have always felt somewhat sorry for Petunia. I think there was always love there, but jealousy and misunderstanding can get so out of hand.
Very well written. Truly beautiful.Author's Response: I have too. It's kind of what urged me to write this story.
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
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