Wow, you're story is amazing! Please, please update soon or else I think I might just die...or you know, something like that. And can we please have more James moments? Sorry, but he is so my book-boyfriend ;)Author's Response: Sorry, I've been a bit of a slacker for the past few days! But don't worry, I'm gonna be back with a bang! :p Report Review
Loved it!! Update soon please 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thnx! (:
I'll update it ASAP!
Haha i love it. 9/10 : )Author's Response: I am happy that you do! :) Report Review
You know this is one of the only stories that has gryffindor loosing an important match 9/10 : ) Report Review
For your first chapter, this is fantastic 9/10 : ) Report Review
I usually never comment on each chapter, but this is amazing! How do you do this?Author's Response: Thnx!
I do it Because good Stories = good reviews!
Inspiration, you know!
I am a sucker for reviews! :P Report Review
Great chapter! Love the ending, too. Can't wait to read the next chapter, which I'm off to do! Report Review
very good i liked it!!!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
that was really good! i like how you were able to incorporate a lot of the next gen characters and still not let it get confusing. some people forget about half of them, or else just have too many of them running around. you had a nice balance between both. one thing i noticed though, was that you seem to use phrases like "I am" and "can not" where it would be more natural to say "I'm" or "can't". that's just my opinion though. once again, great first chapter!Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review and the compliments. I'll keep your opinions in mind the next time! :)
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