Wow Albus is really turning out to be kind of a jerk, isn't he? I mean I can understand that he wouldn't want his girlfriend spending a bunch of time with another guy who seems to fancy her, but asking her to choose? That's never a mature thing to do. And even though he is her boyfriend, he really does not have the right to tell her who she can be friends with. Doesn't he trust her? What does he think will happen? He should feel confident that she's being honest with him about her feelings. If later on her feelings change, they were probably bound to regardless of who she was spending time with.
Aiden responded so nicely, too. It impressed me, actually, that he didn't tell her what he thought of Albus for saying that. He's so sweet, wanting her to be happy...
I hope she chooses him or tells Albus something like she refuses to choose, and if he wants he can break up with her for that. Because Albus is a jerk for telling her to choose between two people she cares about. And I want Bella to realize and acknowledge that Aiden is someone she cares about. I also want her to stand up for herself. Albus is being manipulative and I don't like it.
Update soon!!

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Hmmm. I actually quite like Aiden. He is very sweet and wanted to help her when she was confused about talking to boys. But I suppose having Albus like her is sort of like a dream come true. Would be nice if she didn't have to choose so she could keep her friendship with one of them. I like Aiden I hope she doesn't have to stop talking to him!

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Such an exciting twist!! Can't wait to see who she chooses!!

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Bella HAS to choose Aiden! PLEEASSSE she has to!!! also amazing chapter :)

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Aiden is adorable! That is all.

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I am so insanely in love with story already!!
I can't wait to see more of this Aiden character!!

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This story is quite captivating!!!
I like the character Bella, can't wait for more of her!
Now I'll go onto the next chapter!!!

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AIDEEEN!! NO!

Why? Why would you do such a thing!

I wana see this develop! Im so pummmpppedd!

Please Update SOON!!!

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:O Omg this was so good!!! I can't wait to see who she chooses!! I hope you update quickly!

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AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN AIDEN
I think it might be clear that she should choose Aiden! He is so adorably cute!!
update soon, I'm dying to see who she chooses!!

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If she doesn't choose Aiden I will cry! Well, not really. But you know what I mean!!
Aiden is so sweet and only wants whats right for her! Albus is a jerk making her choose between them! He's just jealous of Aiden!!
AIDEN ALL THE WAY!!!
Update soon! xxx

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AIDAN. CHOOSE AIDAN. AIDAN AIDAN AIDAN.

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LONGER CHAPTERS! You are evil! Are you a slytherin? You killed a little part of me with this devastating ending. I asked for AIDEN and BELLA to be together :( You separated them. I realy do hope and think that Bella will wisen up and spill to Albus that Aiden and her were just pretending. Hopefully Aiden will be back.

I loved everything about this chapter. (except for Aiden leaving at the end). It's well written and beautifully plotted. I am practically in love with the character Aiden. You portray him so well. He was the star in this chapter :)

I can't wait for another brilliant chapter from you.

~LoVe_Sirius

Author's Response: Haha I swear I'm not :P I'm so sory!
I'm glad you liked the chapter though! Thankyou so much! Sometimes I really do worry about the plot, I feel like it doesn't really go anyway and its getting boring...
Thanks again!!
xx

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Please please pick Aiden he is so amazing and my favourite character! Omg this story is so addicting I love it so much!

Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks so much!! :D

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I love this story! OMG, its so amazing!!
Albus is acting so jerkish! Aiden is so sweet! PLease let her choose him!

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This story is so bloody addictive!!!
Please update soon, I cannot wait to see who Bella chooses! I really really hope its Aiden!!!

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sdlkfslkfj sdfs!! Omg! I hope so bad that she chooses Aiden! Please let her choose Aiden!!!
You MUST update soon! I simply can not bare it!!

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Aggghhh you evil person! Why did you split it? Hahaha don't worry, I would have done the same :P MWAHAHA!!!

Albus?! What? Why? and Rose??? Poor Bella! Her life's a mess. I started this story shipping Al/Bella but now I'm not so sure anymore because Aiden is just epic and I don't want him to go. Anyway, good job and UPDATE ASAP! or i will hunt you down (jokes :D)

Author's Response: Hehehehe, sorry!
Yes, it is quite messy at the moment and I feel sorry for her sometimes!
Hahaha, I'll try update soon!!

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asdfghj; what? what is wrong with Albus? no, he should have just stayed away so Bella and Aiden could have actually talked.

And I hate Rose at the moment. I feel bad that her brother didn't stick with her. Instead he picked Rose. Isn't there a rule about no abandoning family? *cough*Matt*cough*

Aiden/Bella all the way.
Great chapter overall. :)

~Sama

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Albus is acting pretty stupid lately!! Haha, Matt is an idiot in love, he'll come around eventually!!
Thanks so much for your review!!!

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omg i loved this chapter..especially the ending! you are a REALLY good writer and please update soon!! PLEEAASSSEEE

Author's Response: Aw, thankyou so much! That means alot!! I will try, I promise. I just started a new story and I want to focus on that I little bit. But fear not I will continue to update this!!
Thanks for reviewing!!
xx

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pls pls pls update!!! and does Aiden (spelling?) like Bella and what about Scorpius? WHATS GUNNA HAPPEN!

Author's Response: Haha, you'll just have to wait and see!!
:P Thanks for reviewing!!

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Scorpius is sweet :)
I've been checking this constantly for updates -it's one of my absolute favorite stories.
Please please update soon!!

Author's Response: Really! You've been checking for updates? Wow. haha. I didn't anyone would ever do that for a story of mine, so that means alot!!
Half of the next chapter is written, but I've recently posted a new story and I'm just focusing on that for a little bit. BUT I will definately not abandoning this story!!
Thanks for your review!
xx

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Scorpius is sweet :)
I've been checking this constantly for updates -it's one of my absolute favorite stories.
Please please update soon!!

Author's Response: I love Scorpius, he's so fun to write!! Wow! I'm honored that this is one of your favourites! That means a lot!!
Thanks for your review!!

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No. I simply cannot believe that you ended it there!! Argh! More chapters are desperately needed in order to save LoVe_Sirius from a nervous breakdown!

AMAZIN CHAPTER!!! I need AIDEN. (I think that's how you spell his name.) where is the precious AIDEN when he is needed. His cue was to enter at the end and admit his love for belle!

Haha. You story is so worth the wait. Please update soon. :D

Author's Response: Haha, I'm sory!! I'll try update soon so you don't have a mental breakdown :P I have have half of the next chapter done, and Aiden is in it! yaaay! haha.
I'm glad you think it's worth the update and can put up with my insanely slow updates :/ Haha, it means alot!
Thanks for reviewing!

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Wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :D

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