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Review #1, by typewriter

25th April 2013:

This story has a cute concept to it. As you mentioned up top there were grammatical errors. Mostly with tense changing and comma placement. Blaise was a bit crazy, but I liked how at the end it was due to frustration. Mi would work on paragraph structure and characterization. You're story has a great premise, so it's obvious that the plot is your strong point :)

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Review #2, by Mrs felton

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2nd April 2012:

you should write a sequal!!! or...more blaise and hermione fics! ^^

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Review #3, by Kelly

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3rd November 2011:

Aww, I really liked this story!!
It it was great!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you !! :)

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Review #4, by Alex11215

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30th October 2011:

Great start. I like where this is going, and I hope to see more Hermione/Blaise interaction soon. The summary sounds good too. Hope it goes somewhere great!

Author's Response: Thanks :)
But you know it's a one-shot, right? It can't go any further, than it already is :) But I'm glad you liked my story!

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Review #5, by Mrs Felton

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25th October 2011:

Awesome story:) you should make a sequel! please? :D

Author's Response: thank you! :) yeah maybe... i'll think about it! hehe :D

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