So sweet and I love the way you've potrayed the characters, very similar to how I imagine them. Also the humour really balanced out the sadness. Also, I just laughed out loud and grinned at the last line 'Finally he had experienced what it was like to kiss an angel - dressed as Professor Snape ?'
-Lizzfizz (10/10)Author's Response: I find it difficult to write the twins even thought I think I have a sense of humour. No one does it like JKR. Thanks for the amazing rating :) Report Review
Hey, Lizzfizz here with your review.
The description at the beginning and through this prologue was beautiful, and it added such depth to the sombre and very moving atmosphere that is clear in this story. Great, strong start :)
- Lizzfizz (10/10)Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review, i tried to keep it simple ;) Report Review
Tell me more... please! :-3Author's Response: you are such a great reviewer, i think you've done every story of mine. thanks for that. and i think this story will take a while for me to perfect Report Review
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