I've started on the slash stories! :D Although I'm going to miss the Dramione's I hope there's some more to come :D
I love your sonfics as I can listen to the song whilst reading, it really adds to the story and I love it. That song was perfect for them two, the word fit them so well.
That was fantastic! I loved how dark this was, and how full of love for each other they both were. And how he regretted marrying Bellatrix, if only he could have been with Antonin.
I loved the last few lines about how he was being haunted by him. That was an amazing touch :D Report Review
I can see why OSB nagged at you so much now!
Now, I haven't really read much slash yet (Although I don't mind it at all) sooo... I can't really say anything how slash should be... So simple review it is!
Amazing. There you go! The review. Simple right?
I really did enjoy it! Although... Granted I don't really know the characters very well... I still enjoyed it!Author's Response: She nags me ALL THE TIME. LOL.
It's a good thing!
Read more, Mike. You'll love it! ^.^
I don't know the characters either. I only wrote it for OSB! Report Review
May I still laugh for the "he's going to need it"? xD I nearly dropped of the sofa laughing... especially because I imagined Ants saying it (well, Arben's voice in Taken... as he doesn't talk in HP...). But really, I LOVE YOU! Finally someone else writes Ant/Rod... that took forever! And I'm so happy with it! SOOO HAPPY! I in fact don't want to say anything negative because the fact that it's Ant/Rod is just.. *dances* I really, really love this and I'm going to write the longest review ever (cough, probably not true) just by rambling.
I love your Antonin, he seems way too nice at moments and way too caring - maybe because I never actually write the care moments but just mention it so this sometimes seemed a little OOC Antonin, but we don't know anything about the man so WHO CARES!?? WELL I DONT! I really want to divorce Fenny and marry Antonin... although Rod wouldn't be happy with that... maybe I should cheat on Fenny.. this is just unless crap written here x)
Your Rodolphus - why the hell did I write that full? - is also sooo lovely. When I started this, I was like: POOR ROD! At the same time me was like: GO ANT! BEAT HIM! But anyway.. I have a weird brain, so that's perfectly normal to me. So.. YES! YES YOU CAN! AND YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE ANT/ROD! I don't care how difficult it is, but you need to! Otherwise I'd have to stalk this all the time and I don't want that because I get bored so often and I can't read stuff all over again, can I? Otherwise you have to find people willing to write Ant/Rod because I need it! I'm drifting away from the story. ^^
Too the story! You included our dearest Bellatrix.. for some reason I always leave her out because I love her as a person, but I get angry at her when writing about Rod... I mean; HOW DARES SHE? She just... uugh, don't get me started... So, back to the story!
It was interesting... really... all the plot stuff.. very nice (just rambling a bit). Although the kiss came a bit... dunno, it was very Ant-like... quite Rod-like... but it seemed so SUDDEN.. I DUNNO XD I loved it.. how could one not love a lovely-slashy-Death-Eater-snog?? Yes, that's a word from now on... the lovely-slashy-D-E-snog... ^^ Mwhahaa, oh god, this review is driving me insane! I should stop it.. but I don't want to!
So.. I overall, loved it. And I'll keep loving it. I still have to fave it, but I will as soon as I can.. (read: as soon as I remember). You should check it though, there was an odd caps somewhere. dunno where something with 'one Another' I think it was.. I found it a little annoying - says the woman who has a grammar that will send her to Hell. But shh, just re-check it for a second and all be fine!
By the way: RAB! You're officially a shortener! Is that a word? I dunno.. don't think so... Chrome spelling check it isn't.. I say it is! So.. Rab the Young, Bella the.. *thinks of a 12+ word* the... Witch.. THE STEPMOTHER-LIKE-EVIL WITCH, Rod the Lovely and Ant the Cruel But Good Kisser (oh, dear) all together is love.
ONE THING! (just jumped to mind). My love for the Lestranges is so big I'm surprised I didn't think of it earlier... You included Mrs. Lestrange, but where is Lestrange Sr. [or Ansel as I call him]? Where is the angry, rude, bossy, evil, cruel, but still caring about his two sons Lestrange Sr?
Okay, I'll stop nagging in this review... it's the longest I've ever written - the most random one as well - and I'm still fangirling about it and I just give you a lovely
just because it's Ant/Rod... AND BECAUSE IT'S SUPERDUPER LOVELY! WRITE MORE! (I never said I'd stop nagging...) xD
xOSBAuthor's Response: Hey, Kath!
Such a long review!
Haha! Laugh away. I laughed writing it!
I don't know Antonin or Rodolphus or any of them, so if they come across as OOC it's not my fault! I only wrote this pairing for you!
Lestrange Sr was too cool to babysit Rab! That's why he wasn't there! He was being cool! ;) (no idea what I'm saying!)
Thank you for the 10!
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