What happens next? :-3Author's Response: the next chapter will be in lily's perspective then the other boys. i know exactly where this fic is going and i will be working on all of my stories over christmas Report Review
I noticed a few grammatical errors, but very good, could be better. A few times i got lost, but still great.
wish some was through lupin/sirius's eyes.Author's Response: it will be eventually in future chapters.
the errors are bound to be computer-based. i find you can proof-read better when you print your work out but i just dont have the ink for that.
thanks for the review :) Report Review
You've really got to feel bad for James. Stuck for his whole life to such a worthless and horrible wife.Author's Response: i know. i love to make the females seem guilty in my fics. seems to be an art of mine :) Report Review
Well it really isn't a James/Lily fic, it's a Lily/everyboy in school fic. Your characters aren't the least bit canon but if thats what you were going for then you did fine.Author's Response: it is a lily/james fic because she does date him and she does marry him.
she doesnt go with everybody lol. just james sirius and remus :P
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I'm sorry I'm reviewing so late, trust me I'l get it done. I really like this story you did a great job writing it, and I like Lily a lot I hope you keep writing :)
LizzieAuthor's Response: thank you very much liz. i hope i got her characterisation right. Report Review
Hi! I'm a die-hard James/Lily shipper, so this was kinda different for me. I did love the novelty of it though, and the fact that she was in love with all three of them (as opposed to just two). I also loved the part Peter played. It was well written and I enjoyed reading over Lily's thoughts and feelings. Great job :DAuthor's Response: thank you very much hpgrl. I thought it was a bit of a risk. glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
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