Rose + McLaggen = n o
Milla + Scorpius = ?
Kat + Tyrique + Angus + Mummy Dearest = !!!
Tyrique + BIG MOUTH = drama!!!
Chapter 32 + harrypotterluver123 = !!! !!! !!! !!! !!!
~harrypotterluver123 Report Review
oh this is lovely! i can't wait to read more (: Report Review
Allo allo allo!
So, first of all, before I get down to reviewing, I'm afraid I spotted a couple of errors:
Preciseness= precision (unless it was a deliberate mistake)
You're date= your date
I think maybe you could also check through for commas and stuff.
ANYWAY, now that's all done, can I just say I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!?
Sarah came back!! Plans were made!! Milla was hospitalised!!
Roll on the next chapter!
Sorry this review was kinda weird :-3
10/10Author's Response: Hullo there!
Thanks for pointing out the following points, it's always good to get feedback on my accuracy etc!
Preciseness was on purpose- it's an inside joke between my friends and I! I really should stop using it in things like this because people won't understand it... Oops! I won't explain the "joke" because you won't find it funny and you'll probably run away, scared.
GKJVDSGGV PLEASE DON'T SAY I DID THAT! OMR I HATE PEOPLE WHO DO THAT, THEY NEED TO BE TORTURED AND I DID IT D: I'm so ashamed. I apologize profusely.
Commas and I have a very good relationship normally, though I'm told I use them too extensively. What? I can't help it if I attract them ;)
I need at Beta-er person, don't I? I used to be mint at checking and editing my stuff but with GCSEs at the moment, I really haven't had chance. I keep just churning them out, not checking them! It's awful :(
THANK YOU! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter is 48% done (how precise ;)). Thanks for the lovely review, keep reading! Weird reviews are my favourite kind! Report Review
It's perfect, it's perfect, it's perfect!! I cannot wait for the next chapter, you're such an amazing writer xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! That's such a huge compliment, though it's not true ;) It can always be improved.
Thank you so much! I'll just finish this maths homework and then I'll do some more work on the next chappie just for you ;) Thanks again for the lovely review! Keep reading!x Report Review
This chapter was extremely adorable !
I like how Sarah isnt fully against Kat now and that she isn't like the enemy or antagonist. :)
So did she accept Albus' offer? Or did she mean like maybe later?
I like Sarah's idea. Though if she meant go out with both of them, then I don't agree. But when she said that Kat should spend time with both maybe go on dates with both of them, I agreed with her. Just don't agree to be one of their boyfriends...I meant girlfriends just yet.
It's so sweet how they will both fight for her:)
Can I ask, how long has Albus liked Kat for?
I'm a Katbus shipper...as Sarah says:D Albus/OC's usually don't have very good ship names, do they?
It was hilarious how Kat's digressing skills has rubbed off on Milla! ;)
Anyway, I digress too, as you know too well. Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read the next one:)
P.S. how many chapters are you thinking of writing overall for this story?
P.P.S love how you said that you were casually drowning under the amount of homework and revision you have:) I totally understand you! My French teacher told us we have a test the day before yesterday. And the test is today D:
P.P.P.S. sorry for so many post scripts:)Author's Response: Haha thank you! No, no, Sarah isn't evil, I promise. I wasn't sure where I was going to take her character- I was tempted to make her evil but I didn't think Albie would be stupid enough to date an evil cow :) So she's nice.
The story doesn't really have an antagonist as such, but there will be some evil characters!
No no no no no, she won't be "OFFICIAL" with either of them, more just dating them and getting to know them. Plus, they've both understood "the conditions" so it's not cheating :) (I've thought of every possible loophole and tried to fix it- I hope). Haha I know what you mean ;)
In a previous chappie (from Albus' POV) we say how he has liked her a while: he's liked her for years but never really noticed her, you know? This year was when he REALLY started having feelings for her.
She's a bad influence on Milla, what can I say... ;)
Thanks for the lovely review- made my day as always! Keep reading and reviewing!
P.S I have no idea, maybe 10 more? God that's a lot. Oops. They might mush together more and make less or I'll come up with something else and have more. We'll probably have less, longer chapters or something :)
P.P.S We can drown together! French is horrible for me too- I've got a big exam next week for it D: Well, I hope it went okay!!
P.P.P.S Haha, I love P.S' ;) Report Review
Let's start out with me telling you about that completely inhumane noise I made when I read the description of the chapter: "I'm going to fight for you."
Moving on. Use of Jatrina and Katbus in the story, nice touch!
AND OF COURSE OF FREAKING COURSE THEY HAD TO SAY THEY WERE BOTH GOING TO FIGHT FOR HER OF COURSE.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I can only imagine the noise you made :D I hope nobody thought you were being tortured ;) Haha!
Why thank you! That was fun: I didn't think of it until I actually wrote it, so it was great to add in. It made me laugh writing it so I'm glad it made my readers laugh too!
I KNOW BUT I HAVE TOO SORRY IT'S KILLING ME TOO.
Well, at least now you'll want to read on to find out what happens, right? ;)
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You really have to stop doing this, gurl!!
Doesn't Kat have enough to worry about? Hahaha :D
Why do the Potters think the same thing at the same time?! I hope she picks Albus though, and I hope Milla makes her see sense.
Aww and Milla and Scorpius! ADORABUBBLE!
Can't wait to find out what happens.
This story is full of drama and adventure (?) and it's wonderful! Lurve is in the air hahahaha
P.S. please update soon? When do you think you will be able to update? Or like how long will it be?
P.P.S. this is my 100th review. Woohoo!!! I'm so proud of myself hahah. Nah I'm kidding:)Author's Response: I KNOW! SO DRAMATIC!
Haha, a little more choice-y pain I'm afraid D: Then you'll know! I KNOW, Kat SHOULD be worrying about her up-coming exams- it's her OWL year (like me D:)
I'm glad you like them- they're my two fave characters to write so together they really worked :)
It is indeed! So glad you're enjoying it though, thank you for reading and reviewing each chapter! Your reviews make my day :)
P.S It's updated! I'll hopefully update within the next two weeks (EXAMS ARGH) but y'know, I'm a procrastinating pro, so the chapter will come first! It's about 30% done at the mo!
P.P.S WOW! I'm honored to be your 100th review! YOU GO GURL! Report Review
YEAH! They are gonna find her dad!!!
Scorpius is adorableXD
THAT MATCH WAS A DISASTER! We can see how important Al, Rosaline and Kat are to the team now.
Rose and Dom are really rude and their comeback are so lame.
I liked the chapter:) great job again:D
P.S. Sorry for the short chapter.I'll try and submit longer reviews next time.Author's Response: YES THEY ARE!
Haha, I glad you like him :) He's one of my favourite characters.
The disastrous match was my way of sticking it to the Wotters... ;)
I know, though their comebacks might be awful because the writer isn't very good at comebacks... *cough, cough*
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Ooh! Loved this chapter really.
Kat grew a backbone and stood up to the Wotters. Personally I would probably quit too. If they treated me that way I mean.
Milla is really growing on me:) I actually like her:) and Rose is still being "a meanie". Hahahaha
I love how Rosaline and Albus both quit as well. That was quite unexpected.
Great work! This chapter was pretty good! You did well:)
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: I somehow missed this review! Huh D:
Anyways, yep she did! That was fun to write :) It was nice to see my characters grow up a little!
Milla's fabulous, I adore writing her- she's so blunt it's brilliant!
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Lol. Draco makes me laugh !
Glad Scorpius made a decision by himself and not on what Rose thinks:) Rose really should grow up.
Hopefully Rose gets her act together soon though. But I don't want Lat to just drop Milla and them...
Great chapter again!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Hey, I was so mean to Scorpius before, I have to give him a backbone ;) Agreed.
Don't worry, Kat and Milla will stay mates whatever happens (unless some radical idea pops into my head).
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Rose was a bitch. Sorry bout that.
I actually can't believe that Camilla did that! She's so nice. I know that she was nice and all, but I have doubts about her. Does she by any chance only befriend Kat to get close to the Potters? I've read fanfictions that are like that. Personally I don't want something like that to happen. It'd be nice if they could put their differences apart and just be proper friends. :)
Wonderful chapter. The confrontation was really well written and I like how James didnt really get violent. And that he sorta understood Al and Kat:)
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: I know! Don't apologize ;)
Milla is one of my favourite characters- she's brill. Nope, I can tell you now that she's not in it for anything like that. She doesn't really like the Potters much (maybe except for the boys) and she's genuinely befriending Kat out of the kindness of her heart :) I don't want anymore friend drama.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it- I was worried about the confrontation scene. Thanks for the lovely review.
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I totally didnt expect Rose to do that. Siriusly, right now I am so annoyed at her. Hate her right now.
SHE LIED! She said she would give Kat time! The little liar. And this time being pregnant isnt an excuse.
Sorry for getting worked up about this though:)
Great work! I'm trying to read whenever I get the chance (which isn't that much).
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: I know! I never planned to turn Rose evil but it worked, so here were are :D I like how you spelled "siriusly" ;) I see what you did there.
No worries! It's a compliment when someone gets worked up over one of my characters!
Thanks again, don't worry! Focus on your schoolwork ;) Report Review
Hello again! Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters...but I've been really busy and I hardly get time to read anymore. School is so annoying:(
Anyway, I like this chapter, though it was quite annoying at times. The characters I mean. Like Al knows James really likes Kat. But he goes and makes things complicated anyway. And I know Kat likes Al AND James, but she's with James right now, so she shouldn't have. I know it was a spur of the moment thing but yeh.
I hope things get easier to understand.
It was adorable when Al declared (is that the right word?) his love/like for her:)
I know this has nothing to do with this chapter, but can you imagine someone saying "Im in like wih you" instead of "I'm in love with you". Like they may have feelings for someone, but not actually love them...
Anyway, lovely chapter.
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Hey there! I missed your reviews, though no worries. I can understand you there- exams are KILLING me.
Haha, I get you. The characters are annoying sometimes- though I hope not too irritating! Yeah, it's a little complicated- it might get more complicated before it gets easier I'm afraid!
Don't worry, they will eventually :)
Haha, Albus is pretty cute ;) YOU KNOW, I genuinely do actually get that. My friends are going out and instead of saying "I love you" (which would be a lie- I mean, they're 15/16) they say "I like like you" or "I really like you" to each other. It's cute ;)
Anyways, digressing like Kat here!
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More! This is such a good story and I can't wait to see what happens next! I don't think that Katrina should forgive any of the Wotters for how they have treated her, and if they apologize, she should tell them where to stick it. Especially Rose, who is one of the meanest.
Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot :') I'm so glad you're enjoying it! We'll see what happens in the coming chapters- I can't tell you anything, but it's drama filled! Thanks to your review, I'm working on the next chapter at this very moment :)
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OMG LOL! Kat freaks out so easily. And digresses.
Scorpius is just so cute! It's just so adorable! He has such a big ego sometimes:)
Awkward moment! Omg gotta love Rose. She can make any moment awks.
James is so sweet! The crystallised Iris naww!
Albus is an idiot! The prick. When he lip locks with Sarah I feel like I want to slap him! I ship Katbus. Even though it sounds retarded. Jatrina sounds better but I ship Katrina. Or it could be Alina. That sounds better. But I love Jatrina too! Argh!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Yes, yes she can! Rose is brilliant at that ;)
James is a bit sweet, isn't he? But I assure you, he has a mean side... (SPOILERS)
Haha, I'm glad you're putting so much thought into the couple names ;)
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It's so cute and adorable. Kat's just so funny.
Omg their fight! I've read a lot of chapters after this, but I just came back to review them:)
I think it was Al's fault personally. I think Al likes her though! I mean why else would he care about who she's going our with?
Wish I could go to Hogwarts!
Anyway, Keep writing coz I love your work!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Aw thank you!
I know! Haha, I do that all of the time! Thanks :)
Oooh, well I can't say anything (SPOILERS) but I wish I could!
Don't we all, iatevoldysnose, don't we all.
Thank you! I will :)
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This chapter was so adorable! I love Rose's confidence and how, even though she's pregnant and found out that the father of her child is a twat, she can still go out and have fun.
And omg when James said he didnt know how to 'woo' her I couldnt help but laugh :)
I liked how you linked this chapter back to the start...that was smart:)
The part where Katrina says that sje saw something in James' eyes that she had never seen in Albus' was quite sad. Though I'm happy that she decided to go out with James. I hope he doesnt hurt her...I mean he's a player isnt he?
This chapter was filled with epicness. Well done!
iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: I always figured Rose is particularly confident, y'know? She won't let no man stand in her way!
He's a cutie, isn't he ;)
Yeah, it is a little sad. That's the point though- there has to be some sad bits! Well, I can't say- spoilers! Just keep reading and you'll find out ;)
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the lovely review, keep reading :) Report Review
ahhhaha u must be the funniest author I have ever read, I could totally imagine kat screaming"I WAS BEING SARCASIC"
~ mbAuthor's Response: Wow! That's such an amazing compliment, thanks :)
So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
If you want people to check out you're meet the author page, you should stick a link in one of you're stories. I'd have seen it by now if you had.Author's Response: I deleted it a while ago. I used to have a link to it but I was having some issues so I deleted it. I forgot to change the note to say that :L
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UPDATE PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHOCOLATE FROG ON TOP!Author's Response: I WILL I PROMISE AS SOON AS I CAN! I FORGOT ABOUT MY FRENCH EXAM OOPS BUT I'M WRITING :)
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OH EM GEE!! WOW!
That was an awesome chapter! This story is so good! You're an epic author.
I love how you made that kiss Albus' first. That normally doesn't happened. It was unexpected. I liked the "dirty wands hinder spell success" thing. I could actually imagine Rosie saying that.
I normally love Scorpius, but he was such a git.
I don't mind the depressing chapters personally. They sort of make sense I guess.
Hope things go well for everyone. And can't wait to find out what happens at the party.
And also, I'm torn between Al/Kat and James/Kat. I love them both. But I just can't choose!
P.S. I personally don't like how Dom is always the one who's had many boyfriends and is very crude. It sort of makes her look like a slag. I'm writing a story of Dom/OC atm (haven't put it up), and I'm writing her in the way that I see her...Your story is awesome nonetheless! I just wanted to put that out there. :)Author's Response: Big, exciting chapter right! I loved writing this one :) Haha, that was an honest mistake but it made me chuckle so I kept it...
Glad you agree with them- I didn't want this story to be to fluffy (fluff is good, bring on the fluff).
Not long! You'll find out soon enough- though if you've read the preface, you'll have a good idea of what happens...
Everyone seems to be at the moment. Though people have started forming very strong opinions on their favourite couple and it's fabulous :) You might get a better idea of who you prefer soon!
I loved Dom but it worked with this story to make her a bit of a cow. I'm actually not happy with how I've written her and Lily, but it's too late. Once it's finished, I might go and edit it... FUNNILY ENOUGH I wrote a Dom/OC romance into this story but it was cut because it wasn't fitting with the other bits... Sorry to disappoint! Ooh, sounds good! Let me know when it's up, I'll check it out :)
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Awww! I feel so sorry fro Katrina at the end...:(
And I really hope things go well for Rosie! Must be nice to have your birthday on a public holiday...or special day...one of my friend's is on Christmas and another's is on ANZAC day (which was yesterday). And Louis Tomlinson's is on Christmas Eve. Anyway...As you can see I digress.
Nice Chapter, but I'm sorry for the short reviews! I reading the chapters one after the other, and can't wait to read on. So you'll have to settle for short reviews sorry!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: I missed this review! I have no idea how...
Yes, things do seem to happen to Katrina! She gets herself into all sorts of situations... Yes, twas great! Ooh, a Christmas birthday? Do they get extra presents? I've always wanted to know that! Haha, you're like Kat ;)
Don't worry! It's lovely just to get a review from you- they make my day :) Thanks for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
WHAT?! SHE CAN'T HAVE AN ABORTION! Sorry, but I'm totally against the idea of abortion...
But siriusly, she just can't. And she has to tell Scorpius! And he better support her!
P.S. Sorry for the short review again... :pAuthor's Response: She doesn't, I can tell you now! I'm pro-abortion actually so I always wanted the option to be there for Rose :) Hope I didn't offend you! I actually had story-line in it where abortion becme a bigger possibility but it didn't work and was far too heavy this early on!
I can't tell you anything I'm afraid... ;)
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I sorta thought that she was pregnant...BUT STILL!
WHAT?! ROSE'S PREGNANT?
AND WHAT THE HELL?
WHY DID AL NEARLY KISS HER A WEEK AGO, THEN TREAT HER WEIRDLY AND THEN GO OUT WITH SARAH?
This is so weird and stuffed up(awesome story though)
P.S. sorry for the rant and the shorter review...Author's Response: Eh up, guessed did you?
I KNOW IT'S CRAZY AND ALBUS IS ACTING WEIRD BUT ALL WILL BECOME CLEAR I PROMISE!
Anyways, glad you're still loving it :) Never apologise for rants, I love them! Keep reading! Report Review
Loving this chappie! Katrina is just so funny:) Three extra rashes of bacon? With cheerios? WOW.
Rose and Scorpius are just so adorable! They should just get together already (I know they don't see it and all but still...)
I agree with Katrina on the...work is tiring.
Oh Nana Molly, you gotta love her :)
Are Rose and Scorp together? Or are things really bad or something?! OMG!
This is just for Katrina: AWWW!
WHATT?! WHY DIDN'T THEY KIS?
Lovely chapter once again!
iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: Great! So glad you're enjoying it :) Yes, weird I know, but I genuinely know people who eat that... *shudder*
I know, they are! I love that couple so much :3 You'll see more of them, I can promise that! Haha, agreed :) I love Nana Molly too- I loved her in the original books so I had to make her badass ;)
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