I love this story a lot, and I feel really bad for Oliver. i think noel's up to no good. can you please continue this story?Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I'm glad you like it so much :) I am trying to continue, I swear, but I have really bad writer's block. I will update at some point, but I just don't know when that's going to be. Sorry :/ Report Review
pleaaase write more!Author's Response: I'll try! :) Report Review
What??? That's the end of the story so far?! I need to know more! Keep it up! :)Author's Response: Haha, yep, that's the end for now. I'm pretty busy right now but I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I just wanted to say that I used to love your story. What happened? I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Hey! Thank you :) What happened is that life got busy and school is killing me this semester :/ I'll still update, it just might take a little time. Thanks for the review :D Report Review
I love this story so much - it's actually just adorable. I just want to jump right into it and start telling the characters what to do - Lexi is just so darn oblivious! I honestly can't wait for you to update :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :) I would really love to jump in and give the characters a good talking to sometimes. I've been having writer's block on this story but hopefully I'll be able to update soon! Thanks for the review :D Report Review
Hey! I really enjoy reading this story! I love Lexi, even though what Oliver said was true and Lexi is actually blind. How can she not see the truth. That girl is too oblivious for her own good. I am pretty sure it is actually that dangerous to be that oblivious... And Oliver is adorable, even though he is scary at the same time (if that is possible?). Anyway please update soon!Author's Response: Hi there! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I love Lexi as well - she's a little spitfire. As you said, she's very oblivious, which can be a bit of a problem... Ahaha, yes, it's definitely possible to be adorable and scary at the same time (think Fluffy). I have writer's block right now, but I'll try and update. Thanks for the review! Report Review
amazing! please update this, i'm literally dying here! please! i love this story and the way Noel is using Lexi and she's too in love to notice! and the the way Oliver likes Lexi is so sweet and i love the small nods to the book! i think you portray Oliver spot on and UPDATE MORE!Author's Response: Thank yoouu ♥ I hope you're not literally dying, because I have severe writer's block on this story. Sorry! But thank you for the words of encouragement! I'm going to try my best to update soon, but I make no promises. Report Review
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I love your writing and I can't wait for the next chapter! SO BRILLIANT.Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'm glad you like it so much! I'm going to try and update soon, but I'm currently struggling with writer's block. Sorry! :( Report Review
This is amazing! One of my favorite fanfics ever! No joke! Please update more! PLEASE!Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'll try to update soon, but I'm currently struggling with writer's block. Sorry! :( Report Review
Poor Oliver.please kill Noel for me soon? And just out of curiosity, who did Oliver kick off the team to make room for Lexi?Author's Response: I know :( Sorry, but I have a no death policy in my stories, haha. Noel shall live. Oh, shoot! I forgot to write that in - I meant to include the whole explanation for someone getting off the team but I forgot. I will write that into the next chapter. But since you asked, Alicia Spinnet asked to be swapped to the reserve team (so she would have more time to snog Lexi's brother). Thanks for the review! Report Review
thanks for updating!
loving the story so far!
someone *coucholivercough* seems jealous...
please update soon! cant wait to read more soon!Author's Response: Haha, you're welcome :D
I'm glad you love it so far!
I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about... :P
I'll try and update soon! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Update! This is so wonderfully written, and I can't wait for more! Honestly-I'm addicted!
-LilyAuthor's Response: I'm trying! Ahh, thank yoouu ♥ I'm sorry to have you addicted to something I update so infrequently :/ But thanks for reviewing anyway! Report Review
Yay yay yay new chapter! No need to apologise, it was worth the wait ;) (I write the same in all of my own author's notes too, if it makes you feel any better xD)
I really really don't like Noel, please make him go away :( But first, I need to know why Oliver doesn't like him (apart from the fact that he's clearly jealous, hehe), so tell us soon please!! :)
Can't wait for more!!!Author's Response: Yay yay yay new chapter! Haha, well I'm glad it was worth it because I certainly took long enough :P
You and many other people, love. I don't know why there's such Noel hate... Perhaps you will be finding out why Ollie doesn't like him soon, perhaps not (and Oliver jealous? NEVER.).
Thanks for the review ♥ Report Review
AHHH!!! I need the next chapter. like right now. no joke. anyhoo, can i just say i love this story? I found it and i have just been drooling over it! its amazing! Please post the next chapter soon! or i and going to die, i swear i am. GAH! i hate waiting..Author's Response: AHHH!!! I'm sorry, but you can't have the next chapter right now. No joke. Ahaha, yes you can say how much you love this story :) I'm so glad to hear that you like it so much that you drool! I sincerely hope that you don't die, because that would be awful. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Ah hurry up and post another chapter. I am also writing a Oliver/oc story right now a bit along the lines of this story and I am totally in love with it. This is such a good story and has totally inspired bits and pieces in my story. Awesome story!Author's Response: Haha, I'll try to hurry up. I'm glad that you love my story enough to write your own - that's a really awesome feeling for me as an author. I wish you luck with your story! Thank you for the review :D Report Review
aw, isn't ollie sweet. The next chapter... I'm keeping an eye out. Are you still writing and all that jazz?Author's Response: Ollie? Sweet? First time I've heard that, haha. And yes, I'm still writing Jazz. Thanks for the review! Report Review
omg lexi i love you... as a friend?Author's Response: Lexi loves you as a friend too ♥ Report Review
i love lexi already. This is going to be great... looking forward to reading more!Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it :) Hopefully you'll like the rest! Report Review
WOO an update!
Boo it's short :(
Hahaha I loved it, Ollie's so adorable when he's mad :D
I look forward to the next chapter (:Author's Response: Yaayy an update!
I'm sorry :(
Glad to hear it; Ollie is rather adorable, isn't he? :D
As do I, as do I (:
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Hey, a chapter.. it's been long enough!! SOO thank you for finally updating. Please, please, pleeease don't stop writing this story. It's so good. Don't doubt yourself, because it's freaking AMAZING. So keep it up:)
Now onto the story >>>
OOH SOMEONE IS JEAAALOUS! I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Pleeease update. Like tomorrow.
Okay, maybe not tomorrow, but soon. :)Author's Response: A chapter? Where? Haha, it's been a while. You are welcome for the update. I'm not planning on /not/ writing this story anymore... I just have significant writer's block and it WON'T GO AWAY.
JEALOUS? WHO? OLIVER? NEVER.
I /started/ writing the next chapter, so hopefully that means it will be up fairly soonish.
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Loving the story. Its progressing at a good pace. Poor Oliver.lexi is a bit blind.
Update soon xAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you ♥ Poor Ollie indeed! That girl needs some glasses or something ;) Report Review
I love the first six chapters of your story!!! Please post the next chapter soon!!Author's Response: Ahaha, I'm glad you love them :D I'll try to post soon! Report Review
well that wasn't a happy ending to the chapter :( when will Oliver actually tell her he likes her? and when will Lex realise Noel is a jerk and is just using her? and that she is in love with Oliver?Author's Response: Haha, no, it was not very happy :( All good questions, young grasshopper, but sadly, I cannot reveal the answers. And what makes you think Lexi is actually going to fall in love with him? ;) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Awwwe, poor Ollie :( Lexi's got to be the most clueless ever if she can't tell that he likes her :(
I'm not sure about Noel. He seems like a bit of a womanizer (for lack of a better word)
Anyways, great chapter! I ship Lexiver (or Olexi?)
~GillAuthor's Response: I know... Poor Ollie indeed :( Wait - Oliver likes Lexi? WHAT? *gasp* Where did you get that crazy idea from?
Noel is... well, he's Noel. And you'll find out about him soon enough. Interesting thoughts, though.
Thanks for the lovely review ♥
P.S. I'm liking both Lexiver and Olexi, haha. Report Review
teehee, i love the line: Oliverís crazy level is larger than Gilderoy Lockhartís ego in a room full of mirrors.
it makes me giggle.
anyways, i'm reredaing so i remember what happens for the new chapter :D
~GillAuthor's Response: Ah, I love that line too ♥
Yeah, sorry about the long wait... But at least since you're rereading it'll be fresh in your mind :D
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