{reviewid: 2785299, reviewer: 'Zyii'}
5th May 2013:
Perfect.
Need I say more? Not really. Well done! Great ending. Be proud. Keep writing. Much love ~Zyii
Author's Response: Thank you Hannah! I really appreciate it! Than you so much for the endless support with the story I don't know if I could have done it without you and some of the other readers! Thanks a million! Until next time! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2783654, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
24th April 2013:
Thank you Jenna! That was the best fanfiction I have ever read(and I've read a lot of fanfiction)! I really liked that you got Neville to kill Bellatrix and I LOVED it when you got George to curse her and say 'This is for Dobby'! It made me cry!! I'm so glad you're making a sequel and I'll definitely read it!! Again thank you for writing this it was amazing!:-)
Author's Response: Thanks a million! Oh my God what can I say to that? The BEST fanfiction you've ever read? Well I'm honoured but I officially have a big head! lol! I'm glad you liked those parts they were just little twists to the story to make it my own! I know I've gotten a lot of excitement because of the idea of a sequel! Please don't thank me I have to thank you as the readers and reviewers! You have inspired and motivated me to write this story and without you all it wouldn't exist! Thanks a million! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2783625, reviewer: 'survivewithnutella'}
24th April 2013:
Ahhh so sad its over! BUT YAY FOR SEQUELS sooo excited! Overall great job especially with the hermoine/george scenes. The only thing I would say is that there should have been more emphasis on the battle between Harry/Voldemort, but that's tricky stuff to write so its not horrible! This is one of my favorite fanfics and I will probably read it over and over again like you read books over and over again:):)
Thank you for everything Jenna!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I know I'm sad to see it end too but this is the way it has to be I'm afraid! On the bright side there will be a sequel so it won't really be over! I'm really flattered that you enjoyed the story! Initially I did have more detail on the Harry vs Voldemort scene but I thought everyone knew that already and me re-writing it couldn't do the scence justice after the great J.K Rowling had done it! I hope you do come back and re-visit the story I know I plan on reading the fanfiction over again! Please don't thank me I should be thanking you for all the support and amazing reviews! Thank you so much!!! I really aprreciate it! Hope to hear from you again in the future! Until we meet again! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2782812, reviewer: 'Mrs%20George%20Weasley'}
20th April 2013:
That reduced me to tears more than once, it was bloody brilliant, and fantastic and omg you need to write more!
Author's Response: Thanks you very much Mrs George Weasley but I think you'll find me and George happen to married so back off. If your nice I might even let you have Fred ;)! Thanks a million for the amazing review you are far too sweet! Don't worry the sequel will be coming at some point! Thanks again! Hope to hear from you in the future! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2782686, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
19th April 2013:
Oh my gosh I didn't bring any tissues or kleenex with me :( This was sooo beautiful!!! Such a fantastic, amazing, brilliant, romantic story. It ended very well :) I'll always read your stories Jenna. They finally got together and a sequel? Huzzah!!! More stories makes me happy :) Oh my gosh sooo many things were epic(Fred not dying, Bellatrix getting it from Neville's Gran, etc. etc) Keep up all the fantastic work!
-Scriptie :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Scriptie! You've been here from start to finish and i really appreciate it! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Yes there will definitely be a sequel at some point don't worry! Haha I shall keep writing then if it's going to make you happy! How could I kill off Fred? I could never do such a thing and Neville's gran's bit was just an idea I had and thought it would be a way of making the scene my own so I'm happy you liked it! Thanks so much hope to hear from you in the future! Until we meet again! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2782575, reviewer: 'SydneyBlack'}
18th April 2013:
I'm glad you had Fred stay alive...
ANYWAY, here comes the feels..
MERLIN HELP ME. THAT WAS AMAZING. UGH, MERLIN, WHY IS IT OVER?!
10/10 I really, really, really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. I'm quite surprised that this is your first Fan-fic, as it was REALLY good! I can't wait for your next fanfiction! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a million Sydney! I know I couldn't bring myself to kill Fred I just didn't have the heart to do it! I don't know how J.K lives with herself! I know, I know I'm sad to see it end too but all things must come to an end! And anyway there will be a sequel so it's not really over! Thanks so much I'm really flattered that you thought so! Thanks a million for all the amazing reviews and I hope to hear from you again in the future! Until next time! Jenna :)
ps. Can't wait to read more of your story!
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{reviewid: 2782384, reviewer: 'Millie'}
17th April 2013:
Is it really over? I remember everyday after school I would run to my tablet and look for new chapters. I love this story so much. Esppesically (Wow Millie can't spell!) the way you ended it. With them happy. Well all but Ron. I'm holding you accountable for the fact that I would ship George and Hermione now!! Looking forward to your next fan fiction!!
~
Millie
Author's Response: Aw Millie don't you're making me all emotional now! Yes I'm afraid it's over now :( but not for too long there will be a sequel at some point I promise! You're so sweet I'm glad that you liked it so much and hopefully the anticipation got you through some boring school days! ;) lol! Oh you were close don't worry I won't judge you by your spelling if it wasn't for spell check on Word I don't think anyone would have been able to read this story without going what the heck is this girl going on about! I'm glad you liked the ending I was really worried that readers might have been disappointed or thought I didn't do the story justice which was my greatest fear! I know I felt bad for Ron! I know it's an unusual pairing but the more stories I read about them the more I fell in love with the ship which is why I wrote this story! I hope to see you at my next story! Thanks so much for all the amazing reviews I really appreciate it! Until next time! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2782269, reviewer: 'Bailey'}
17th April 2013:
This story is amazing. I have absolutely loved following it since the beginning. I would have reviewed ages ago only I didn't realize I could since I'm not a member. I can't wait until you write the sequel and I can't wait to read your next story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much Bailey! I'm so happy that you've enjoyed the story and stuck by me since the beginning! That's okay at least you're here now to review and I really appreciate it! Thanks a million I can't wait to hear from you in the future! Thanks again! Until we meet again, keep reading!
Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2782170, reviewer: 'DracoGal'}
16th April 2013:
It's sad that it's over but I'm ecstatic that you're doing a sequel!!! xD I have loved this story from the beginning and I can't wait to read all the stories that you have in mind! Is the other Hermione/George a oneshot or a short story or what? I will always make sure to feed Steve! (:
-Britt
Author's Response: Britt you have been here from chapter 1 to chapter 44 and you have always left me the most amazing reviews! I honestly just have to say a massive thanks to you, all of your feedback has meant the world to me and I'm so appreciative to have a reader and reviewer as dedicated and simply lovely as you have been! THANK YOU SO MUCH! Steve is very thankful for all the brilliant reviews too by the way. I know I'm excited for the sequel myself and as soon as I finish my next story the sequel will definitely be my priority! The George/Hermione I'm planning might be a short story or possibly longer I doubt it will be as long as this story though it's just a plot I've had stuck in my head and really want to write! Thank you so much it's been amazing hearing from you and I have always really looked forward to hearing your thoughts on the story! Thanks for everything and hope to hear from you in the future! Until next time!
Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2781413, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
11th April 2013:
Oh my God!!! My heart is about to beat out of my chest right now from this! AHH! This story seemed to be a good summary with the moment I anticipated and I'm happy that she told him but concerned about how it will affect George during the final battle... Either way PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE consider writing a sequel, as long as it goes with all of this if it ends alright for George and Hermione. I'm sad this story will end but you're right. Good things must come to an end and this has made me absolutely happy. This was excellently written as always Jenna :)
Waiting for the next chapter as usual,
Scriptie
Author's Response: Thanks a million Scriptie! Okay please keep all vital organs inside your body at all times, thank you very much! I will write a sequel at some point don't worry! I know I felt very emotional finishing the story especially since it was my first ever fanfiction but it has to end sadly. Thank you so much for your endless support Scriptie I really appreciate it! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2781011, reviewer: 'Guest'}
9th April 2013:
Update update update update PLEASE! I find I like these last chapters a bit more bc they are not quite As wordy, which your other chapters were a bit, but still really good!!! Please be merciful and update fast!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Final chapter is on it's way I just have to finish it and then I will post it the second it's done! Thanks so much for the review! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780873, reviewer: 'SydneyBlack'}
8th April 2013:
NO..
Why Ronald, why? :(
10/10 :D
Author's Response: Thanks Sydney! Last chapter is on its way! Thanks so much for all the amazing reviews! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780854, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
8th April 2013:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I will kill you if you don't!! Please! I really want to read about Fred's death and George seeing Hermione!! They never got to kiss each other! Please write another one for the sake of my life!!!:-):-)
Author's Response: Okay CALM DOWN!!! There is a final chapter on the way don't worry! I need some time to get it all finished up but don't worry there will be another chapter!Can't wait to hear from you on the next chapter! Thanks so much for yet another brilliant review! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780843, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
8th April 2013:
I like the code names for Harry, Ron and Hermione!!:-):-)
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780743, reviewer: 'qtpie6652'}
8th April 2013:
i love this story so far.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780742, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
8th April 2013:
WHY DO YOU HATE WEASLEYS?(Apart from Fred and
George) Although that was very good:-):-)
Author's Response: I don't! Honestly I love the Weasley family! I'm sorry this is just a temporary thing with Ginny! After this we go back to loving all of the Weasleys don't worry! Thanks for the review! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780740, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
8th April 2013:
Wow! That ended really well!!:-):-):-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780634, reviewer: 'Sir%20Tennis%20ball%20eyes'}
7th April 2013:
FOR MERLIN'S SAKE!!! WHY THE HELL DOES EVERYONE HATE RON!! Nearly all the fanfictions I've read the author makes Ron out to be stupid and really insensitive, he is not! I love Ron he is amazing and everyone is being horrible about him. I love George Weasley the most but I still love Ron!!
This chapter is quite good it just has little bits in it that make it really cheesy. I also don't like that you are writing about how Hermione wouldn't be able to survive without George because one of the reasons for Hermione being one of my favorite characters is because she is so strong and even if she is not coping she doesn't break down. J.K. Rowling said in an interview that this was also for her one of the many reasons why she liked Hermione. She seems to be crying a lot in this fanfiction. Apart from all that though it was very good!
Author's Response: Hello! Well someone seems angry, let's talk about this. Shall we?
For the record I love Ron as a character as I've said from the beginning if you want to check my responses to reviews but it just suited the story to write him that way because it kept the story interesting. If nothing happened and there was no drama I doubt anyone would be remotely interested in this story! Also even if I didn't like Ron that would be my opinion and it's my story so I have the right to write his character how ever I want.
As for Hermione's character I understand what you're saying. I've read the books countless times and I know she's a strong character but at the end of the day this is FANFICTION which are stories written by the fans based on the world of Harry Potter so obviously things are going to be different depending on how each author decides to portray each character in their writing. Nevertheless I understand that you're entitled to your opinion and so I'm sorry if you haven't agreed 100% of how I've written this story but I hope that regardless you've been able to enjoy it!
I hope you continue to read, review and enjoy the story! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780562, reviewer: 'survivewithnutella'}
7th April 2013:
Jenna! Think of our feelings!! such a sweet chapter, especially the part with hermione's letter! WHY MUST YOU END IT? what will I do with my life? probably re-read it 52883 times:) It has been an amazing story and I am going to beg you with all of my heart to write about George and hermione's future. PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE. thank you again Jenna! this is one of my favorite stories.
Author's Response: I'm so so so so so sorry! Please don't make me feel guilty or make me sad! It won't take much more for you all to make me cry! :'(! I'm sorry the story has to come to a close but who knows maybe I will write a sequel but I'm not sure yet! I'M SORRY!!! Ah don't make me cry!!! Feel free to come back and re-read to your hearts content and maybe when I start my next story you can read that! I'd appreciate you coming to check it out once I actually start it that is! There's no need to thank me without readers there would be no story so I'm the one who needs to thank you! You're one of my favourite readers and I really appreciate all your reviews and support it has meant so much to me! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780450, reviewer: 'Millie'}
6th April 2013:
Only one more left... whoa that's so.. so.. sad. It's been a great 2 months (that's literally how long I've been reading this) I really do love it. But RONALD WEASLEY!!! How DARE you interrupt them!!! LOL.
Author's Response: I know Millie I know please don't start because you'll make me cry! I'm trying not to think about the story being over! :'(! Aw I'm glad that you've enjoyed your two months of reading and I am so flattered and happy that you enjoy the story so much! Lol! You're too funny and too kind! I can't wait to hear from you once the final chapter is up! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780270, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
5th April 2013:
Why I aren't you proud of it? I thought it was amazing! I don't know if you intended to do this but I really liked the part when George says "Well I didn’t want you thinking I stalked you and followed you everywhere all the time so you were never alone because that would just be creepy,” because in twilight:-( Edward follows Bella. I don't like twilight:-) Harry Potter is my life!! I also think you're so imaginative to come up with that thing about Ron because it was so interesting!! And I'm guessing you really don't like Ron:-):-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really am flattered by this review! I must admit I didn't really think about that whilst writing it but now that you've pointed it out I do see it and have to admit it's quite funny! I don't like Twilight either and same here I don't know what I'd do without Harry Potter! I reckon I'd be completely different to the person I am today! No I honestly do love Ron as a character he's amazing it just worked to make him into a bit of an idiot for this story and helped to keep the story more interesting! Thanks so much! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780258, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
5th April 2013:
Wow! I really liked reading the bit where Hermione tricked George into thinking that she thought he was Fred that was extremely interesting!!:-):-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780252, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
5th April 2013:
Aw! That was so sweet, I really liked how you made George's letter so funny. You're really good at capturing the character's personalities in writing, which is another thing that makes it so creative and imaginative!!:-):-(
Author's Response: Thank you so much for yet another brilliant review! I'm so happy that you're still enjoying the story! Thanks a million! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780246, reviewer: 'ginnys%20twin'}
5th April 2013:
1. You forgot to mention steve 2. I love the way you described George's enthusiasum 3. I love this story and i'm glad that your not going to keep it going as a filler. I would hate it if this story came to a point where it's just a filler, no plot. And last, thanks for writing this, it motivated me to become a member and put my own stories on here. So, until we meet again, thanks for writing this story, it will always remain one of my favorites. Sincerely, Kitty
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kitty! I'm so sorry I forgot to mention Steve nevertheless he told me your review was delicious! :P! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks that's exactly what I was thinking I didn't want to keep writing for the sake of it if it wasn't up to standards and I would never want to disappoint my readers! Thank you so much I am so glad that you enjoyed the story so much and that it has inspired you! Please in your next review leave me your penname because I'd love to have a look into some of your work!! I'm so flattered and honoured that you enjoyed the story so much it means so much to me! The final chapter is on its way and I hope to hear from you then! Thanks a million for this amazing review you have made my day and actually made me quite emotional! Jenna :)
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{reviewid: 2780245, reviewer: 'Luna%20Lovegood'}
5th April 2013:
'Always' Aw!! I really liked how you included the letters that George and Hermione sent to eachother, they're so sweet! I also think its really cute that George can't spell, I don't know why I just do:-) Keep on writing more amazing fanfiction!!:-):-):-)
Author's Response: I know! That's such a Potterhead thing! Getting emotional just because of the word 'Always' but I can't help it! Yeah I think the letters really show how close Hermione and George actually are and how they have become quite dependant on each others support! I think George is so cute that everything he does is cute too! lol but um let's not discuss my slightly worrying crush on a fictional character because I've been told it's a bit wierd! Thanks so much as always for the great review! Jenna :)
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