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Review #1, by Tiins Surprise!

10th June 2012:
What happened to the other chapters??? i can't see them and you haven't written for a long time please continue soon

Author's Response: Actually, I've deleted all of them, because I plan on re-writing the story, now that I'm on my summer break. And I promise, this one will be much much better. :)

Thanks for reading :)


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Review #2, by Ann Surprise!

26th February 2012:
Good. Needs more suspense

Author's Response: As you've seen, this is an introductory chapter and the lack of suspense here is compensated in the next chapters.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.


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Review #3, by monz Surprise!

23rd December 2011:
it's good but this Hermoine doesn't seem to fit with the Hermoine from the books

Author's Response: Thank you for your critic.

This is the Hermione I see, after all she has been through war. After all, the story was told from Harry's point of view, and he saw her as a smart, dilligent girl, but I think she had her own problems, and that the Hermione we saw in books was just a mask for everybody.

So in my story, you'll meet a different side of Hermione.

Thanks for reading and reviewing xxx


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Review #4, by majamariamaja Surprise!

25th November 2011:
Hello there! I thought I'd read and review your story for a change, haha :)

I like it. It's a first chapter and those are the hardest to write, considering that you have to introduce characters with their personalities basically right away.

I'm not loving the italic dialogues. It confuses me, but that may be just my problem, not everyone else's :p

Btw, loved this: 'I was practically engaged to Ron, all that was missing were ring and a question.'

*Maria

Author's Response: Oh, my! You have no idea how much it means to me, to hear my favourite author here likes my work. Thanks! And about the dialogues, yes, I've fixed that, I just have to publish the 6th chapter, which I'm currently working on.

Thanks for reading and reviewing xxx


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Review #5, by AriesGirl40 Surprise!

4th October 2011:
Very engaging first chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your read and review, even though it's short. I'm glad you liked my work. xxx

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Review #6, by If Only Surprise!

19th September 2011:
This is really good, it's a great introductory, giving us even stories from the past. I love your style of writing, you're doing so well, keep up the good work. :) And congratulations on putting up your first fan-fic, I've yet to put up mine, maybe soon ... Can't wait to hear more :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I will start writing the second chapter today and hopefully finish and post it. Thanks again for your review! xxx

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