Love the secret affair going on between them... Would have liked it thougH if P.B hooked up with someone else so I could see Sirius get jealous ;D Report Review
Pretty good prongslittleflower ... You even had me riled up half the time. I liked it a lot. Report Review
The absolute absurdity that you could write (very well) about a relationship like that as sweet is simply astonishing. I really like how you manage to twist the situation into romantic from friends with benefits.Author's Response: Thanks, I think? I'm going to take it as a compliment. :) Report Review
*goes to author page, clicks make favourite author* :)Author's Response: *Blushes* Thanks! Report Review
Oh my god. This is adorable. I like that it's a two-shot, it's less draggy but gets to the point. Piper's character was very well done, too. Awesome job!Author's Response: Why, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun with this one and with Piper too. She was such a fun character. :) Report Review
Haha, a really good one-shot. (Or is it two-shot?) I liked it. (:
~KhanhAuthor's Response: I like to think of it as a really long one-shot. :) And glad you like it! Report Review
I Siriusly like it!! nice one!!Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
That was pretty cute. I'm a little prejudiced against short stories, though. I just always feel like they never leave enough room to develop the characters fully or enrich the plot. I did really like that James was the one that talked to Piper about the whole thing.Author's Response: Yeah, that's one thing I wish I had more time to do. I'd love to give you all more of Piper's character but I just don't have time and I already have too many other stories I need to write for as well. :( That's the sad part of having too many ideas. But, I'm glad you gave it a try and liked it! Thanks for reading and for the review! Report Review
Woah, there, Black!
So they kissed and then she ignores him... Was he ignoring her too?
Ooh, she's becoming Lily's friend, too!
Hmm, I'm quite curious as to what is this important event that hasn't happened yet!
More when you can! :)Author's Response: All will be revealed in time. :) Glad you're liking it thus far. Report Review
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