Okay, heres the deal, if you make it Ryan Aria I will stop reading. End of story. If you don't and you Get her closer to James I will Favorite the story, if you make Aria and Ryan get together so that he can cheat on her again (or worse) and James helps her get through it and they get together I will also add this story to my favorites. I like her reaction to James friending her on Wiz-book, it's really hilarious. Please update soon, I love your story.
-Willow Report Review
This was a good updat never mind the fillerness of it! It's just fun to read! And the facebook thing is so common, I know I do it and I'm sure others do as well. Report Review
Omg. Omg. Omg. I am sooo excited for the next chapter. Don't keep my hanging :D Report Review
I hate you so much right nowAuthor's Response: No you don't. You love me. Report Review
I wanna scream at Sophie James and you for planning to make a Jamesaria and breaking up the golden couple.Author's Response: Ahaha yes, that seems to be the typical response. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
so i really really like this story! your main character is very well written and i love how i find myself yelling at her in my head as though she were a real person. also, i love that you have a slytherin dom--that's my kryptonite (i'm writing a story about a slytherin dom, so whenever i see one in someone else's stories, that gets me super excited). i can't stand alex- but at the same time i love reading the scenes with him because you make him out to be so realistic and even slightly vulnerable.
overall i just love this story and i'm looking forward to an update!
~MAuthor's Response: Good! I'm glad you like it :) I've put a lot of effort into making Aria realistic, so it's good to know that she's coming across that way. YES. SLYTHERIN DOM FTW. (Ooh, I may have to read that...) Well, you're not supposed to like him, so that's understandable, but I do understand why you like reading scenes with him. He's an interesting guy. The next update will be coming very, very soon! Thanks for the lovely review ♥ Report Review
kajf;kfdsf this story is so good!! keep writing :) im obsessed, omg.Author's Response: kadljfa;jsfld thank you so much! I will definitely keep writing :) Report Review
I've been waiting for you to update for forever! Thank you so much! This chapter was really good! Please have Aria break up with Jett soon!!! And let him and James still be friends!Author's Response: ...it hasn't been that long, has it? *shifts around guiltily* I'm glad you liked the chapter! I'm not telling what happens next, though! Report Review
UPDATE! I'd write more about how amazing this story is and how if you don't update ASAP I'll just DIE, but your story was just so addicting it's gotten a bit too late for my liking. Or early. So update- I don't think I can wait much longer!Author's Response: OKAY! Well, I certainly don't want you to die, so I guess I'll have to update soon, now won't I? Have to keep you addicted and alive and what not :P Thanks for the review! Report Review
I actually think I'm addicted to this story. Write more!!! You write really well!Author's Response: Ahaha, I certainly hope not! I am!!! Thank you! :) Report Review
I. Have. Read. This. Story. For. Eight. Hours. Straight.
Its a truly fantastic story.
Practically, my eyes are burning because I spent the night reading a REALLY LONG story. Though if anything, you should make it longer.
I hope your life is going well and that you can update the next chapter soon.
BYE AND GOOD LUCK,
Emily (laughingfornow)Author's Response: Wow. Why. Would. You. Do. That. To. Yourself.
Awww thank you :)
If your eyeballs shrivel up and fall out of your skull, I claim no guilt. Rest your eyeballs, dear reader.
My life is pretty busy right now, but I'm hoping to have the next chapter up within about a week :)
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I just love them together. They are so precious! I really don't want James and Jett to have to lose their friendship :( but maybe they won't?? But Aria and James need each other. Jett will be ok eventually I am sure. I love love this story and am so wondering what will possibly happen next. Will Aria and Jett finally make their breakup official? Will Jett and James remain friends? Will Jett ever forgive Aria and meet someone else??
Thanks for updating, it's always worth waiting for. Completely understandable that life and school get in the way. As long as you always return at some point, I'm happy!Author's Response: Ah, they are precious, aren't they? That is the goal of both James and Aria - to keep friendships intact. So yeah, maybe they won't :) We'll just have to wait and see. Mwhahaha. I'm not giving out any spoilers about the rest of the story :P
Ahaha, well, you're welcome, and I'm glad you think so. I'm going to try and never take this long to update again. But no worries, I'll always come back eventually. I'm won't ever give this story up :) Report Review
New chapter pleasepleaspleaspleaspleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!! So amazing!!! Also.my name is Grace. Awkward. But I dont care!!! You're too amazing!Author's Response: Sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry but I don't have the next chappie written yet! It'll be up soon, though :) And I'm sure you are a very lovely girl, as not all people named Grace are horrid and awful. Thanks for the review! Report Review
So glad you are back but seriously more regular updates would be good!!!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! And I'm really going to try :) Report Review
Great Chapter, so glad they're finally talking again :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad too :) Report Review
I feel and live your school-related pain, because I swear to justin timberlakes mirror that school was invented to screw your life up. I mean, there is no way that this was a coincidence.
okay. oh my god. I missed this story so much, something was missing from my life im not even kidding. thank you for updating and I hope you'll update sooner than last time. But really.
school sucks, though. I seriously feel your pain.
Stay awesome. xxAuthor's Response: OH MY GOD. DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED. IT'S LIKE THEY THINK I CAME HERE TO LEARN OR SOMETHING. HOW RUDE.
Okay. Yes. I missed this story as well. Like, a lot. I missed writing and not thinking about school for .32930 seconds. No worries, I'm definitely going to update sooner this time. :3
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OMG I CAN"T BELIEVE YOU HAVEN"T UPDATED SINCE OCTOBER!
Haha, i'm only kidding :D I'm so glad you finally updated. I thought you were going to abandon this story :(
I absolutely loved this chapter. It was probably my best one. James was so adorable, loving and sweet :D This chapter definitely made up for the wait. I have to say the ending was the freaking amazing. No cliffhanger :D Your story makes me fall in love with James all the time. I love the way you write and express each character. Keep writing and please update soon :D
A huge fan of your story!
~LoVe_SiriusAuthor's Response: BLARGH. I KNOW, RIGHT?!?
Ahaha, I am very glad that I finally updated as well. I'm never going to abandon this story. No matter how long I'm away, I'll always come back to it :)
Awww thank you ♥ To be honest, I thought it was just too much filler, but I'm glad you liked it! Nope, no cliffhanger, but there /will/ be one in the next chapter. Mwhahahaha. Like I said, I'm definitely going to keep writing this. I'll try and update soon!
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OH MY GOD, JARIA FEELS OR WHAT?!
ahhck, I cannot express everything in a review so just picture my face expressing the amazing-ness that was this chapter. yep. hope college is going well for you, babe!
ellie :) xxAuthor's Response: AKLSGJ;SDFJ THE FEELS.
Ahaha, well I'm glad you liked it. I was worried that everyone had forgotten about me, what with the whole not updating for six months or something ridiculous like that. College is going very well, thanks for asking :) Report Review
this made me laugh so hard that i cried
10/10Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it ;) Report Review
Aww James is so sweet! :) Him and Aria are good for each other! It's just simple understanding of each other's emotions that makes them so adorable!
I'm so glad Aria and Jett broke up! Although i wish Jett finds another girl - i think he deserves that.
And you MUST include more Al and Louis in your chapters! I absolutely love them :D
Update soon! :)Author's Response: He is, isn't he? They're /really/ good for each other. You got it exactly right ;)
Well, technically, they haven't /officially/ broken up yet. But yeah, they have unofficially. And you're right - he does deserve to find another girl.
Ahaha, I love Al and Louis. They'll definitely continue to make their appearances.
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I'm begging you, Almighty Writer, to please update soon. I will pay you in imaginary kittens. Hopefully, Aria and Jett breakup, so James and Aria can get married and have beautiful little children. Awaiting your update, Julie xx
1000/10Author's Response: Your prayers have been answered, lowly worshipper. And I didn't even need your imaginary kittens ;) Seriously though, the next chapter is up. Although I won't necessarily say that Aria and Jett break up so she and James can get married and have beautiful children. Thanks for the review! Report Review
it's great! When's the next one coming? You can't dooo this to us!Author's Response: Thank you! The next one will come before the end of April. I promise :) Report Review
i absolutely love this story. everytime aria and james kiss
i'm like JIZZ EVERYWHERE. and they're just so heart-
wrenchingly sweet omg. like it literally breaks my heart they
cant be together.
and you write so well asdfghjkl;
please update son. i love these two. jett and aria need
to break up and aria and james need to get married ok.
please update update update :D its killing me hahahAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like it so much :) Hopefully they'll be able to work things out in the end, haha.
I'll definitely be updating soon. And yeah, I'll just get working on that... ;)
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You're a really good writer. This was a lot more depressing than I thought it would be, but it was really cute. Jett and Aria's relationship seemed a bit rushed in the beginning, and some parts (that I can't think of right now) confused me, but I liked it. If you wrote a book, I'd read it (as long as it wasn't non-fiction or historical fiction, gosh I can't stand those). In fact, you should write a book. It would probably take you a long time, but I think you could be really successful if you had a good idea.Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me. Yeah, the story did turn out a lot more depressing than I intended it to be, but what can you do? Hmm, yeah, there are definitely things that I need to improve about this story (especially at the beginning), just because I'm a much better writer now. I'm not too terribly happy with the beginning bits of the story, to be honest. Maybe I'll write a book someday :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
FINALLY!! Aria admitted to James that she loves him! Honestly, I'm glad this chapter ended the way it did, because if you'd delayed it for any longer, I'd probably feel you were starting to drag it out a little:)
At the beginning I loved Jett and Aria-I still love Jett, but I don't love him with Aria. I guess this is just proof of how great a writer you are-you are able to make our opinions change based on what is happening!
This is probably never going to happen, but I'd love to meet Aria's old best friend, Adam. I think it would be awesome for him to come and visit her or something!
Once again, great chapter.
Courtney:)Author's Response: Well... not exactly. But it was close. So we're making progress. Progress is good. Yeah, I figured it was time to stop dragging things out ;)
I know exactly what you mean. I completely adore Jett (and I especially did at the beginning), but they're not right together. That's exactly what I was trying to get across, so yay! that I did.
Hmm... it might happen. Or it might not. I'm not saying.
Thanks for the lovely review :D Report Review
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