This is a wonderful story! But sometimes your grammar is a little off (just punctuation mostly, nothing a simple edit can't fix) and you don't always make it super clear where they are... For instance, Rose is opening a door, but into what room? Besides that, this is great! I love your take on Rose, how she's a little Hermione. And Scorpius is just yummy! Good work, really :)

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Sooo cute! Nice ending.

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my dearest writer, you know I read this about a year ago? and then today, I got the strange urge to go look for it again, and I still feel the same, because this story was so utterly beautiful and glorious and you are extremely talented. if you ever see this, email me at karenyu122 @ yahoo . com or you can find me on tumblr- blowpopstyles .tumblr . com. I truly enjoyed reading this and I really really hope I can talk to you one day. thank you so much

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You trully are a great writter! Continue your hard work because you really have talent! The reader feel everything your characters live and i didnt want to stop reading!! ( I'm talking about the entire story not only this chapter) Really, i loved it ! The scorpius you create is awesome !

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Loved the color me shocked comment. Good book series.

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Albus is a baby. Loved the ending. Lol that was great, Rose was hilarious and Aww cute screen between Rose and Scorpius as well. Also I loved how she blamed the pancakes. That was the cherry on top of the ice cream.

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First off that Rachel chick is flipping nuts. Like seriously the way to a mans heart isn't by attacking him in public she needs a lesson in flirting 101. But I so loved the end ha ha ha. I like how you are taking ghost story which is slow and yet fast at the same time because they are together... Sort of.

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Hum. I wonder what rose is going to do now? Lol. I think im going to go and find out.

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So I'm not going to lie I felt awkward when reading this chapter. Not in a bad way, you did such a good job of describing how awkward Rose was feeling during the date that it was as if I could feek the same thing, so very good job on that. Still enjoying the story :)

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Hey, so I really liked this first chapter, I have been meaning to read this story for a while now, but I never had time, so now that I am i'm really enjoying it.There were a few grammar errors but thats no biggy we all have them and they weren't bad enough to actually distract me from the story. Poor Rose hope things get better.

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Hermione would have done the same...

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Why?! Why?! You're killing me with her memory gone! :'(

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amazing im sorry it had to end

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This is so good! I love the slow burning rose and scorpius love! :)

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I'm so sad it's over! I LOVED your story and I cannot wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

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: ( I've liked your story so much... I don't want it to end : (

Author's Response: Aw! There's a sequel! Hold onto that!

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: D They are finally back together!!

Author's Response: Yep! I'm glad you liked it!

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Loved this chapter : ) I actually got scared when
Kingsley talked about sending Ron to jail, I mean, no
matter what he had done now, he will always be Ron
Weasley, Harry's best friend. And I really hate Albus!
He is such an idiot...

Author's Response: He is, but he's young and stupid. He'll get better once he gets a reality check. And of course i wasn't going to send Ron Weasley to prison! That's crazy! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Maybe she'll remember Malfoy because of the
necklace? I'm just hoping I'm right and that they get
back together soon...

Author's Response: I will say nothing! Thank you for writing and reviewing!

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NO!!! No no no no! How could you do that? Now I hate you and Ron : ( But I knew it was all too perfect...

Author's Response: You could feel it couldn't you? When things are just too good to be true...Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Is Arthur dead :,( or was it Hermione's father the
one who died?
I really liked this chapter, I'm glad they are finally
getting together.

Author's Response: Arthur died, it was natural causes nothing fancy. I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Aw they are so cute together! Even if they are 'faking'

Author's Response: Thanks! I think they don't realize how this process has changed the way they interact with each other. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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I bet Hermione would be proud of her! ; )
I really like your story, it's getting really interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hermione is proud of her. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Aw, that kiss was soo cute. The only thing wrong with this chapter was the AN at the bottom.
You really can't stand Demi?? You better not let my sister find out or she'll whip your ass!!

Love ya xx

Author's Response: LOL! Don't tell your sister! I hear Demi fans are obsessed! And I honestly don't even have a concrete reason to not to like her, i just don't. I love you too! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Hello! Just read the whole story today. I'm amazed by the way you can write a story and make me feel like I'm standing there, just five inches away and witnessing everything. I also want to say that you describe emotions and locations in such a way that you understand the plot completely. I really liked this story and I hope that you're going to write more for me to read. I just wanted to thank you for making my day by giving me the possibility to read this story. Best of luck to you!

Author's Response: You are a beautiful person, and I appreciate this review so deeply. I'm glad you felt that deeply about it! I unfortunately don't write on this site anymore, but if you look on my authors note I have my fanfiction writing blog on there. Thank you so much and if you don't go to read my other works thank you for taking the time to read this one! It means more to me than you'll ever know!

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