Er... is Hugo not okay?
What the hell... What... what? That beginning better not make me cry later on...
Okay I'm feeling really sad now, I hope Hugo is going to be okay.
Oh Ron, you make me so sad with you talking about Hugo not acting around anyone else like he does with Lysander. And saying that Lysander is a great Auror and made the right career choice was amazing, especially after everything he said before about Lysnder making a mistake.
Aww Lorcan knew that Lysander needed him! Go Lorcan being an amazing brother.
Oh my god Hugo is okay! Thank god for that, I was so worried!
Lorcan is so cute with his protectiveness, he's great!
So Hugo got some jail time, and I am so thankful that the headstone wasn't Hugo's!
Although I'm worried about the other's coming for them, even though they've got each other and they're ready.
This was such an amazing and hooking story, I loved it so much! It was written beautifully and your cliffhangers were brilliant!
Seriously amazing story! I'm so glad that I read this, and I look forward to reading the sequel

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Yes! Hugo has arrived at the ministry to tell Harry and Ron so they can all go and save Lysander
But Hugo is going to tell Harry and Ron everything to save him, it's sad but it needs to be done.
Go Lysander you use those Auror skills and be brave in the face of the gang leader. Hugo was with the leader as well? :-( He loves Lysander though, I know he does.
Hugo is there! Yes! You save the day Hugo!
Hugo fancied Lysander before?
YES!!! Aurors are here! Harry is here and I feel safe! :D
And once again Lysander forgot his wand hehe, although in his defence he didn't know he would need it after months of not being able to.
NO! The ceiling can't fall on Hugo! Phew he's safe and I'm glad that Will is gone!
That was the most tense chapter, I was so worried!

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Oh no, the title of this chapter is ominous, I'm too scared to read on. Although I'm totally going to read on, because I need to know what's going on.
I'm so worried, I'm in Auror mode. I think something's going to happen. I'm suspicious of that man that shoved Lysander and Hugo, they need to go home to the safety.
Oh phew they are home! I feel better now :D
Awww hungover Hugo is so cute! I just want to hug him and look after him.
NO!! How could you do that to me? They have Lysander! I knew something was going to happen I knew it. *cries*
I need to read more

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I wonder how long Hugo is going to be able to hide the tattoo for? Or when Harry and the other aurors are going to find out about Hugo being part of the gang, I don't see this ending well but I want it to end happily.
Aww Poor Lysander not being able to go to America when he was younger, I hope that him and Hugo can go on holidays afterwards, Lysander deserves it.
Oh Hugo saying "I think I love me too." When Lysander confessed his love,such a Hugo thing to do :D
Oh no, I'm really scared about them going out, I don't want them to get caught or in trouble. I need to read more! I'm addicted to this story!

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Wow they've been there for three months already? No wonder they're getting bored.
AHHH Harry caught them! Oh my god! Poor Harry, but that was so funny when he just coughed and they turned to see him.
He's more upset about it happening in his room, poor Harry, he lends them his secret hideaway and this is how they repay him haha. I'm sorry but this is so funny hehe, and how they're not going to be coming back after they're out of there haha. You've written Harry amazingly, he's so funny bless him.
What! Hugo is one of them? He was sneaky hiding that tattoo, although I'm glad that Hugo finally admitted to it. I wonder what's going to happen now? Will Lysander tell Harry?
This just gets more and more intriguing and interesting, I can't wait for more!

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So Hugo is a dealer of antiques and other things, doesn't sound too dangerous although it depends what he has to find and who for?
Ah so that's why Hugo talked about Lysander running away from him in the other chapter, it's because Lysander was shy and fancied him! :D Hugo is going to get a huge ego now to find out all of that haha
Hugo went past the gate? Thaty can't be good.
I'm worried for what Hugo might have got himself involved in, I hope it all turns out okay in the end.

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I'm pretty excited over all of this flirting with each other and especially with some added alcohol :D
I really really really love flirty Hugo, he is fantastic!!
And Lysander is so funny in this, cannonballing into the pool :D
YAY! THey kissed! I actually just danced a little in excitement!
No why did Hugo pull away, and why isn't he safe? I keep forgetting that they're there for a reason not just to flirt with each other.
I wonder why Hugo witnessed and how much trouble he is in, and how deep into that gang he is. Poor Hugo, I hope Lysander can save him.
But yay for that kiss at the end! :D
Best story ever!! :D

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Hugo just jumps straight in with the awkward questions doesn't he?
I just got pretty excited about them being in Spain near a beach as their safe house, I'm thinking that there might be a lot of sunbathing :D Lysander won't be able to keep his eyes off of Hugo :D
And I couldn't stop laughing when Hugo said about Lysander should shut the door next time! haha Love it!
Hugo has been to China and knows Tai-chi? I am loving finding out more and more about Hugo :D
So George looked after Hugo a lot? Huh that's strange, but I like that they looked after him when Ron and Hermione travelled.
I can't wait to see more of Hugo and Lysander together :D

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Oh Lysander, I love him already. I wonder why he's always late? And bless him forgetting his wand in his rush to get to work. He's so forgetful, I wonder how he managed to become an Auror.
He's really not having a good start to the day is he?
That's good that he has a case, even if it's to look after Hugo.
Yay! Luna is there, she's great, I'm glad that she chose Harry and Neville as godfathers to her son's.
I am liking Hugo in this, and he sounds kinda hot, so he works out does he? :p And he's already trying to make Lysander uncomfortable isn't he? I love him!
So excited to read more!

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I cant wait for the sequel 10/10 : )

Author's Response: Yay. That'll be up soon.

Thank you so much! :)

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Naww i love it. 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Ohh the drama. I love it 9/10 : )

Author's Response: We all love drama. :P

Thank you.

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I love that lysander had a crush on hugo 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Yay, it's just so cute. :D

Thank you for reviewing.

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Ahh well that explains things 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Everything's being explained now, to Lysander anyway. :)

Thanks.

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I really want to know whats up with hugo 9/10 : )

Author's Response: You'll find out. :)

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Loved it. You write this so well 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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I love their flirting 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Hugo and lysander are fantastic 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Yay! They so are. :D

Thank you.

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Right, time for my supermassive ultimate review. I love this story! I'm angry that you did the gravestone thing because I was waiting for Hugo to die the whole way through. Thank god he didn't! I love the pairing because I've never read anything about these two and I think if they can get the whole Lysander learns to say no thing under control then they are sorted! Ah I'm so reading the sequel.
It flows really well, I like the dialogue-description ratio, it suits the tone of the story although ordinarily I prefer more description I didn't here. The little twists and all the mystery are amazing! I think the only thing that could have made it better is a little more background on William Rayner and the gang he has because at first when Hugo had the tattoo I was a little confused and then I remembered who they were. The mystery surrounding Hugo is good but the story feels short, I wish wish wish it was longer, the action scene later and it fleshed out a bit. I'm just being picky with my CC ignore me because I honestly adored it! 10/10!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're angry, I would have been too if I had been reading it. But... That was the point, to wonder if it was Hugo. *hides*

Yes, thank God he didn't... Though he was meant to. But ghost Hugo for the sequel just didn't seem as good... Yes, that was my reason for letting him live... :P

What you don't know now, will be known in the sequel, like more info on the gang. Because they have to investigate, for reasons you will know soon, and Lily knows... Everything (there is not just them two in the sequel. It'll be longer, too).

Thank you so much for reviewing them all! The sequel will be out soon!

Sam.

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Ah, what an action filled chapter. I like how you didn't forget their love (I'm so corny) despite the action. I think you balanced the fight and the angsty romance very well:)

Author's Response: Thank you, because I think I'm actually quite terrible with action and I always think I've left something out. :)

Sam.

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WHAT! No! I thought they were safe! And only two chapters left! Hugo was just planning their lives together, so cruel! I hope Ly is okay!

Author's Response: I KNOW! It's so sad! :(

You'll find out about Xander in the next chapter. :)

Sam.

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Oh god no! Do they have their wands? WHY are they doing this, something bad's going to happen!
I feel so sorry for Ly, he can never say no! WHY is Hugo so damn irresisable? Just one thing, I wish you'd put more descriptions of them in, in my head Hugo is a bad boy Ashton Kutcher but I can't really image Ly that well. Either way, rushing on to next chapter!

Author's Response: Because you probably will have read it by the time they read this... They'll have their wands. :)

Description is my weakest point, which is why I go back and edit every few weeks. LOL.

Hugo is Colin Farrell. Lysander is Ashton Kutcher (the good, sweet version, like in Two and a Half Men...).

Sam.

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I gasp. How could he?! I feel betrayed by Hugo! I'm actually addicted to this, I love love love how you've just thrown this in there! And Harry finding out! This has been a revelations chapter! I feel like I'm not giving enough CC but I don't have any!

Author's Response: Oh, the betrayal! i agree; how could he? ...He was desperate... I have a prequal, a one-shot, that is how Hugo joined... I need to finish that so I can post it.

Harry finding out is my favorite part of this chapter! Poor Harry. :P

Sam.

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Sorry if I'm annoying you by reviewing every chapter. I said I would and I will! All the mystery in this chapter is crazy good and addicting and the age gap kind of freaks me out (it was the 15-21 thing) but if you think about it isn't that much really. Anyway, so on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: You are definitely not annoying me by reviewing every chapter. :D

The age gap is weird when he was a kid, because it doesn't seem like that much now they're in their twenties. :)

Sam.

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It happened! Yay! There wasn't much buildup but I saw it coming and I love them together. This chapter was a fave so far, Hugo all experienced and Xander all young!

Author's Response: They are amazing together; they have OTP status... Okay, they're just mine, but it counts. :P

I didn't really see there being a build up to it, I wanted it to be more... Natural, but spontaneous at the same time... I thinks how I can explain it best... :)

Sam.

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