hi, this is great but how will it work if Draco might marry Hermione and Scorp and Rose would be step-brother and sister?!? So by law they would be together as bf/gf and brother & sister?!? that is just weird! but it's really good!Author's Response: Oh, haha yes i know that its really weird but if you keep reading on including the sequel Their Reason To Live- things end up in a logical manner that doesn't involve weird awkward family relations (literally) Thank you so much though xx Report Review
Oh my gosh! I cried the whole time Hermione was breaking up with Draco. That was so sad!Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry i made you cry but guess my writings effective enough then ;) thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
MY FEELS! :( THEY ARE DESTROYED!!Author's Response: Sequel, don't worry ;) xx Report Review
I absolutly love your book it made me cry so much but i guess not all stories are happy and have happy endings.Author's Response: Thanks so much :)) Report Review
How many chapters are there going to be in this? (:Author's Response: This one's over but the sequel is out- Their Reason To Live- check it out! :) Report Review
LOVING your stories; my favourite is TOR, can you add more?
Okay, this has been bugging me for ages:
breath: sounds like brehth, an inhalation of air
breathe: sounds like breeth, to inhale air
Sorry for being such a Nazi about it but I'm just like that.
Keep up the great writing, and UPDATE TOR!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
I have quite a few stories or one shots up so you could check those out!
Yes yes yes haha i know. Ive been fixing it as I write now days but I haven't got a chance to go back and fix those in the previous chapters!
Thank you and I will soon! x Report Review
My feelings are everywhere! I always wanted a dramione relationship, but the way she loved Ron was beautiful! I was torn and then at the end you leaving it off with that heartbreak.. Oh my god please continue to a sequel! It needs to end happy!Author's Response: I can't believe people are still reading this yay haha :)
Thank you so much and there is a sequel that I've started- do check it out! :D x Report Review
hey i thought this story was great, and ive also read TOR which i loved :) the onl thing i would like to point out is the word "breath". there is no e at the end except when its the verb... "she breathed in"/"she drew in a breath". Other than that, really perfect storytelling, keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Thank you so so much and yesss i have come across that a lot and Ive begun changing it while typing sorry :/
Thank you though! :) Report Review
this was too much like a few chapters from another dramione fan fic, by the name of lady malfoy, im not saying any of the writers copied off the other, its just that the similarity b/w the stories can displeasure the reader, but other wise your story is going amazing uptil now!!Author's Response: Thank you so much and most stories are bound to have a similar chapter to some other story unfortunately :/ Report Review
OMG! Really good chapter I really love how this story is developing. You are an amazing author :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
Hey there! I've been following TOR before I saw the sequel to this pop up, and since I've read TOR, I knew I would love this Dramione as well! And, I did love it!! It's definitely a much darker spin on the usual, and that makes it stand out and be one of my absolute favorites! I'm off to read TRTL! Keep writing, you write SO SO well, and it's nice to not have to mentally fix a sentence ;) Wonderful story! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Im glad you enjoyed it :D Hahaha I've to still fix errors and stuff my god, so many of them! thank you again :) x Report Review
omg.i luved this story sooo much.
im waiting for its sequel .and yes everyone is .
such a heart touching story ...really amazing.
.luved it..keep on writing dramoine stories. 10/10 Report Review
I really enjoyed this story a lot and I am sure the sequel will be even better! You did an excellent job setting this up for a sequel! I can't wait to read it!!Author's Response: Omgg welcome back yay :D Thank you so much! xx Report Review
Amazing, just amazing! It was one of those fanfictions I absolutely loved reading, it was supermegafoxyawesomehot. I'll be reading the sequel, definitely. :) Report Review
its been so long since I found a fic so intensely gripping. I felt what hermione felt and Draco as well. It was positively beautiful. Great work!Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
Wonderful story! its just heartbreaking that they didn't end up together :(Author's Response: Thank you so much (: There's a sequel so if you're interested you could check that out xx Report Review
WHAT?!!! WHAT?!!! I am actually gutted. How could Hermione do that?! Ron does not deserve her one bit. Her and Draco were perfect together, who cares if there children also like each other?! Anyway, I loved your story as a whole and you are a great writer! I'm away to read the sequel now, please please let Draco and Hermione be together?!! :)Author's Response: Everything happens for a reason- do read the sequel :) I wouldn't have it any other way and all my readers already know that- it's HOW I do it that counts ;)
thank you so so much xx Report Review
I am literally crying this chapter is so sad and i cant believe the book is finished please please write a sequal or something.Author's Response: There is a sequel and it's been posted :) Its called Their Reason To Live, I'm glad you liked this xx Report Review
This was great (: Im so sorry I haven't viewed in so long omg. But this is brilliant! I can't wait to start TRTL- I'm sure that'll be as exciting and amazing!
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No. No. Nononononono. This wasn't how it was supposed to end!!
I really can't tell how amazing you are and how much you have made me fall in love with Dramione. No story has ever, ever affected me this much. I am literally crying as I write this review, especially because of what just happened. But I trust you that this will all make sense. Because you are a fantastic author and there is always a bigger picture.
There's really nothing else to say. I can't wait for 'Their Reason To Live.' You make everything fit like puzzle pieces.
Well, another story well done. See you in TRTL! ;)Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so so much :) This really means a lot to me.Their Reason To Live has already begun so be sure to check it out ;) Thanks again and see you there xx Report Review
YOU MOTHERFUCKER HOW CAN YOU DO THAT I HOPE IT iS. YOUR DEATH I SEE IN THE NEAR FUTURE WHORE !FUCKU BITCHAuthor's Response: I really wanted to report this but I realized it would probably be of no use since there is no penname that can be disabled.
Firstly, if you have something critical to say- dont you dare use that language. Say it in a proper manner- other reviewers have said that they were upset with the ending but have pretty much always said they'd love to read the sequel etc etc.
Secondly, How can i do that? If you didnt read properly, which Im pretty sure you didnt, I did say there was a sequel which Ive already started by the way. So instead of being so damn pissed off, you should go see that if youre not happy with the ending.
You hope its my death you see in the near future? Wow. You have issues. Seriously. I dont mean to be "rude" but what Im saying does not compare to what you have said above. You crossed all limits with your language. I wouldve been fine had you not insulted me like that.
Its just a story and its my choice how I decide to end it and if youre not happy with it, you say it in a nicer way. The story isnt real so perhaps you shouldnt get engrossed to an extent where you go to those level when youre unhappy.
If you didnt enjoy the writing or my story, perhaps you shouldnt have sat through 23 chapters of it? No one asked you to read it. You're extremely rude and if that's the way you treat people around you, I seriously pity you. I PITY you. It's disgusting.
Mind your language and if you dont want to read, dont. If you dont have anything to say that doesnt involve that language, dont say it. Understand? If you had pennamed this- I WOULD have reported you.
You're a real insult to the reviewing world and all those who review and I sincerely hope you leave fanfiction if this is the way you behave. I have SO much more to say and so many rude words I'd like to use myself but I wouldnt stoop to your pathetic level so Im not going to say those things. Also, Im a respected writer in my reviewers' eyes and wouldnt spoil that.
Speaking of which, I have 200 other readers and reviewers who enjoy my work and love me and my writing so I dont give, for a lack of better words, a shit about what you have to say. I would have had you been nicer but since you were'nt, I cant be bothered to take into consideration or take anything you said to heart.
Fix your behavior and again, if this is how you are in real life, I pity you. Report Review
I really love this story and I like the fact that you combined Dramione and Rosius. It's refreshing.
wow. I just realized how long this chapter is. Wow.Author's Response: Thank you so so much :)
Hahaha it's one of the longer chapters :P Report Review
The fact that you can make a reader cry says that you're just an amazing writer. Awh I can't stop crying haha! This is simply amazing :') xxAuthor's Response: Aww thank you so much :) I try my best to bring out emotions best I can xx Report Review
NO NO NO, that wasn't supposed to happen. Well I'll have to read the sequel I suppose ;)
Amazing ( I hope you realise that I am so looking forward to reading the sequel)
Also is the "Fairytales don't always have a happy ending" thing from Big Girls Don't Cry???
But that was so amazing, I actually cried at the funeral xxxAuthor's Response: Yayy :) Another EHFAR and TRTL reader ^^
And yes haha I forgot to mention that but I was listening to the song while typing the chapter and Im like OMG PERFECT. and i put it- surprised that you realized :D
Thank you so much xx :) Report Review
Wait. What about Lestrange pointing his wand at Ron? did i skip a chapter???Author's Response: Nope, you didn't. If you can see- he says the killing curse and then it moves to Astoria's section and then the first word of the next part is "expelliarmus" so ron didn't die- pansy disarmed lestrange at the last second :) sorry for the confusion :/ Report Review
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