Manwe Valerian: Excellent story. While it was a long narrative, you put us in the middle of everything that was going on. I could feel every emotion from the list of characters. Andromeda's reaction toward Narcissa felt real and emoted a deep hatred spawned by her loss at the hands of her own family. Ginny's POV was outstanding and I have read a few very good accounts from other authors on this subject. You nailed it and rank among the best I've read.
You have wonderful command of these characters. You must have invested yourself heavily into all 7 of JKR's magnificent books. You are creative, sensitive and introspective. Great qualities for a good writer. I look forward to your continuance of this story and also look forward to reading some of your other fics as well. Very well done. PW 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for the review Report Review
Wow, long chapter. A bit too long, I think, talking about every little thing that happened while Harry was talking to those other families, but then you wrote that awesome ending, making the chapter very good again! :)
Keep up the good work !Author's Response: I wanted to cover the progression of how the magical community changed so quickly, and also why Ginny was so upset and felt so forgotten. Report Review
I really liked this first chapter. Especially how you described Ginny's reaction upon seeing Harry dead in Hagrid's arms.
Loved the ending of the chapter too; exactly how I imagined Ginny was feeling after the battle, when I read the seventh book.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the story! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Report Review
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