Reading Reviews for Truth in the Dark
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Review #1, by the everlasting song The Beginning of Change

24th April 2013:
I really want to see what happens next! Especially with Harry and Julie and I want to see what comes of her powers. Please update soon x

Author's Response: I hit a really big patch of writers block, I've been working on the next chapter for months. I dont want to give a half-ass'd chapter. :)

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Review #2, by abc The Beginning of Change

4th January 2013:
please please please update i love it sooo much this is my favorite story ever please update like right now !

Author's Response: Haha, well thank you very much for your love of my story. I'm currently working on a chapter, I like to make the chapters "perfect" and have the right kind of flow. Don't worry, it's getting close to being done. I try and have good closing spots for my chapters with out them being too long. :)

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Review #3, by B New Beginnings

16th December 2012:
good but many spelling mistakes

Author's Response: Yeah, I wrote that first chapter a long time ago. My earlier chapters, I feel, aren't as good or thought out as my newer ones.

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Review #4, by ProphecyAuror4269 The Beginning of Change

16th December 2012:
i have to say this is a very different story and i can think of many directions it can lead to . one thing i would also like to advise is that maybe you should also take the focus back to Harry.
as far as the cliffhanger that you have left us at is concerned i simply think it is amazing. i also have some theories about what will happen next. Maybe her powers can act as the kiss takes place

Author's Response: I'm trying to think of a way of doing that, but writing actions of a character that isn't mine is harder for me. I want to stay true to who the character is. If you have any ideas of how I can do that please feel free to message me. :) I am open to ideas. Thank you for your review of my writing.

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Review #5, by ReignLee Pieces Reveiled

14th October 2012:
Thanks for consistently reading and reviewing my story!
Because you requested I read yours, I decided to. You've got me hooked! I really enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm so self critical of my writing that I can get embarrassed of what I write. And sometimes I worry that I'm starting to ramble with my writing.

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Review #6, by Phoenix_Flames Secret Visitors

7th August 2011:
Ahhh! Wow! Great second chapter.

Everything got very exciting this chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat.

Everything had a sense of mystery about it. It was great! And ah, Harry is at the end of the chapter! I wonder how this will come into play.

Great job! :)

Form Name: Phoenix_Flames
House: Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you! I worry that I over describe things, or that I hide too much. But I'm really glad that you like it! =D

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Review #7, by Phoenix_Flames New Beginnings

7th August 2011:
Hi there! :)

Interesting story you have here. I've never read anything quite like it. It's very intriguing, and you pulled me in from the very beginning. Nicely done. :)

I like Julie! She's a great character, and you seem to have made her very unique and special. Nothing too common. :) That's good.

Great opening chapter. I would like to see where this goes! :)

Forum Name: Phoenix_Flames
House: Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. :) I love hearing feed back!

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