I really want to see what happens next! Especially with Harry and Julie and I want to see what comes of her powers. Please update soon xAuthor's Response: I hit a really big patch of writers block, I've been working on the next chapter for months. I dont want to give a half-ass'd chapter. :) Report Review
please please please update i love it sooo much this is my favorite story ever please update like right now !Author's Response: Haha, well thank you very much for your love of my story. I'm currently working on a chapter, I like to make the chapters "perfect" and have the right kind of flow. Don't worry, it's getting close to being done. I try and have good closing spots for my chapters with out them being too long. :) Report Review
good but many spelling mistakesAuthor's Response: Yeah, I wrote that first chapter a long time ago. My earlier chapters, I feel, aren't as good or thought out as my newer ones. Report Review
i have to say this is a very different story and i can think of many directions it can lead to . one thing i would also like to advise is that maybe you should also take the focus back to Harry.
as far as the cliffhanger that you have left us at is concerned i simply think it is amazing. i also have some theories about what will happen next. Maybe her powers can act as the kiss takes placeAuthor's Response: I'm trying to think of a way of doing that, but writing actions of a character that isn't mine is harder for me. I want to stay true to who the character is. If you have any ideas of how I can do that please feel free to message me. :) I am open to ideas. Thank you for your review of my writing. Report Review
Thanks for consistently reading and reviewing my story!
Because you requested I read yours, I decided to. You've got me hooked! I really enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm so self critical of my writing that I can get embarrassed of what I write. And sometimes I worry that I'm starting to ramble with my writing. Report Review
Ahhh! Wow! Great second chapter.
Everything got very exciting this chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat.
Everything had a sense of mystery about it. It was great! And ah, Harry is at the end of the chapter! I wonder how this will come into play.
Great job! :)
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House: HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you! I worry that I over describe things, or that I hide too much. But I'm really glad that you like it! =D Report Review
Hi there! :)
Interesting story you have here. I've never read anything quite like it. It's very intriguing, and you pulled me in from the very beginning. Nicely done. :)
I like Julie! She's a great character, and you seem to have made her very unique and special. Nothing too common. :) That's good.
Great opening chapter. I would like to see where this goes! :)
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