Urgh. I don't like Keegan. I mean, I'm expecting something really bad to happen with him. Like, it's a bet, or he finds out what she is.. Yeah.
As it is, I would much rather James and Sway were together. Yep. Make it happen. Make it happen. Do it. Do it.
I'm really liking this though, like the idea and all the characters, so UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: thank you soo much. And your kinda on the right track, but I'm not giving anything away as of right now because I'm still trying to develop the characters and the story. But once again thank you Report Review
That was great. I loved it. Please update soon 9/10 : ) Report Review
Oh poor sway. 9/10 : ) Report Review
James definatly left those notes on purpose 9/10 : ) Report Review
Well things just got interesting 9/10 : ) Report Review
So is she a werewolf or vampire? 9/10 : ) Report Review
That was a great opening chapter 9/10 : ) Report Review
I really like your characters! Great story and I hope you keep it up! You're a great writer! A little short for my liking though. Can't wait for more from you! By the way, I know a story that revolves around the same characters that are from Harry Potter, I think you might like. It's called "The Continuing Story of Ainsly Hallow" Check it out if you have time! Report Review
Great chapter, very funny XD
I can't wait to read the next one, please update as soon as you can. Report Review
Good start so far, but there are a few spelling/grammar errors you might want to fix... starting with "Prologue". :D
~Khanh Report Review
I like, I like! Very cool story!
I'm confused... is she vampire or werewolf? Or something else entirely? :P
Looking forward to next chapter, hopefully to be up very soon no?Author's Response: Srry It took so long to get back. I've been busy. But she is Half Vamp half Human i guess you could say. Report Review
I really like it so far!:) I love her name Sweety Rogers its awesome! Update soon :) Report Review
Loved the fact Roy was hitting on her XD
Can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chaper. XD Report Review
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