Nooo this was such a sad chapter! Update soon :) Report Review
"the guy who Rose has just removed her purse from"
WHAT DOES THIS EVEN MEAN
purse big toe there's more but i just doNT UNDERSTAND Report Review
MORE! That was so awesome! And I love this story! Report Review
wow oh wow.dramadramadrama!!! and I love it =D so much mayhem and chaos in relations. It goes from bad to worse. I can't wait to read how worse goes to terrible or starts getting better! Report Review
Yes! Rose/Scorpius drama! Just what I want!
Haha, they're meant to be together :D:D More of them PLEASE! aw~ :( But why Luke Corner? =_= I was starting to get a hitch that he was this good guy, still in love with Georgia although he says he's not. But well, readers never get what they want and every stories don't go the way you always want it too, not all have the happy ending you'd hoped for.
Stella and James - very confusing couples. -_- More confusing than Ray and Albus. And forgot to comment on your New Year chapter, (too eager to continue than stopping by for a minute thank you) but I like that metaphor Ray said about love. :) It's just lovely and nice to read again and again since I think Ray is a very complicated person but in the end I believe she's just a naive girl in love.
I'm getting a feeling that Roxanne is on a very diabolical revenge plot against the main couple as she had to go through painful things while watching the source of her problem get off with it without anybody knowing.
I love you, just make James pull off the non-dating rule will you? (joke :P)
Hope you could update soon~
Thanks for the great story.
Sorry I didn't comment on every chapter, I do appreciate your great story plot but I'm not really the person who can stop reading 'just like that'...uh, get it?
Thanks again anyway :) Report Review
James is like a the most complicated 'girl' I've ever known. -_- Oh man, are boys like that too? Report Review
Ah omg you evil person. I was on the edge the entire chapter.
First all the Stella/James drama, on again off again. Confusing.
Then poor Rox. Thats a shame.
And then when Ray said she would go to the party with Fred at first I was really surprised and then just like "GO GIRL". I love the little Albus/Ray/Cecily triangle. Is it a triangle? I don't know I love it.
Then at the end. WOAH. Rose and Luke? I'm really excited to find out whats gonna happen next. Report Review
Oh my gosh . I knew Roxanne would walk in on them ... James should just get rid of the rule .. only Fred will be annoyed . And Albus should just dump Cecily and try with Ray again :) great story :) I luuurrvvee it xx can't wait for the.next chapter! Report Review
ah. so good. I seriously want to know about everything, so much just happened! Poor Scorp :( Report Review
Oh no!!! How did everything get so bad so fast!!! I feel like this chapter was one big roller coaster - things were good and then they got bad and then when you think it will get better it gets bad again!! (Not that the story is bad, i love love your writing and the plot!!). I'm glad to see Albus was jealous and that Ray actually went to the party. I hope he starts to work to win her back soon.
I thought Roxanne might come out and get angry at James and Stella. I'd hoped I was wrong, but she does have a right to be upset with them. I really want them to be able to be together though!!
And Rose!!! Goodness she and Scorpius just cannot get it together, can they!? I feel so sad for Scorpius and I'm not sure how he's going to come back from this but...you'll make it work, won't you??
Update when you can, you are fabulous!! Report Review
Ah!! Please update soon!!!
I love it all. Report Review
HOLY SHIT. MY JAW IS ON THE FLOOR. THAT ENDING.EPIC.
but seriously, great chapter, they're always worth waiting for :) Report Review
Greatest chapter EVER! James and Stella Kiss! Scorpius stands up for himself! Ray shows Al what he's missing and so much more drama!!!
Please please please do a fast update again!!! This is great!!! Report Review
No! Not at this. Please continue.
I'm so glad this chapter updated! On top of that it was 11000 words :D Yay! I absolutely love this chapter. It was funny, exciting and adorable. I loved the bit where Stella was drunk :D it was hilarious.
Please Update ASAP :) Report Review
UGH this is so frustrating! Of course this is a really good fanfic, and really well written, but i just wish everyone would sort their stuff out and be together and happy for gods sake, im tired of ANGST and i just want everyone to be happy!! So update soon so i can see what happens, and maybe lessen the unhappiness and nonlove?? At least get ONE couple together and make them STAY happy until the end! Besides the happiness problems though, i love the story! I want to know whats up with cameron though, and i really want to know about al and ray. Honestly, i just want to know about all my ships! Lexie/cam, al/ray, james/stella, and ESPECIALLY scorose. scorose is my otp and needs to be together!!
Update quickly and with more happiness!
PS how many chapters do you think this will be total? Report Review
They are so sweet together ❤❤ I love James. But...why can't he just admit he was wrong and say sorry and abandon the rule...I guess Roxy and Archer did have that fight and Fred is still crazy. But that can be fixed! I think...I'm optimistic. Fred will have to learn sooner or later that his sister is going to date people. And Roxy and Archer should forgive James for causing their fight. They're all young, they make mistakes. I'm not sure I agree with Roxy and Rose about how Archer should've quit the team to be with her. I do think he should think she's more important to him than his sport, but he shouldn't have to give it up. Just because he doesn't want to quit quidditch doesn't mean he doesn't care about her. And maybe that's what he wants his career to be. It's not an easy choice to give it up if he's not sure he'll be with his girlfriend forever but thinks he wants to play quidditch for life. But I suppose I can't really judge either way because I'm not in Archer's head and I don't know why quidditch is important to him.
Rose ans Scorpius are a mess...and they're both a little loose and a little rash to be honest. They just go kiss people when their original plan doesn't work out. So maybe Fose thought Scorpius was done with her for good. And she was upset and drunk and wanted someone new. But she had to know Scorpius would find out about it and that it would hurt his feelings. He told her he didn't want to date her, but he did say he still cared about her. He said he didn't want to get hurt by her anymore...I guess she's not trying too hard to convince him otherwise. But I do sympathize with Rose, don't get me wrong. I can see how she made her way to that mostly bad decision. It was still a bad decision though...
Albus is a sweetheart and Ray is the coolest ❤❤ they're kind of my special favorite :)
I don't think either one of them is in the wrong (that kind of applies to all the couples to some degree) but they're both driving me crazy because they really just need to talk it out. And Cecilly needs to break up with Albus for her old boyfriend or something just to make everyone's lives easier. Ray/Albus forever ❤❤
And I'm glad Eve is blowing Fred off because she doesn't deserve him. He's fantastic :)
I really liked this chapter because it was romantic and relatable. The awkwardness between James and Stella and how they had no clue what the other's vague statement meant reminds me of real life and all the communication issues we have all the time, especially at this age. Neither of them really wanted to give too much away to make themselves overly vulnerable when they didn't know what to expect from the other. But when you don't make you thoughts and feelings clear no one knows what's going on. I think you show good reasons to just brave the rejection or embarrassment or whatever comes. Because otherwise you get this big fun mess.
Update soon!! Report Review
James and Stella! I absolutely love them!
Rose kissing Luke? :O POOR SCORPIUS!
And what's going to happen because Roxy finds out? D: Report Review
Hello! The giant squid is awesome! :P Anyway, AGGGH SCORPIUS! I feel so bad for him and then there's Roxanne and Albus and everything is so MESSY!!! AGHHH
Good job though :) Can't wait for the next chapter. Report Review
OMG THIS IS LITERALLY SO EXCITING I LOVE THIS STORY OMG SRSLY WOW. YOU AMAZING WRITER, YOU.
OO THE PLOT THICKENS.
also i really loved this quote :
Rose looks over from where she's sitting at her dressing table, and shouts, "Fred, the eighties called. They want their embarrassing prom night back."
Fred rolls his eyes, "Rose, the nineties called. They want their incredibly lame joke back."
"How about you get better comebacks?"
"How about you get a better face?" Report Review
So much drama! Things are getting intense. I feel like everything is leading to the climax and I'm just waiting for everything to explode. I really do hope that Scorpius and Rose work everything out and that they get together. This is one of the few stories where I can handle the drama even though I want to pull out my hair because of it. Report Review
FULL IF EMOTION
STUPID RULE MAKE IT GO AWAY Report Review
Really loved this chapter! Report Review
So I am not sure how I am feeling about this chapter. I like that James and Stella are talking again and for once James actually came and talked to her instead of them both avoiding each other. And Roxanne finding them! I was laughing at that point because it just had to be Roxanne. So that is all great drama and good James/Stella moments.
However, I am not liking that Rose and Luke moment at the end. Especially since I have been waiting so long for Scorpius and Rose to get together and they were so close. Not good.
Albus's jealousy was really funny to read. I wonder what will happen there because Fred is just crazy and unpredictable.
Anyway, please update soon! Report Review
I absolutely love this story. I love Stella. I love James. I love Stella and James together even though they haven't really been together because they can't get themselves together. I just love all of this. I hope that the next chapter has more interactions between James and Stella. Anyway please update soon! Report Review
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