DUDE CONTINUE PLEASE THIS IS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF ART. I CAN FEEL THE WORRY THAT TRULY FEELS WHEN SHE Can't SEE OMGOMGOMG ILY. JUST FINISH THE STORY. AALSDIDKSSDFTHKKL. Report Review
Please write some more!!! I love this!! Report Review
Haha! I love it! Remus and Truly are so adorable! I NEED more chapters! Report Review
OMG, this is the best Remus/OC that I have ever read. I love Truly, her character is so interesting and the way you have written Remus is so good. I had to stop myself from laughing out loud in some cases in order for my family to not draw the conclusion that I'm crazy hahaha. Anyway this is great and I'm already addicted to this story so I need more. Please write another chapter soon! Report Review
cool story... hope you update soon Report Review
oh my god you cant just leave us hanging here! i want more please you are doing exelent keep up the amazing work! Report Review
Well written, planned out, and I have to say- I love it. One of the best I've ever read. Report Review
oh no!! cliff hanger! i'm really excited to read more of this! i love how Remus is getting Truly to open up! it's great!! keep writing :) Report Review
Yay it's been awhile since I been in this site and to see this finally updated makes me happy.muh oh what's happening to truly dun dun Dun Report Review
I liked it! I adore your Truly and lurrrve your Remus. I wish he was my Remus. Poor Sophie, though. I hope things don't get too bad between them.
Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot especially since I love your story so much. The fourth chapter is waiting to be validated, so it shall be up as soon as that happens! Report Review
Your writing style is so unique! I definitely loved the first two chapters. Please update soon! Report Review
I agree with Katie(other reviewer) This story is different in a good way! There are alot of stories that are boring with the same story every time.So Thank You for writing this story and Please Update soon!! Report Review
this is possibly the most fantastic story i have ever read on this whole site,;literally genius,usually i get bored of all the same stories written,all seeming the have the same plot just different names,but your's is well-written and intriguing. Report Review
Omigosh, I absolutely luuurrrvvveee it! So jealous in a good way; I'm glad you decided to write this. Update soon! Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Really, it's amazing.
Please update soon because I don't think I can wait much longer!
- Mariah. Report Review
:) I like this story alot, actually. Truly is a good character, and her name is certainly interesting.
A very good start to the chapter! Gosh, I love Remus.
I want him. :(
- Mariah. Report Review
That was AWESOME!!! I love the plot and the personality of Trudy, it was done really well, can't wait for chapter three! Report Review
This is really fantastic! I love Skins, and Effy in particular, but I never would've thought that it would work to bring a character like that (a "troubled, different" character) into the Hogwarts setting. But, clearly, it does!
I am very very very excited for this story to progress. Regardless of your writing style, I would be - it's just so intriguing. And it just so happens that I DO like your writing style as well (and I'm very picky)! Update soon :D Report Review
It's a great beginning ! You got me completely hooked :)
I love the way you characterize Truly, very original and intriguing, especially her quietness. It's refreshing, it changes from the usual clichéd-OC from the Marauders Era. The same goes for Remus.
Your writing is really good, too . Can't wait to see where this going !
Update soon, please !:) Report Review
Hmmm. Interesting - I have always loved Remus. It will be fun to watch you story unfold. Sirius is a bit mean to Truly. Hopefully he will lighten up a bit. Thanks for writing! Report Review
This was an exceptional beginning, the characters were well described and your o/c was rather unique and interesting. You should definitely continue this story. Keep the good work up! 10/10Author's Response: :) you review makes me happy!! Thank you for taking the time to review, and I hope you keep reading! Report Review
So I really like this, it's a good first chapter. :) Truly's character is rather unique, but I'm interested to learn more about her. I like your characterization of the Marauders, Sirius is a right git, and James is too. Peter admires them, and Remus takes his place as the most mature of the bunch. So, overall it's pretty good, and I right expected Truly to smack Sirius when she was trying to leave!
One thing I have to say, though, the beginning is a little discouraging because it's just one long paragraph. Split it up a bit, not just for grammar, but because one thick paragraph is really intimidating when you start a story. It's hard to follow eventually because of all the lines, but I'm glad I did! This is a good start, and I'm hoping to see more of it soon! :)
-Hunter :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it, I'm about to put the second chapter into the cue, and the paragraphs I believe are broken up a little more, thank you so much for your notes and compliments :D Report Review
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