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Review #1, by Dark Whisper You can't always get what you want
20th June 2011:
Ahh! *screams loudly* Ahh!

I loved it! But she didn't really mean FOREVER... did she?

Such a tiny short fic... that packs a real punch!

My favorite lines... 'Even though we aren't together I feel a claim over him. I don't want him to be with anyone other than me, which is selfish of me, because I refuse to be with him.'

Oh my goodness!

You did a REALLY great job capturing a real longing... but of the smouldering kind that is sizzling hot!

How did she refrain herself... I mean... 'just this once'? Gah!

Super sweet job!
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: thank you so much! and who knows if she meant forever?? haha. I don't know how she resisted either, because I know I most certainly wouldn't. lol

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