im really liking your story so far and looking forward to the following chapters.

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Don't worry I love decorating to but the mirror in kreaturs room is a little strange

Author's Response: Why is it strange? Thanks for reviewing!

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Mrs Weasly bit was good so don't worry the story so at is good just wanna see what happens next

So just few typos and r u British or American because some of the tenses and expression are confusing but that might be translation ( if you get what I mean )

Keep on with the story please and don't take what I'm saying as mean it was supposed to be constructive :)

Author's Response: I am American. I will look it over and see if I can change a few things. Thanks for reviewing!

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This is probably my favorite HP fan-fiction. You're a good writer! The story line fallows the original very well. I cant wait to read the rest! :)
Oh and this sentence is kind of confusing. It's a run on and you use a moment way to much. "A moment later his trunk was shoved up beside him and in the next moment later his trunk was shoved up beside him and in the next moment the Aurors slammed the door shut."

Author's Response: I will change that. Thanks for pointing it out. :)

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Amazing !! truly great. You r doing a fantastic job continuing the story were it was left in the original novel... Wow..

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the huge compliment!

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I LOVED the decorating. i always do in any book, it might just be me.

but my only concern is what happened to all the stuff? just curiosity asking what happened to it?

Author's Response: I mentioned that everything that wasn't magical or dark was donated to a muggle second hand store. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it.

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you need a humorous relief. the books had fred and goerge or Ron. you need someone able to make a joke about getting an ear blown off! and what happened to goerge? he was bigger in the books and now he's almost gone. i do like this chapter though. not all perfect which is perfect, if that makes sense. THANKS FOR WRITING!!!

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i always thought molly would ask harry to call her mom and dad, not molly and Arthur.

anyways, these are awesome and entertaining and awesome!

i always imagine harry getting a dog like snuffles!

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it says on lily's letter "your mother's jewels" wouldnt it just say "my jewels"?

i know thats barely anything

and also, in the first book i thought he inherited the family fortune?

and just curiosity, what happens to the lestranges money and other death-eaters money?

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harry's speech to Goerge: it jusst doesnt sound natural, if that makes sense. Harry usually deals with things like this by getting shouting if u look at the books. he doesnt do with the calm speech sorta thing. but goerge pnching him, that i think would have happened.

but it really good! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

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I thought you did a very good job with Ms. Weasly, however the 5th book is skipped out of that part. Also, you might want to mention how she thinks Harry saved half the family (Arthur, Ron, Ginny) and is grateful.

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You're doing great.love it

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Your writing is amazing. The last paragraph honestly brought me to tears

Author's Response: I'm glad to here that I am reaching out to people. Thanks!

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Great story! I like the length of the chapters and can't wait for a new chapter. :D Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying so, and responding!

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So far your story is incredible!! I absolutely love it

Author's Response: I am so glad to here it! Thanks!

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This is my favorite chapter so far!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!

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Very good so far. Really enjoying the read so
far

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Needs more Harry/Ginny and over all this is great but you should have harry and ginny sneake out after hours next chapter

Author's Response: This story is more family/adventure then romance between Harry and Ginny. It will be there, but not overwhelming. Thanks for reviewing!

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Miranda Jones,
Your story is so good. You have made it both simple and complex. I was thinking that any minute someone was going to get help for Harry.(This is an increasing popular plotline in AtB stories.) Perhaps part of his reluctance stems from growing up and treated as someone tainted. He also knows that everything he does is reported. Someone needs to convince him that this is needed.
As for the hooded man? I thought maybe an Auror in disguise. Since Gawain didn't own up to it, either it wasn't or he wants to test Harry. It could be three other possibilities. A DE. but he wouldn't have hesitated to hex Harry. Perhaps this is Ritas way of finding out info on Harry. One other possibility, someone you are bringing into the story that we'll find more about. Please don't keep us hanging. Plese post soon!
FoM

Author's Response: Stay tuned to see who the hooded man is! And thanks for the complements. I try. I will update once my betas and I have finished reviewing previous chapters. Thanks for reviewing!

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Welcome back. I was so happy to see you again. Back on track again. Harry's problem should be fun :)

Author's Response: Glad to see that you're happy I updated. Thanks for reviewing.

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Post something please

Author's Response: As I said in my author note, I am currently reviewing my previous chapters with my two beta readers. Once we have gone through everything, I will start posting some new content. Thanks for reviewing.

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I really like this storie and chapter please
Write a new chapter I really can't wait for it!!
(maybe Ginny will be really worried about him
And she helps him with his thearapy? Just an idea
I ship Hinny In case you can't tell.) bye

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for the complements! I will keep your suggestions in mind.

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Very good chapter, wonder who the hooded figure is.

Author's Response: As I said in my author note, I am currently reviewing my previous chapters with my two beta readers. Once we have gone through everything, I will start posting some new content. Thanks for reviewing.

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more I love this
Story and I want to find out what happens!!! I ❤ this story!

Author's Response: As I said in my author note, I am currently reviewing my previous chapters with my two beta readers. Once we have gone through everything, I will start posting some new content. Thanks for reviewing.

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Brilliant chapter ! ! ! ! ! now get to RE WRITIN !! LOL

Thanks

DAVE

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