It says we can't sumbit STORIES yet, I suppose we can post reviews. I loved this fic! 'Harry will talk to Draco. A man to a ferret.' I was laughing so hard when I read it. I'm writing this review several hours after reading the story and I still remember it. Haha. There was another good one when Fred was talking about whether they had in store for Draco was legal or not. He said he's not even sure if it's legal in this continent. Haha. Great!!!
The characters weren't really in character, but given the genre, I don't think it was your intention at all to keep them in character (and frankly, I don't think it's possible to write comedy and keep those characters in character, except maybe when it comes to Fred and George, but you did a great job with them anyway!).
I must say I usually avoid humourous fics, but I absolutely enjoyed this one. It was really relaxing.
Another detail I loved: Patil twins marrying Fred&George. Recently I started shipping them and already I ran into a fic featuring them. Great job!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed this fic so much! Who knows, I might write more with Patils/W. Twins... I may not exactly ship them, but it's so easy to write them together. Report Review
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