Reading Reviews for Deteriorate
  
344 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Emily Confession

19th May 2013:
It was great to get a new chapter hoping for another update soon!

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Review #2, by rogue_bludger Confession

18th May 2013:
LOVE! and I'm really hoping you update soon!
~M

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Review #3, by rogue_bludger The Issue With Weasleys

18th May 2013:
I love this! this is such a great story. Your main character is awesome, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. The only thing is, I think you went through all the weasleys super fast and that left me with a bit of a weasley overload for about a paragraph. Other than that though, I love this!
~M

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Review #4, by miluv Confession

18th May 2013:
OMG SHES ALIVE! Lol, okay, love the chapter as usual, but you gotta update more! Summer's coming so mybe you'll have more time? :)

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Review #5, by SourGrapeSnape Confession

18th May 2013:
This story is really great. You've developed the characters and the story is believable. I can only hope now that you won't abandon this, because I need to know what happens next.

Great work :)

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Review #6, by AlexFan Confession

18th May 2013:
PRAISE THE LAWD THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER! Okay, so I understand that you were in College but I'm still happy that there's a new chapter.

I actually forgot what had happened in the last chapter so I had to go and skim over it to make sure I knew where I was. But anyway! I loved the ending where James and Ara make up (I'm assuming that they made up). It's been so long. Please tell me that they've made up and that they're back to being friends.

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Review #7, by camilla Confession

18th May 2013:
yay another chapter!! keep on writing i love love love your story! and congrats on surviving your first year of college! :D

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Review #8, by the ghost reader Confession

18th May 2013:
just to tell u, still around and read this story, its too good to give up, welcome back!!!

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Review #9, by nott theodore The Battle

14th March 2013:
The match was fantastic! It was written much better than the majority of matches I read on here, and they really are difficult to write! You captured the tension and the determination exactly, and the sense of desperation towards the end. Plus the commentary was hilarious!

I'm very intrigued about what caused the fight between Turner and James, although I have my theories on that. As for Stacey, I think someone's a little jealous...

Great chapter!

nott theodore :)

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Review #10, by nott theodore The Issue With Weasleys

14th March 2013:
Hello!

I've read about this story on the forums and it sounded really good so I thought I'd give it a read, and I'm very glad I did!

This chapter was so funny and I love the characters already, especially listening to Rina's thought process. I'm adding this story to my favourites!

nott theodore :)

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Review #11, by StormStone The Truth About the Scar

4th March 2013:
So good!! But it would be even better if you would update... pwetty pwease!? I really want to see what james' reaction is! Update quickkk
-Grace

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Review #12, by loony_lovegood101 The Truth About the Scar

12th February 2013:
PLEEEAAASSSE UPDAAATE!
THIS STORY IS AAAMAZING AND IT'S A LIFE OR DEATH SITUATION.

PLLLEEEAAASSSEEE?

THANKS :D :D :D :D

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Review #13, by Jane The Truth About the Scar

22nd January 2013:
Please post the next chapter this story is amazing and I'm addicted to it I need more (it's like my drug haha I'm high off of your story hahaha) please !

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Review #14, by Loop The Truth About the Scar

15th December 2012:
OH MY DEAR MERLIN! (see what i did there)

ONCE AGAIN I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH A NEW FANFIC!!! URGGHHH WHY MUST YOU STOP THE CHAPTER NOW??


YOU ARE EXTREMELY TALENTED (hence the capitals)

update soon!!!

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Review #15, by galaxy567 The Truth About the Scar

1st November 2012:
Oh my God. I am absolutely loving this story. This like the third time I've read it. I really hope you decide to update again.
xxx

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Review #16, by Eliza The Truth About the Scar

20th August 2012:
i love this story please update soon i need to know what happens next so please please update soon this is like my favorite story

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Review #17, by cathilde The Truth About the Scar

8th August 2012:
GAYTFEYTEQFREWTFRFE! HE FINALLY KNOWS! WHGSDIYWRGFYERFG!!! AND THEY'RE FRIENDS AGAIN AND AKSHFSUAGYRGHFUI!

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Review #18, by Kathrynen The Truth About the Scar

1st August 2012:
Hey, so this story is great, it's really well written and the characters are interesting and well developed so would you PLEASE update? Thankyou (:

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Review #19, by rachelnn Idiot “Friends” and Ara’s Improving Mood

6th June 2012:
I just want to say, I love your Rose. People always tend to write her in a Hermione like fashion and I liked the fact last chapter she was screaming obscenities and has the Weasley temper and attitude :)

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Review #20, by Ally Blur

31st May 2012:
Im so confused!! You have sooo many characters and i cant keep track of them all! Also u skip places so i get confused AUGH!!!

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Review #21, by ChocolatSugar Broken

31st May 2012:
Maybe im just slow or something but i dont understand why rina did quit. I mean is she scared of heights i mean wats going on?

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Review #22, by erinn1197 The Truth About the Scar

29th May 2012:
About time she told him what happened.
Great chapter :)

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Review #23, by shoveitsunshine The Truth About the Scar

28th May 2012:
I adore this story. Your heaps of character development (particularily with Allison) was amazing, and I loved how you managed to put so much detail into each and every chapter. Great job!

Also, I'm very glad that the truth has finally, /finally/ come out about what happened with James that night, and I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter to see his reaction...

PS; Rose and Scorpius are adorable, and asdfghjkl; - that is all.

(ack, I'm horrible with reviews...)

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Review #24, by Ravenclaw_Patil The Truth About the Scar

20th May 2012:
Upload pwease?! Great chapter :D

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Review #25, by Manu The Truth About the Scar

18th May 2012:
update please!! This is such a great story!! I love it!

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